Suvious
04-16-2009, 10:57 AM
Ok guys I got a freaking tonne of essays to write :P Could anyone give me a few improvements? Here's the fast half of my Romeo and Juliet essay!
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Explore The Dramatic Devices & Qualities presented in Act III Scene I of Romeo And Juliet<o:p></o:p>
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Throughout this essay, an exploration of dramatics devices & qualities shall occur in the tragic-comedy of [I]William Shakespeare’s “Romeo & Juliet’s” Act III Scene I in order to assess how they affect the play and the audience, thus improving the play as a whole. This essay shall therefore present each quality with appropriate evidence to support the effects.<o:p></o:p>
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The play is foretold in the prologue, thus giving the audience a basis in which to fear what is to come; such a foretelling in the prologue gives the audience the irony of the tragedy. The narrator gives his prophetic speech about “star cross’d lovers” in the prologue, this provides adequate evidence for a tragedy as it foreshadows the lovers fate. The events are tragic, yet the play is only truly made a tragedy by the prologues foreshadowing; a tragedy is where an inevitable, yet sad, sorrowful, remorseful etc. event occurs. This event cannot be changed by any means, and is therefore a tragedy.<o:p></o:p>
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In this play, Act III Scene I is believed to be the pivotal scene wherein the plays genre changes from a comedy, to a tragedy; though the prologue foretold its tragic ending the play remains generally comical until this point. Benvolio begins the scene acting as a character-narrator, he provides the necessary means for Mercutio to deliver information to the audience; however, Benvolio begins foreshadowing the scene by warning Mercutio they would not “scape a brawl”. The scene progresses with Mercutio and Tybalt engaging in banter, questioning each others sexuality with various comments and sexual innuendo, gradually escalating with antagonism & reaction. Thus, a fight occurs between Mercutio and Tybalt resulting in Mercutio’s death. He proceeds to swear a plague on both the Capulets and the Montagues with his final breaths. Romeo having lost his friend, then goes on to kill Tybalt, resulting in Romeo’s banishment. This banishment represents the plays turn of events, as Romeo may not enter <st1:city><st1:place>Verona</st1:place></st1:city> again without violating the law, nor may Juliet leave without dishonouring her family.
Remember - I'm in high school! Nothing too flash - I'm also English so I have all my 'U's'
<o:p></o:p> Wtf where did all those faces come from? Haha
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Explore The Dramatic Devices & Qualities presented in Act III Scene I of Romeo And Juliet<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Throughout this essay, an exploration of dramatics devices & qualities shall occur in the tragic-comedy of [I]William Shakespeare’s “Romeo & Juliet’s” Act III Scene I in order to assess how they affect the play and the audience, thus improving the play as a whole. This essay shall therefore present each quality with appropriate evidence to support the effects.<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
The play is foretold in the prologue, thus giving the audience a basis in which to fear what is to come; such a foretelling in the prologue gives the audience the irony of the tragedy. The narrator gives his prophetic speech about “star cross’d lovers” in the prologue, this provides adequate evidence for a tragedy as it foreshadows the lovers fate. The events are tragic, yet the play is only truly made a tragedy by the prologues foreshadowing; a tragedy is where an inevitable, yet sad, sorrowful, remorseful etc. event occurs. This event cannot be changed by any means, and is therefore a tragedy.<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
In this play, Act III Scene I is believed to be the pivotal scene wherein the plays genre changes from a comedy, to a tragedy; though the prologue foretold its tragic ending the play remains generally comical until this point. Benvolio begins the scene acting as a character-narrator, he provides the necessary means for Mercutio to deliver information to the audience; however, Benvolio begins foreshadowing the scene by warning Mercutio they would not “scape a brawl”. The scene progresses with Mercutio and Tybalt engaging in banter, questioning each others sexuality with various comments and sexual innuendo, gradually escalating with antagonism & reaction. Thus, a fight occurs between Mercutio and Tybalt resulting in Mercutio’s death. He proceeds to swear a plague on both the Capulets and the Montagues with his final breaths. Romeo having lost his friend, then goes on to kill Tybalt, resulting in Romeo’s banishment. This banishment represents the plays turn of events, as Romeo may not enter <st1:city><st1:place>Verona</st1:place></st1:city> again without violating the law, nor may Juliet leave without dishonouring her family.
Remember - I'm in high school! Nothing too flash - I'm also English so I have all my 'U's'
<o:p></o:p> Wtf where did all those faces come from? Haha