[A] Suggestive Artwork

[Agent Proto]

Yea, it's quite suggestive, but it's nothing too vulgar. This is the first time I penned a drawing before scanning, and I actually like the turnout. :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v356/proto3k2/yogirl.jpg

Any comments and critiques are welcomed.

[TasteyPies]

I like her gazongas.

*ahem*

It looks great, I love her jacket, lips, eyes and hair. They all look very well done.

My advice is to take your time. It looks like by the time you got to her legs and the lower right..uh...pubus region you wanted it finished and rushed a little bit.

[Yew-Yevon]

.....................................................................................um it looks good.

[nik0tine]

:banme

[FightClubFan#47]

Agent Proto, that image is quite nice. I am slightly worried that you have the power to picture what I'm thinking.

[fire_of_avalon]

You cross hatch, it makes me love you.

But her left leg (and by left I mean HER left, and my right) seems kind of off. The calf is too short or the ankle is too long. That, and I agree with Pies, it does look a little rushed at the bottom, because there's so much detail in the top, and not much texture or dimension... below the waist. :D

Yay!

[Agent Proto]

I don't cross hatch very often, but I felt it was appropriate here. And I agree about that I kind of rushed with the legs and bottom. xP Though, she does have leather panties, so I think I did that fine. xD

[Nicolas]

Excellent, Sexy Schoolgirl Jeff. Excellent indeed. It does seem like you rushed the lower body, but the upper body looks just great. And nice suggestive picture. It goes well with the pink layout and your sexy schoolgirl-ness.

[Yew-Yevon]

my blood kinda started to rush when i first saw it.....not many times when I get to see a good drawing that gets you sprung! :love:

[Gunblades]

by penning do you mean inking, if so it's always best to ink a picture and then scan it, theres more skill needed, but you can get such a clear crisp line.
good work

[Agent Proto]

I found out that it does. It also depends on the pen used. I'm glad I had a micopen with me, because those are better than normal pens for inking.

[Nod]

good picture. i particularly like the face, the fullness and deep red of the lips, the eyes are really good too. :D

[Az Lionheart]

...is it ment to be someone?

if so i cant tell who

if not then it is very good if it is all made up.

[Shlup]

What did I tell you about that drawing, Prot? There's LABIA! There is. Don't deny it!

[YukiKiro]

i get the impression "open nine to five, 20 bucks a pop". but its good though, i can't deny that.