chii
06-23-2006, 12:13 AM
the light deem in her eyes are fading, the love for him has turnd in an uprore of hatred and betrayl. As she looks at the sky and takes her last breath all the anger and all she felt turnd to dust or snow , the rain washed all the tears from her closing eyes and the boy she once loved cryed "im sorry,im sorry" but the pleading apoliges where not helping her for she said"i love you even if you cheated"and sliped to the darkness where the rain sounded muffled and died in the darkness of her dreams and happyness. This is mine as an example i would really love it if you sumit yours.