Old Sketch.

[Tulmane]

This is an unfinished picture I was doing, nearly a year old. I've since stopped drawing altogether, but this is one of the few things I'm proud of. For a quick doodle, it turned out pretty well.

Footnote: For those of you who can't tell, that's supposed to be Aeris. =P

[TasteyPies]

I like, kinda haunting

Her shoulders are too broad, manly manly Aeris ;)

[Tulmane]

Like I said, unfinished, and it was probably 4-5 minutes in the making so I didn't really notice the proportion problems at the bottom. There's a lot that is erased from the bottom from when I was continuing and ended up looking terrible. Aside from the shoulder on the left, I personally like how everything shaped.

[Erased]

Nice.
I'm gonna hafta go with your shinai diagram though - that's great ^^