Path of Cerberus my NEW comic B)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok its here Path of Cerberus Trail of Tears and Blood!oh and the first chapter is in color.And if you havent read Path of the Shadow id read it before reading this anywho enjoy!please tell me if it sucks arse or if its ok :D
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[Owen Macwere]

This is interesting. good job, and thanks for the colouring. :D

[Rengori]

One again the panels seem a little cluttered.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

thanx and sorry rengorithats the best i can do ;.; i cant make it like the comic books do for some reason i always mess up badly but i have improved

[Owen Macwere]

Yup. you have improved alot. Just keep up, you will be one of the greatest comic writters. :D

[Reeno the Alchemist]

thanx owen but idk about that i cant even match up to Nobuhiro Watsuki (aka writer of rurouni kenshin <333)

[Reine]

Woo~ Go me xD

Thats rather awesome, indeed

What happened to me :O

[Reeno the Alchemist]

well i guess you kept your tidal and return to work your a buisy man y'know!i got some more for ya but they're not in color :(
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[Owen Macwere]

Hehe, cool. keep them coming, I started to love this story. :D

[Twilight Edge]

RUFUS!!!:tongue:

[Reeno the Alchemist]

NUUUUUUU!NOT RUFUS!!!!i swear i had this character WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAY before i even new what geostigma was back when i thought Vincents name was cerberus which was not that long ago actually.....plus i would tell you why he covers his face but i cant cause it would ruin the whole story hes not soposed to be like rufus and i had to find a way to cover him up and thats the best i could do ;.;:cry:

[Owen Macwere]

hey draco,*whispers* I just had this thought. don't voice it once more she gets mad fast. :(
keep going in this, as fast as possible. :bounce:

[Twilight Edge]

Ya got a point.:thumb:

[Shauna]

I must say, that is a lot better. Not as small and hard to follow as the previous one! ^_^

[Reeno the Alchemist]

yay thankyou did i make any spelling errors???

uh oh.........i c moving my uh comics has caused them to dissapear on here oh god i got alot of work to do heres this weeks comic tho sorry it took so long...
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i like the part where okami goes oh my ive said to much best face and hand eva

[Owen Macwere]

This is cool, but I have had some hard time keeping track of things.
but over all good work. :D

[Reeno the Alchemist]

oh soz....my scanner was like brokeded and i cried for a while then it started working again but dont worry i kinda lost track of things too...all my pages were messed up :cry:

[Owen Macwere]

Don't worry, I understood what has happened anyway. :p

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok im back with more
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[Meat Puppet]

Nice artwork and story. It got a lot better once you made the text clearer.
However, my computer is struggling due to so many large images being on the same page. Perhaps you could show the latest chapter as an image, and edit previous ones into a link?

Just a suggestion.

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[Reeno the Alchemist]

hmmm ill see what i can do i cant do snything tonight my comp is goin crazy...but ill get to work on that..

I AM SO SORRY i have not posted in like ever with friggin school starting and getting dirge of cerberus ive had no time what so ever to scan my comic or even draw it!I think im on chp 8 and this is what chapter 5 holy sheet i need to get to work sorry for the delay everyone and meat puppet ill send you the links
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[Sakura]

I finally figured out how to reply on forums smart me =^_^=

[Owen Macwere]

That's cool. :p
I like how the story is developing. Can't wait for more.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

OMG SAKI I TAUGHT YOU HOW TO REPLIE HOLY FRICKIN SHINIKIES hehehe thanx i thought having a brother would be a nice twist ^^ ill try to draw more i promice!

[Twilight Edge]

Okayyy......not bad......but what happened to the girl with a hot mini skirt,long boots,a super long hair extension and looks like Yuna to me?

[Owen Macwere]

Okayyy......not bad......but what happened to the girl with a hot mini skirt,long boots,a super long hair extension and looks like Yuna to me?

You just reminded me Draco!. Yes Reeno what has happened to that girl?.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

hehe you will find out about her later on i dont think shell be coming into this comic for a while tho (and she is exactly the oppisite of yuna >=E I HATE YUNA ill NEVER EVER EVER EVER base a character after her ^^ plus she has PINK hair )omg i got my first fan art today =DDDDDDDD i was so happy i have fans X)))
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[lovehurts]

That is some of your best work yet!!!:D ALRIGHT. One thing I would change. Tifa is built up like a stock pile of watermelons turpedo-ed into her chest. Your drawing isnt ...large enough at the chest.

Other wise its awesome! Your best work yet.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

heh thanx ill work on that and sorry i cant post any this weeken im goin on a trip ill try next weekend!and thank youuu sooo much for the support!!!!!!!!!!!

[Owen Macwere]

Have a nice trip, we will wait patiently. I am burning with curiosity. :D

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok guys sorry for the wait ive been SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BUSY!:( but i did manage to make it to chapter 8!=D here is chapter 6 enjoy
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[Twilight Edge]

The dinosaur is a dragon? Let's see......an eye, a spinal spike,a hand, a leg and a big pool of blood.
Good job.;)

[Sylvie]

I was wondering... could you post these in thumbnails? Its kind of hard to read things when all these huge pictures are loading.

Nice work though. :)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

hey thanx and leave my crappily draw dragon/dinos alone XDDDDD i draw dragons really good actually but im too lazy to y'know...and i always got introuble for posting my comics asthumbnails x.x people always threw fits and it takes me and hour and a half to upload them on here...im sorry :(

[Owen Macwere]

A dragon pet!!!. I like it so far... really can't wait for the next chapter. :D

[Yuffie The Failure]

WOO go reeno >=D you failed aand your comic failed i hate you ^^ <3333333

[Reeno the Alchemist]

-.- oh man its been hard you guys my comic has come to a complete hault sorry its schools fault this week im gonna try and work on it this is um the second to last chapter ive done so plz try and bare with me um chapter 7 is dedicated to my friend,my siggy maker,my supporter and my critic owen macwere just for you buddy enjoy chapter 7
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here r some links if you cant read
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[Reine]

Heh, never saw the othwer comics in here before, mainly because im using a better connection where I am..

