[a] FFX Yuna

[alexholker]

Hey guys, I just thought I'd post this here. I've been working on the picture for around 3 days on-and-off. It was drawn using a 4*5 graphics tablet, procreate Painter Classic and GIMP 2.

Alex

[nik0tine]

The body is perfect, but the face looks like a menopausal old woman.

[alexholker]

Fair enough... do you have any suggestions as to how I could improve the face?

Alex

[nik0tine]

Um... actually no. I can't draw myself, and I know very little about that art form. However, you might try making her hair more brown. It looks as if she is graying. Also maybe change the expression on her face? She looks like a strict disciplinarian of sorts. Sort of... I don't know, sorry.

[alexholker]

Thanks for the suggestions... I'll see what sort of effect they have.

Alex

[alexholker]

Do you think this one is an improvement?

Alex

[nik0tine]

Yes, that is an improvement. However, there is something wrong about the face still. She seems like someone else. Sorry, don't mean to nit pick or anything...

[Dragon Ash]

Give the poor guy a break! The rest of her looks great. :D

Good job Alex :up:

[nik0tine]

Give the poor guy a break! The rest of her looks great.


The body is perfect, but the face looks like a menopausal old woman.

[finalheaven]

its pretty good ^_^..just make her hair flicked slightly more...to essuentate the movement. the neck goes straight upward..which is why it my look like a 'menopausal old woman..' o_O and the base of her chin is more angled..but seriously its good ..i doubt i couls achieve a better finish ..^_^

[nik0tine]

..i doubt i couls achieve a better finish ..^_^

I know I certianly couldn't. Seriously though, setting all of my criticisms aside for now, you are a thousand times better at this than I am. It isn't really that bad. Like I said, the body is perfect.

[alexholker]

Don't worry about hurting my feelings, I wanted critics of my work. Nobody improves by getting pats on the back.

I just want to say thanks to everyone who is making comments.

Alex

[finalheaven]

sorry..did i asy it was bad??/..sorry i dint mean that...what i meant to say that the way you finished it off wasreally good.and i dont think i could get it like that..o_O dam i have very bad english and i type to fast that i dont know what im saying somethimes.......^_^

[Agent Proto]

Oh wow! That's very nice. For a second, I thought you've used those cool blending coloring pencils, but done on the computer, I'm really impressed. :D

[Little Miss Awesome]

I think it's great! :D

[I Don't Need A Name]

Do you think this one is an improvement?
the face needs to have more detail and look more.....face like!