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bipper
08-21-2005, 08:12 PM
I would like some advice/feedback on a drawing I have been working on.

I don't claim to be any good; but I would just like to know where is stand as a wannabe artist :) Please be brutally honest...

Well here it goes :) Just check out the link below plz.

http://www.riversedgecs.com/img-bin/Siene.gif

Thanks a tonner guys/gals/things

Bipper

EDIT: ok just put up a link as when i post it gets utterly huge :( Thx for any patience
nik0tine
08-21-2005, 09:23 PM
It's pretty good. Reminds me of Celes.
udsuna
08-22-2005, 01:09 AM
Head's too large in comparison to the shoulders/chest area. The lips don't outline correctly. And I don't personally like the "blurry" nature of it. Very good if a rough sketch, but you need to clean up final products.

Very good, none-the-less.
bipper
08-22-2005, 03:38 AM
Wee hee- thanks I will work on it some tonight :)

Celeseque eh? :D :D
She is so cool, i take that as a copliment! :)

Bipper
Rengori
08-22-2005, 03:52 AM
She reminds me of Seinea from Knights of the Zodiac. Coincidence? Also, it's quite large. You might want to make it smaller so it doesn't take so long to load.
Shimeng
08-22-2005, 09:14 AM
It's emotional, and I like the yellow tones ^_^

She looks werry peacefull - like she has just made up her mind, and now waiting for something.
Carlene
08-22-2005, 10:31 AM
I like ur pic. But I have to agree, the mouth is a bit off. But all in all it's great :D
bipper
08-22-2005, 01:27 PM
She reminds me of Seinea from Knights of the Zodiac. Coincidence?

Ah never heard of her... that sucks :( No she had no bearing on my drawing... or name...


She looks werry peacefull - like she has just made up her mind, and now waiting for something.
Exactly what I was looking for! At least I have her facial expression down :) ... cept for the mouth

Thanks for the feedback, I will work on it a bit (mouth area and redo the torso), then make it smaller and repost a new link tommorrow :)

Bipper
Rengori
08-22-2005, 01:31 PM
She reminds me of Seinea from Knights of the Zodiac. Coincidence?

Ah never heard of her... that sucks :( No she had no bearing on my drawing... or name...
Oh, that makes it even better.