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Kami
12-23-2003, 07:42 PM
I have no idea what to call it but who cares. Well I thought i'd like to share some krap wih you guys today!CC!

black orb
12-24-2003, 01:24 AM
>>> This is maybe your best draw, I love her skinny body, and all the other stuff.
Just try to draw a more realistic gun the next time..

Kami
12-24-2003, 02:17 AM
Eheh... i can't draw guns... ^_^;; I thin guys are better at drawing robotic junk and cars then females.

Ultima Seraph
12-24-2003, 04:55 AM
I think you should make her more curvy, give the girl some hippage! >D Also, the torso is a bit long, methinks, but if you add some hips, it'll probably take that away.

I LOVE the pencil work... x.x Dark, strong lines... very, very pretty.

Nice! I loves it!

Rainecloud
12-24-2003, 07:16 AM
That's a pretty sexy picture. Very nice. I like it.

Kawaii Ryűkishi
12-24-2003, 07:30 AM
She's too lanky and plain to be sexy, but she still looks pretty cool. But why is she shooting the ground so nonchalantly?

black orb
12-24-2003, 07:38 AM
Originally posted by Kami
Eheh... i can't draw guns... ^_^;; I thin guys are better at drawing robotic junk and cars then females.
>>> The gender does not matter, Clamp did some incredible mech art in "magic knight rayearth".. :D

Kami
12-24-2003, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by Kawaii Ryűkishi
She's too lanky and plain to be sexy, but she still looks pretty cool. But why is she shooting the ground so nonchalantly?

well, she wasn't intended to be shooting in the first place. But since i drew a crappy gun, i had to make it look cool so i drew sparks comming out of it. plus it gives her more of an "i can take you on" look.

Ouch!
12-24-2003, 04:53 PM
If you wanted to give her an 'I can take you on' look, I would change her eyes a bit. They look almost passive, which contradicts the intention.

I love pencil drawings. My favorite when it comes to art.

kiki
12-27-2003, 11:15 PM
That is a beautiful picture, your shading and detail is so well done. A very neat image.

Rayne
12-27-2003, 11:32 PM
OMG she's so cool *__*

Your lines are very nice, they give a professional look to it. ;] It's amazing on how much you've improved =D

Ares123
12-28-2003, 03:17 PM
That's really good. I like it alot. There are so many people who can draw kickass manga.

*ETERNAL FANTASY*
01-04-2004, 11:57 PM
looks great i like it!!!!!

Dr Unne
01-07-2004, 12:14 AM
The cross-hatching on her legs makes them seem flat. The shading style on her hair and boots for example is much better. It does look nice. Not realistic, but it's clearly not meant to be.