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Ranti
11-02-2003, 04:07 AM
I really don't have any drawing abilities on my own, I just make collages of others work. Here are two.

a FF8-themed collage~Rinoa, Squall, and Quisits (http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/ranti84/heartschosen.jpg)

and...

a gundam wing based collage~Relena and Heero (http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/ranti84/relena_and_Heero-_dreams_and_realitys.jpg)

sorry if they are a bit big. I have others but they are my earlier ones and so are pretty crappy. I'll post more as I can think of them, have time to make them, and that they are welcome here. ;)

Critique, respond plz.

Ultima Seraph
11-03-2003, 05:57 AM
The FF8 one has a nice concept, but I think it could be layed out better. I'd try blending it a bit more, Squall kinda sticks out too much... and the cloudiness(?) of Quistis and Rinoa on the left and right (respectively) is a nice effect, so maybe you should do something different with Squall and get rid of the Rinoa and Quistis faces above and below him. I think it's just a problem with getting it balanced... especially on the right side.

I really like the Gundam Wing one, too... but again, it seems a bit off balance... I don't really have any recommendations for that one... but... hm... maybe try to get the images so they're not so stretched out.

Hope that helps. ^^