Studio Sorceress Comic Page 1

[Lunareescence]

Yeah I have had this idea for quite a while now, uh I have never actually made a comic before yeah i'm like such a beginner

It is supposed to be funny
but I dont think it is because I have a weird sense of humour

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34001361/
well there it is

[Zeromus_X]

It's okay. You got all the little manga silly things they put in 'em all fine, it just needs to be structured better. Chibi-fying and sillying things like the writer of Fruit's Basket would go good for this, I'd think.

[moogle maniac]

once again go NZ, i could never make a comic so welldone

[Lunareescence]

Thanks peoples!

[Twilight Edge]

Pie.Humourous.;)

[Rengori]

Funny, but you could have gotten somewhere around 4 pages out of this. Look at manga, there's only about 5 panels on a page.

[Lunareescence]

Oh yeah! whoops I forgot about that, thought it seemed a little too much, I'll keep that in mind for the next page..which I really need to start