[A] Character Design i made

[atlanteay]

i drew this character in 30 min because i was constantly interrupted:eep: drawn with regular writing pencil. I was trying to make a new character for final fantasy and i came up with her. My first attempt to draw full body anime styled characters, so it's not good. The scanner software got messed up so i had to use the microsoft one which made the image look bad.
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1460/characterfixedsmall5pp.png

[Owen Macwere]

lol, nice. but she have got many details on her. good work though onlt 30 minutes awesume. ^^

[Twilight Edge]

Not bad.But as we all know,all FF characters have a weapon.So what's her's if I may ask?

[atlanteay]

she doesn't have to be carrying one you know:eep: besides... it's optional. She can be a mage or a fighter just like FFTA. She can change her career;)

[Zeromus_X]

I really like it, except for the feet. People just don't stand that way normally. They should be in front of her, or maybe one in front and one tilted or something.

Other than that, great drawing! :cat:

[atlanteay]

the paper was running out of room:p i'm bad at forethoughts....so usually my drawings lack lower body parts because i ran out of space on the paper:p i'll try to fix it.

[Owen Macwere]

yes I normally just draw heads ^^!. hands and feet are the worst things I draw.
good work, and well let's just remember you drew her in just 30 minutes. ^_~

[Rengori]

That's pretty cool, but why does she look like Leene?

[atlanteay]

she does??? lenne has long, straight hair with simple, one layer of clothing. Her boots are just plain boots and let's not forget the earrings. and she's wearing gloves (hard to see) instead of taht arm warmer thing lenne wears.

[Rengori]

It's mainly the shirt and the mini skirt.

And I hated X-2 so I'm not too observant of what they're wearing.

[Zeromus_X]

Ah! Good, you fixed the feet. Now it looks very good indeed. :) :cat:

[atlanteay]

It's mainly the shirt and the mini skirt.

And I hated X-2 so I'm not too observant of what they're wearing.
ok...

i hate x-2 too;) which is why i was :eep: about the drawing looking like lenne.... sorry:(

[Mr. Lawl]

Wow. This is a very good picture for 30 minutes work. It is very detailed. And for a first time full body shot this is wonderful! The only major ache I have with this is her neck... it's... a wee bit long. Other than that, the detail is excellent, it's very good as far as proportions go too. Just work on her neck, and the perspective of her clothing and you'll be all set. :)

Mr. Lawl

[Owen Macwere]

Yes, her neck is a bet long ^^. but the legs look great now. good work atlanteay.

[Jojee]

Legs too small ^^;

Good job.

[atlanteay]

uh oh.... the neck...gee how can i do this... guess i'll make her face longer.

[Rengori]

Sometimes starting over on a seperate sheet will do wonders. And occasionally it's wiser too.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

its pretty =) (but reeno cant see how people put so much detail in their characters i suck at that..."yea ill just slap on a blank t-shirt with baggy jeans" *my classic lines*)

[atlanteay]

aww thanks kid_chronocrossrules!! your drawings are so pretty you know!

hmm..i'll take rengori's advise and draw it again...only improving it, so make suggestions now before i draw it and then make another mistake again.:p

[superflyy]

I love the outfit! it's very original and detailed! and since its your first time for full bodied anime its really well done! the porportions are off but they're really good for your first!
Awesome!:choc2:

[abrojtm]

I like Lenne's shirt on Yuna's skirt/shoes with a different face.
Good work.

[Twilight Edge]

Did you purposedly cover her eyes with her hair?Because it seems a little troo long.

[atlanteay]

Did you purposedly cover her eyes with her hair?Because it seems a little troo long.
ya i did. Long bangs.

[Rocket Edge]

You have talent, this is lovely.