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Precious Garnet
11-09-2009, 01:13 AM
Sorry I had to take picture from my cell. This is basically what the thread title says.

There's something about her face that does not look like Lightning, but I can't seem to figure it out. And I was wandering if anyone has any advice? Thanks!!

rubah
11-09-2009, 01:23 AM
Her upper lip is too full, her eyes not deep-set enough, and you should bring out the bridge of her nose?

pretty good likeness otherwise, though

Quindiana Jones
11-09-2009, 01:39 AM
Mouth is too narrow and her lips are supposed to be slightly open, not pursed.

Either way, it's an incredible drawing.

Christmas
11-09-2009, 12:39 PM
Very nice sketch! :bigsmile:

Raistlin
11-09-2009, 02:20 PM
The nose is the main thing I noticed. It's a little too small and rounded compared to the picture. Smaller point: your ear is more pointed.

But has already been said, it's a great drawing.

vinnie's mini's
11-09-2009, 03:13 PM
Everything I could see has already been pointed out xD

A very beautiful sketch regardless. ~Thumbs up~ :3