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Shinramp158
12-21-2005, 02:52 AM
Here is a sketch of redXIII and cloud. Also theres a stipled picture of a car I did in my advertising and design class.

http://img483.imageshack.us/img483/3361/cloud5gn.th.png (http://img483.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cloud5gn.png)

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/587/red6mv.th.png (http://img473.imageshack.us/my.php?image=red6mv.png)

http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/9420/car36pj.th.png (http://img485.imageshack.us/my.php?image=car36pj.png)

Also please check out the orpg im working on.
http://ff7online.t83.net/ :choc:

TifaLockhart7
12-21-2005, 04:01 AM
I really like how you drew the car!!!

Rengori
12-21-2005, 04:11 AM
My advice would to be to make the pencil lines darker, as I can't see the drawing without highlighting it and making it blue. Otherwise, SHWEET! The first picture of Cloud I did I accidently made his legs to small. He looked like a midget.

Rase
12-21-2005, 07:13 AM
I'm with Rengori, you might want to try going back and making the lines darker, either with pencil, ink, or using a computer. Still, very nice artwork here. :)

Shinramp158
12-22-2005, 12:37 AM
thanks.:cool:

Sapphiresea
12-22-2005, 12:39 AM
Yeah wow, I like them, but I really like the car its Awesome!! :)

SummonerYuna
12-22-2005, 12:40 AM
That is wonderful!! Keep it up! ;)

ffxfreak93
12-22-2005, 01:00 AM
your good

Agent Proto
12-23-2005, 04:59 PM
Quite impressive. I like how you've done the car. Pointillisms are quite hard to achieve, but you've done a great job with that. Very nice on that.

~SapphireStar~
12-23-2005, 05:26 PM
Im in love with the car sketch! They are really good :D

Shinramp158
12-24-2005, 12:38 AM
Thanks:D .

Zeldy
12-24-2005, 01:07 PM
Wow. That car picture is really good o_o
Im hopeless at things like that, I'd just get lazy.

ff7+ff10 gurl 100
12-24-2005, 03:49 PM
If i could draw like that im sure i would get lazy.
And i am sure cuz i do :p

Shadow Bahamut
12-24-2005, 11:36 PM
hmm...it's good, and i hate to be a critic. but, i have to say that the char.s could do with some more detail, take a look at mine for example...
http://forums.eyesonff.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=18863&d=1134327369
i know mine are a little feint, but maybe, they can give you a little insentive..

good work on the car though!!

i'm sure you'll make good if you keep trying! :D

Coop
12-27-2005, 06:07 PM
those pic's r nice even though i like anime more that car wins it

Miriel
12-27-2005, 08:54 PM
I think stippling is massive fun, especially for someone like me who likes pointy objects coupled with stabbing motions.

But yeah, the car came out great. :)

Bowser
12-27-2005, 09:18 PM
I really like Red XIII and the car, but you should probably rework the shape of Cloud's arms. Bravo.

Tohru
12-30-2005, 10:35 AM
You are a really good drawer. I like to draw a lot of anime and FF. I love the pictures:D

asukaevaunit02
01-06-2006, 12:55 AM
the car is good