[A] Three random sketches

[Shadow Nexus]

Yes, absolutely random

http://membres.lycos.fr/discepolo/muhammad.jpg

This is...Abulgualid Muhammad, a character I did for a role playing game I never played. His psyche (not his looks) are inspired on Abulgualid Muhammad Ibn-Ahmad ibn-Muhammad ibn-Rushd, wich is a very pedantic way of saying Averroes, an arab philosopher from the late middle ages. The physical look...I guess it's some kind of Prince of Persia in older version or something. Yes, yes, his left arm looks terrible, it's just some lines I did where I was going to locate the actual full arm, but...duh, it shouldn't really go there, it's too long.

http://membres.lycos.fr/discepolo/sabina.jpg

Since I suck at drawing women, I decided I should practice more, and I have been drawing a series of erotic pictures wich I don't post here for obvious reasons, but are good for practicing because it needs knowledge of female anatomy in several poses that are challenging to do. This is probably the worse of them all, and it's incomplete (that's why I can post it here, it really dosen't have the erotic parts done yet). OK, so I would really like critiques on this one, I do see her breasts are uneven, the hand is obviously incomplete, and there's something wrong about the neck, so if anyone could help with it...

It's Sabina, a character from Milan Kundera's famous novel "The unbearable lightness of being", wich I must say is a brilliant book, despite the rather presumptuous title.

http://membres.lycos.fr/discepolo/flumpyattack.jpg

And the last one. I don't know why I drew this, but I like it.

Anyway, critiques apreciated.

[Odaisé Gaelach]

I think that you might want to talk to an admin about posting up another picture of a woman, 'cause they might think that you're going too far.

Apart from that they look excellent, though a little incomplete - the faces are well done, but the rest of the body and clothes don't seem to be filled in enough.

[Shadow Nexus]

I think that you might want to talk to an admin about posting up another picture of a woman, 'cause they might think that you're going too far.

Too far for posting a woman with a hat?

[Odaisé Gaelach]

Doesn't look like she's wearing anything else.

[Croyles]

you can see two circular shaped lines as boobs, thats it. i think its fine.
btw,nice work!

[Calliope]

The lady pic is fine, because you haven't added any details. People posting anime and things are worse.

Excellent work, but you already knew that.

[Jojee]

They're nice. Will you be completing them? ^_^ The third one reminds me of Psy :p

[Xander]

Wooow. Really good. Especially the laydee.