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Eiko Guy
07-28-2006, 05:38 PM
what do you guys think of albhed kid 0827 me and ff freak's final fantasy

Story
the story starts out with yuki and natie fighting off fiends like mercenaries do. when they get paid they find that they have another mission waiting. so when they get there they see that they are making a time gate and need extra security and that more people are there so when they start the mission they each meet a magical beast(yuki and natie) that grants them a power. Now they go on regular missions for a while until they go on a special mission and after they had beat the monster both natie and yuki hover and glow blue and make themselves a spiritual beasts and before you go anyfurther you go to spiritual council and meet gaia the earth's lifeforce and she tells them of their journey to over throw the magicians that own the world. now they go to a resistence and meet marquis and he helps them. so they overthrow one of the magicians liberating a country. when they try to defeat a next they meet gibraltor and he is defeated so when they destroy the magicians they he decides to travel with you and see if he can be come stronger. they go through the world and meet larca who helps them get transportation to the next magician and when they destroy him the last 2 magicians show up and send them to the end of time. Father tells them that the world plummeted into choas eventually with the nagicians fighting for power and destroying many lands with their power so he sends them back to their time and promises that if they ever call for him he will answer now he see's that the last two magicians are far too strong for the group he sends them into their respective time periods where their style of fighting began and tells them to train and become stronger so they can end the tyrany. they train and when they are done they each have to fight a sorcerer so you can get used to fighting different with them. when they all regroup they go to another magician and wih him down aesma starts doomsday so he will rein for the rest of eternity. this is when the team goes for the kill and when they enter the whole world warps they are beyond reality and they kill aesma and go on a mission and find out the magicians where being controlled by akira and when they destroy akira all things go back to before the mission and noone remembers anything

Playable Characters

Yuki-Leader of the group.Funny,caring and sometimes hot-tempered.She specializes in physical attacks
Weapons:Swords
class ninja

Natie-Sweet,soft-voice and sometimes shy.She specializes in white magic & summons
Weapons:gauntlets
Class martial artist

heliono-Loud,wild and never backs down from a challenge.He specializes in black magic
Weapons:Scythes
Class

Quismar-Smart,bookish and sarcastic.He specializes in brute strength
Weapons:Spears
Class Dragoon

Larca-Clueless(clumsy),peppy and sometimes over confident.He specializes in stealing and time magic
Weapons: Daggers
Class assasin


Spiritual Beasts
Earth Aeon-Gaia:A fanciful woman in elaborate green robes that seem to just flow out of herOverdrive:Tremor
she is your guide as she is your first aeon you get after the "incident"

Fire Aeon-Flamberge:A knight in red armour with a large sword made of fire
Overdrive:Ignition Inferno
you fight flamberge as a boss and when you use aries purifier (thats her special power oh and near the end we worry that shes got evil in here cuz shes sucked a lot out of bad guys ) he turns to flamberge because of leena power to bestow summon power

Water Aeon-Sobek:An olive skinned man in gold robes with a crocodile headress
Overdrive:Innundation
sobek is found when you go to niala on a quest searching where all the pyreflies went(remember the enemy is trying to make a monster to by turning themself into an aeon)he is found defeated outside the temple of a boss

Ice Aeon-Wendigo:A hairy ape like aeon adorned with lots of shiny golden jewelery Overdrive:Heart of Ice
wendigo is found when you defeat him by removing his choker mind control thingy and again purify sumon power

Thunder Aeon-Raiku:A wolf made of lightning Overdrive:Booming Thunder
raiku is found as natie pet and protects the girls by carrying them all to safety and they change him to an aeon cuz he acts like he wanted it to happen(first spiritual beast)

Wind Aeon-Kukulkan:A long green snake with six golden wings Overdrive:Gnashing Gale
kukulcan is found in luca attcking ppl at night and when natie is bitten he is beaten senseless by the other two then she sees his true self and changes him into the aeon and everyone is healed

