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Marly
07-04-2006, 10:27 PM
I created this
Anyone suggest any improvements please? I used acrylics and water colours.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a273/BelfiCat/pic1.jpg
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a273/BelfiCat/pic2.jpg
Zeldy
07-04-2006, 10:31 PM
Wow.
^___^ That is so nice. I love it~
Sylvie
07-04-2006, 11:38 PM
Nice, I like it a lot.
assemblage
07-05-2006, 12:22 AM
that's from the MoaG advertisements, right?
you made it your own beautifully! there seems to be more dimension to yours than an overdone movie poster.
VoodooChild
07-05-2006, 01:13 AM
I really like that :) The colouring is lovely, and the image is gorgeous. Nice work
Craig
07-05-2006, 01:21 AM
What the hell, is that hair coming off the paper?
Marly
07-05-2006, 10:34 AM
:) Yes it is from MoaG. I copied it from the dvd case. And no, her hair is firmly stuck on the canvas, thankfully.
Marly, you asked for suggestions for improvements.
Firstly, thats a fantastic first go! Well done! You have shown sensitivity and emotion.
I think she needs a bit more colour in her face - a bit of blusher is always nice.
Re the eyes: remember that eyes are round balls resting in sockets and visable is the front part. Eyelids are usually always showing, and add to the 3 dimensionality.
A slight shadow on the underneath of the brow towards the curve of the nose would also enhance, but not too much as she has a quality of luminance and frailty about her which you want to retain.
A 'broken' dash of white or pink on the lips would add the gloss factor.
Hope these suggestions help.
Marly
07-13-2006, 06:57 PM
Thanks for the ideas. I was finding it rather hard to add more tone and shading to her skin as my white paint had actually ran out part way through painting, so I had a lot of difficulty making what I had (very little) last. Once I get some proper new paints I think I can work into her face more. Also - although I understand your comment about the eyelids, they were that way on the image I copied, so that's how I left them.
I also done this for my art GCSE. I had 10 hours to work on it, when I can finally bring it home I plan to fix the skin tone.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a273/BelfiCat/ttttttttttttt.jpg
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a273/BelfiCat/ttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.jpg
Shiny
07-14-2006, 02:11 AM
:whoa: Your art is so amazing. In the first one her eyes look so fantastic and her hair is so shiny. The second one is really beautiful. :strung: Almost as if it's 3D...*tries to touch it*
lovehurts
07-14-2006, 03:29 AM
I envy your painting talents. Very beautifull work. Thank you for sharing.
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