[A] Summoner Rydia

[Imperia]

It may not be too perfect, but here it is. :)

[TasteyPies]

Verry nice!

Things I like:

The shading in her neck and shoulders is verry nice.

Her sleeves look verry nice

Her face is verry nicely done, you have done this sort of thing before :D

The background design is cool

Things I would improve:

The flower looks more like the way we saw them when we were kids. Adding more peddels in a more complicated design like they are found naturaly owuld make it look more real.

Her stance doesn't look natural, I tried to stand like that myself and I almost felll over. :rolleyes2 If you moved her feet more to the right it might look more natural.

You have the concept of shading but you only have the two opposite tones, try some more midtones in between to make it look better.

When coloring in areas its important to color in one single direction like down and left or down and right (depending on what hand you use) This will take longer but you have to be patient to be succesfull in art. Unless you are one of those hippies that throws buckets of paint around and calls it "an expresion"

Her legs are too dark

I hope you understand im not trying to be mean or anything, im just giving constructive critisism.

[nik0tine]

I agree with everything tastypies has said.
overall, i say you did a good job. keep it up.

[Imperia]

Lol thanks. :)


I put nylon on her legs. I haven't had good education in art in high school like I was supposed to, but I'm working to improve.

[Armisael]

great job really.