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03-03-2010, 06:30 PM
Just post or discuss your interesting fan fiction finds! Whether it be the rare excellently written fanfiction or the so bad it's good My Immortal type, post it here!
Currently I'm reading Light and Dark The Adventures of Dark Yagami (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4615680/1/Light_and_Dark_The_Adventures_of_Dark_Yagami), a Death Note fan fiction. Here's the beginning of the first chapter:
It was a hot day and Light came home from school. As he got to his house he saw a strange car outside and he knew immediately it was not American because the wheel was on the wrong side. He walked in the front door to find his dad Soichiro and his mom (AN: I cant remember her name sorry!). They looked surprised to see him.
"Mom dad what's going on?" Light asked them.
"Light we have something to tell you" said his dad while playing with his mustache.
"This is your twin brother Dark Yagami" they both said together, and pointed to the guy in the corner of the room.
Dark looked exactly the same as Light except that he had black hair and was dressed like Mello (but Light hadn't met mello yet so he didn't know that ;-) ). He got up and walked across the room.
"Hi bro! I'm Dark!" he said lolling and offered his hand to shake.
"How could you not tell me about this!?" Light shouted like mad.
"We sent him to a top secret orphanage in Whales (its a town in England) where he would learn to be the next L. We can't tell anyone because its top secret and kira might find out and Kira might try to kill him" his mom said.
Light was crazy and punched table.
"I'm going to my room! Come on Sayu!" he said and Sayu (Light's sister lol!) followed him upstairs.
"I'm sorry light I wanted to tell you about Dark but mom and Soichiro wouldn't let me."
"That's ok!" Light replyed "Your my sister and I know how much you love me!"
"Thanks Light!" they hugged.
"I hope I'm not interrupting anything!" It was Dark.
"Come on Dark I've got something to show you" Light said and they went into their room (Light's parents had made light's bed into a double bed (I know what your thinking sickos no theres no slash!)).
Light put the pencil in the door to stop people listening and said "I'm Kira".
Dark immediately shooted "I know it!"
"Your a worthy successor to L I know why your his successor now." Light said.
"Don't worry bro I wont tell anyone. In fact I have a death note of my own." Dark replied pulling a blood red notebook out of pants (he put it there in case his bags was searched).
"Hey your death note is a different colour to mine" he said pointing to the black death note in Light's draw.
"Stop saying colour! Your in America now! Its color!" Light replied exaspirated.
"Sorry lol" Dark said.
"This is my shinigami" he said and light saw a big monster appear. He was like twice the size of Ruyk and had a big mowhawk made of blood and skulls. Even Light was scarred of him. He was eating bananas like Ruyk ate apples but they were blood bananas made of blood.
"He's big" said Light as the shinigami bit down on a blood banana "What's his name/"
"MY NAME IS BLUD" said Blud as he kept eating the blood banana "I AM THE NEW KING OF THE SHINIGAMI AND I HAVE A SPECIAL DEATH NOTE THAT KILLS ANYONE WHOS NAME IS WRITTEN IN IT EVEN IF YOU DONT KNOW THERE FACE OR NAME"
Currently I'm reading Light and Dark The Adventures of Dark Yagami (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4615680/1/Light_and_Dark_The_Adventures_of_Dark_Yagami), a Death Note fan fiction. Here's the beginning of the first chapter:
It was a hot day and Light came home from school. As he got to his house he saw a strange car outside and he knew immediately it was not American because the wheel was on the wrong side. He walked in the front door to find his dad Soichiro and his mom (AN: I cant remember her name sorry!). They looked surprised to see him.
"Mom dad what's going on?" Light asked them.
"Light we have something to tell you" said his dad while playing with his mustache.
"This is your twin brother Dark Yagami" they both said together, and pointed to the guy in the corner of the room.
Dark looked exactly the same as Light except that he had black hair and was dressed like Mello (but Light hadn't met mello yet so he didn't know that ;-) ). He got up and walked across the room.
"Hi bro! I'm Dark!" he said lolling and offered his hand to shake.
"How could you not tell me about this!?" Light shouted like mad.
"We sent him to a top secret orphanage in Whales (its a town in England) where he would learn to be the next L. We can't tell anyone because its top secret and kira might find out and Kira might try to kill him" his mom said.
Light was crazy and punched table.
"I'm going to my room! Come on Sayu!" he said and Sayu (Light's sister lol!) followed him upstairs.
"I'm sorry light I wanted to tell you about Dark but mom and Soichiro wouldn't let me."
"That's ok!" Light replyed "Your my sister and I know how much you love me!"
"Thanks Light!" they hugged.
"I hope I'm not interrupting anything!" It was Dark.
"Come on Dark I've got something to show you" Light said and they went into their room (Light's parents had made light's bed into a double bed (I know what your thinking sickos no theres no slash!)).
Light put the pencil in the door to stop people listening and said "I'm Kira".
Dark immediately shooted "I know it!"
"Your a worthy successor to L I know why your his successor now." Light said.
"Don't worry bro I wont tell anyone. In fact I have a death note of my own." Dark replied pulling a blood red notebook out of pants (he put it there in case his bags was searched).
"Hey your death note is a different colour to mine" he said pointing to the black death note in Light's draw.
"Stop saying colour! Your in America now! Its color!" Light replied exaspirated.
"Sorry lol" Dark said.
"This is my shinigami" he said and light saw a big monster appear. He was like twice the size of Ruyk and had a big mowhawk made of blood and skulls. Even Light was scarred of him. He was eating bananas like Ruyk ate apples but they were blood bananas made of blood.
"He's big" said Light as the shinigami bit down on a blood banana "What's his name/"
"MY NAME IS BLUD" said Blud as he kept eating the blood banana "I AM THE NEW KING OF THE SHINIGAMI AND I HAVE A SPECIAL DEATH NOTE THAT KILLS ANYONE WHOS NAME IS WRITTEN IN IT EVEN IF YOU DONT KNOW THERE FACE OR NAME"