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Shlup
06-02-2008, 06:43 AM
A month ago I posted that my boss asked me to design a new logo for our school. I showed her what I posted and... well, she didn't hate them but she basically asked me to start all over.

So I did, and now I want your opinion on some new stuff. I'm having a hard time with it because I like the stuff I already did, and this just isn't as good, but it's what she asked for so... meh.

Please let me know if something looks weird. BJ said nothing's disproportionate or anything but he dunno nothing.

Part I is here! (http://forums.eyesonff.com/artists-forum/116954-school-graphic-design-image-heavy.html)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/addemoticons864.gifLogo in Three Variations Which tongue is the right tongue?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/acacia/head09.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/acacia/logo10.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/acacia/logo11.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/addemoticons864.gifNew Business Cards

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/acacia/card04.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v54/ShlupQuack/acacia/card05.jpg
Marshall Banana
06-02-2008, 07:25 AM
I like the pink tongue most.
Shlup
06-02-2008, 08:09 AM
BJ said if I go with the pink tongue he'll never help me with anything again.
NeoCracker
06-02-2008, 09:28 AM
1) Your boss's are retarded, those other ones are far better.

2) Go for the one in the middle of those 3.

3) You're boss's are REALLY retarded.
Balzac
06-02-2008, 01:18 PM
Did you draw the banner yourself? If so, you might want to fix it a little. It look a little bobbley. Also, change that font, it's terrible.
Shlup
06-02-2008, 03:50 PM
Yeah, the banner needs to be cleaned up. Screw you on the font though! It's classic.
rubah
06-02-2008, 05:27 PM
that's like, the school mascot font. It's on all banners and trophies and everything.

I like the pink tongue. Just tell bj it's 'mango melon'
Dynast-Kid
06-02-2008, 05:27 PM
1) Your boss's are retarded, those other ones are far better.

2) Go for the one in the middle of those 3.

3) You're boss's are REALLY retarded.

Yeah, I definitely agree with Neo! Those other ones were awesome!

And I really like the second business card!
Polaris
06-02-2008, 07:36 PM
The third one is better! I am not still found of the font on the cards but that's just me! ^^ The structure is perfect! Honestly if they turn down this one just give up let them pay another guy! Sometimes people are hard to please in design world :( and that's really frustating

like this
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n13/Adeselna/card05_EXP1.jpg
Shlup
06-03-2008, 03:49 AM
OMG OMG OMG

Today I went to show her this new one, and she said the old one has "grown on her" and decided to use that one. ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe it's just because she doesn't like the new one and doesn't want to wait through me designing another one though. Which is kind of sad because the old one I copied and this one I hand drew.
Marshall Banana
06-03-2008, 04:01 AM
Squirt Capri Sun up her nose, Plum. :gruffi:
Shlup
06-03-2008, 04:46 AM
B-but I mustn't waste precious Capri Sun!

How about Nesquik? I'll bet that burns.
Marshall Banana
06-03-2008, 08:50 AM
VINEGAR (it reeks)! I'll drink the Nesquik.
Polaris
06-03-2008, 11:20 AM
OMG OMG OMG

Today I went to show her this new one, and she said the old one has "grown on her" and decided to use that one. ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe it's just because she doesn't like the new one and doesn't want to wait through me designing another one though. Which is kind of sad because the old one I copied and this one I hand drew.

lol oook that was weird! ^^ But oh well at least it's over :) I thought designing for a school was way easier ^^ Here in Portugal our logos are really stupd we don't use animals just combine different images! :) Tht's something really cool in America:D
Balzac
06-03-2008, 01:03 PM
Welcome to the design world. I have this so many times I can't count.
sirusdesign
12-12-2008, 06:48 PM
Your logo for school any thing related to graphic design.
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scrumpleberry
12-12-2008, 07:33 PM
Thanks for that.

(Indecisive superiors are the most annoying people on the planet.)
black orb
12-13-2008, 04:02 AM
>>> The new ones are the best, it would be a shame to not use them.