Marth MS Paint Drawing

[Evastio]

Yeah, so since the internet wasn't working one time this week and I was bored I decided to draw a picture of Marth (from Fire Emblem and Super Smash Bros.) in MS Paint.

http://forums.eyesonff.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=29957&d=1238203636

[Momiji]

The clothes look good, but let's see some color!

Try making his left elbow more angled, it kind of looks like a piece of macaroni.

You could try using the line tool to make his sword straighter.

[bizlist]

its a new technology, will hope to get bigger soon. its a good post.
:quina:

[Meat Puppet]

I agree with bizlist.

[Leeza]

I think that is really good. I can't do anything in MS Paint myself, especially anything that resembles a straight line.

[gslim]

:quina:the thing you are expressing ok, i also excemine the on fully to know all details. any way its a nice post. all the best :ariel:

[Jirito]

He's cute. It's very long time since I used MS paint drawing things. You should throw a color in it to see if it looks cuter or becomes a cool knight. ;) Also the hand should be fixed, make it grips the sword because now looks like it glues with the sword.

[Evastio]

Thanks for the comments guys.

I don't really understand bizlist's post though.

The clothes look good, but let's see some color!

Try making his left elbow more angled, it kind of looks like a piece of macaroni.

You could try using the line tool to make his sword straighter.
Whenever I colour my pictures, they tend to lose their "Hand Drawn MS Paint" Touch, which I want to try to keep. I avoid both colouring my pictures and using the straight line tool because of that.

As for the elbow, I'm not really sure what I can do to make it less like macaroni, while keeping the "Hand Drawn MS Paint" Touch.