hey look it's my work

[gokufusionss1]

if i

[Martyr]

if i


That's the most intelligent, insightful, frighteningly witty and generally outstanding post I've seen since I clicked on this thread.

[Khaotic]

That's the most intelligent, insightful, frighteningly witty and generally outstanding post I've seen since I clicked on this thread.
Agreed. ^.^

[Dignified Pauper]

nope, i still don't think you got it, it's definitely more than words can describe... if i only knew the words to describe...

[Dking'squeen]

if i

I've never read anything so deep. I makes you think, sit and contemplate the meaning of the two words 'if i' I have never laid eyes upon such a work of art. Yuo should frame this and put it into a museum

[Necronopticous]

All I can say is WOW, are you a writer by profession? You've got some great stuff here, if I were you I would send this out to some major publishers and see if you can get some feedback. I see people get stuff published all of the time that's nowhere near as amazing as this. You've got a real talent, don't let it get away from you, keep up the good work! Looking forward to more.

[Shlup]

Its deep on several levels. The lack of capitalization of the "i" could indicate the letter i, which leaves so many possibilities open outside a referrence to the self.

I should submit this to my compository writing professor. He's have us write a three page pager on it.

[Kirobaito]

This is obviously plagiarism. I recall a John Denver song that went something like this:

If I had a day that I could give you
I'd give to you a day just like today
If I had a song that I could sing for you
I'd sing a song to make you feel this way.

I doubt this is just a coincidence. Such pure genius in poetry could only come from a man like John Denver.

[Trumpet Thief]

chaos: Man... that really touched me :(

[ninja-yuffie]

"if i" kool

[nik0tine]

You make my pathetic writing look sad. :(