Gravity Aeon-Orion:A tall man in a long blue cloak with a silver bow Overdrive:Crushing Compression
orion is found when they travel to space and the main baddie his name should be zera and he vrings those stars to life and when you defeat him boom summon

Time Aeon-Father Time:A bearded man in a maroon cloak holding an hourglass Overdrive:Eon Breaker
father time is when you are sent in to the end of time and yeah were into a whole new tech spira and anyway he finds you after you walk through the dark for a while and he says he'll help you cuz if he doesnt then all hope is lost for spira

Dark Aeon-Chernabog:Tall black gargoyle with massive wings and three eyes Overdrive:Shadow Eclipse
chernabog is a badguy you fight him 3 times then he puts you throught tests and when you pass them you get his respect and he alllows you to make him a summon

Holy Aeon-Metatron:A beautiful woman in a revealing outfit (like Shiva)with a golden halberd Overdrive:Judgment of the Living
metatron is found as a woman that is going crazy and cant stand it she tries to blow up bevelle an dthe girls take the mission and when they get to her make her a suommon

Non-Elemental non elemental is falconion a huge flame bird with blue and gold armor
the monster you fight at a time father time sends you to on accident when you finish him off you are sent back to your time to see where his body is buried and sees he is trapped and about to die you make a contract with him and he gets summon power and bust both walls that were closing in on him

Supreme Aeon-Isis:Gorgeous olive skinned woman in a beautiful,flowing gown and seven rotating swords above her head and a grimoire(spellbook) in her arms Overdrive:Supreme Light of Justice
isis is found when you go to aeon council and it is asked why there is an extra seat they say becuz youve given out almost all the summon power and that all that is left is the one power and that only one is worthy but she is too proud to take it and yall make her take the power when her mother is going to be destroyed by aesma and when she taks the power she ages to her 20's

Main Characters Special Powers

leena summon power gives summons their abilities

Story

the team was on a mission in space they were yuki and natie it was a big mission so they had also hired other people to help with security and while they were there yuki met a wolf that seemes unreal then it jumped at her and she was absorbed into yuki the rest o the team met an animal that also absorbed into them that's how they all got their powers their beast that they get corresponds that's why the wolf proud and strong grants power and such

Bad Guys
the bad guys are a group of people that feel the world is in chaos and that they have been wronged enough to where they deserve to own it i'll ediit their seperate back stories later

Faadrir-One of the magicians.First one you encounter.None of the other magicians take him that seriously but he turns out to be good and when he joins you they see him as a great threat and kill him and yes he can be revived

Firenze-One of the magicians.Very cocky.Second you encounter.He always tries to flirt with Somihar

Somihar-One of the magicians.She has a gentle facade but is really very sick and twisted.Third you encounter.

Raziel-One of the magicians.The most kindly and gentle.He almost regrets becoming evil.Fourth you encounter

Samson-One of the magicians.He is VERY strong and VERY dumb.It's kind of a mystery why the magicians even keep him around.Fifth you encounter. he may be the strongest magician but his iq is too low to tap into the power

Ketrol-One of the magicians.He likes to appear and dissappear at different times, usually to taunt our heroes.Encountered many times but is the sixth you kill

Aesma-The final magician.He is quiet and only speaks quick,witty insults and such.Has the most powerful magic.Encountered as the last boss


final boss splits so you fight 3 diff versions that larca and natie fight one gibraltor and marquis fight anothr and yuki fights one all by herself
and then assembles to make a great monster

oh yeah all main characters can control isisflickers but not as good as the bad guys

Christmas
07-30-2006, 06:04 AM
AWESOME.

loinharte
08-02-2006, 12:10 AM
AWESOME.
i agree it awesome

chronic_Maniac
08-02-2006, 07:13 AM
Yeah I'm making a ff too. I think I posted it in the writers thread. I just put the intro but I got 49 pages of story line and 100 something in character profiles. I'll post them up soon.

Psychotic
08-03-2006, 01:52 AM
eiko guy, we've been through this before. C'mon man, let it lie.