I dont understand my character at all :/

The yawn part is perfect though, totally me xD
The hot name comment :eep: There should have been a response to it, like a bemused glare or something

Also I find it hard to determine which panel leads to the next..

Its ok, but it would get higher marks from me if I knew what was going on..

[Reeno the Alchemist]

err sorry reine mm im working on the pannles ill soon be seperating them cause ive been practicing and soon you shall know whats goin on i promice

[Reeno the Alchemist]

im goin on a trip right so id thought id post my comic and sorry for double posting id fear noone would look unless i posted again forgive me anyhoo enjoy chapter 8 or um 9?(thats sad i cant even remember what chapet it is -.-)
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[Yuffie The Failure]

GOOD JOB REENO YOU ROCK MY CHECKERED SOCKS I DONT OWN!!!!

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok curious question does anyone read this anymore?it seems only me and yuffie are posting nopw days i kinda need to know so i dont waste my time posting

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok i dont care that im dopuble posting but here is chapter 9 WOO WE'RE GONNA OVER PASS PATH OF THE SHADOW WE'VE BEATON THE LIMIT (sorry over-reacted there e.e; anywhoo enjoy
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[Sakura]

Hee hee ^-^ Reeno's the popular girl :p If I didn't suck at drawing i'd lurk around the artist forums more~

[rubah]

If you don't mind, a couple of suggestions;

Don't be afraid to use as much room as you need. It seems like you want to cram as many little panels in as possible, and it makes it very difficult to read. Most comics don't go over ten panels per page, many mangas don't go much over six. Give your characters some room to breathe; plus, if your panels are bigger, you can fit more text into each one, and they'll be easier to fit. If you don't want to draw each talking character, there are standard ways to signify that someone off the focus is speaking.

Also, something that will *really* help your readability, maybe letting you keep more readers is inking. Pencil scans are really hard to read, and they're not professional looking at all. Even if you just do this for fun, it's fun to pretend to be professional, so look into it:] You don't have to go out and buy fancy copic markers, but dont' use a plain simple bic pen. Find one that's got a good black tone (the cheap pens tend to be a shiny red or purple). If you see a pen lying on the floor, test it. The best pens I've ever come across as far as color texture have been free. One of them was even drug out of the the trash!

It takes a while, but it will definitely be worth it:)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

hehe thanks ill try and keep that in mind but i must take baby steps i mean ijust started to seperate the boxes i need to take my time to adjust i cant make too many changes maybe one day ill put it in ink and color but not now i dont have the time i dont even have enough time to work on the comic barely :< well heres chapter um 10 enjoy :)
(oh yea ill start posting in links now ;o)
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yay you finally got to meet Corson i wuvvle him oh and Blipp Blopp is actually real! heres a pic of him (if it IS a him?)and he has a happy bunny eraser ear in his mouth ;o
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me and my friend created him out of a a charcol eraser and omg you had to be there it was so funny

[Twilight Edge]

Nice job. You might consider inking though, or simply darkern the outlines more, as they tend to be hard to read.

[Yuffie The Failure]

good job Reeno =D oh and I HATE YOU

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok people sorry for not posting last week i forgot my book and like i said before im starting to draw in ink so once im used to it ill start drawing in ink k?anyways heres chapter 11
this is a somewhat funny chapter in the begining
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[Owen Macwere]

I haven't been here lately. XD
This chapter is great Reeno. :)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

YAY thanks alot owen welcome back!just for you comin to my comic in your busy life im gonna post chapter 12~~!!!!!!i love this chapter!
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[Owen Macwere]

yay!!! cool. be fast, I want more.
Don't forget to stretch your memory. ;)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok heres chapter 13 =) im on chapter 18 currently and i plan on ending it on chapter 20 :) well enjoy
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[Owen Macwere]

Nice work, Reeno. I love this last chapter, so saddy and happy at the same time. :)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

Ok i have chapter 14 ready for ya.I dont really like this chapter to tell you the truth... but anyways yea, im on chapter 19 currently tho ive only drawn a cover page sadly.I dont think ill be able to end it at chapter 20.but the sooner i end it the faster i can start thinking about path of the assasin crisis of war, but, i wont be able to work on that for a while because yuffie the failure and I have a brilliant idea for a new comic that will be very funny i think it might be called the failing path of yuffie and reeno (taking the famous tital path of the from my comics B) )it will be 2 comics one of my version and a stick person version wich will be yuffie's.Its pretty much the story of me and yuffies life and how we met it will be very hularious because we are very funny people.Well anyways heres chapter 14.
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[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok im sorry i havent posted in like 3 weeks but with renji appearances and me having fangirl crazes its been tough but anywho heres chapter 15
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[moogle maniac]

wow you are a really good comic artist!!!....your drawings aren't the best but your ability to write a short story for a manga and then have the patience to actually draw is amazing, kudos to you lol^________^

[Owen Macwere]

Cool!!! I like these two last chapters. :D

[Reeno the Alchemist]

hmmm ok my excuse for my absence this time is.....once again i was having fangirl moments over renji while reading bleach on this great site (pm me if you want it and you like bleach or wanna see what im babbling about and ill give you a link ya?)and the fact that im feeling G.R.E.A.T. because i have FINALLY finished Path of Cerberus at chapter 20 (woo for me)though i havent finished the tital page for it and i also rushed through it wich im ashamed it could look a whole lot better if i took my time and thought it out i just wanted to get started on Path of the Asassin as soon as possible(wich i will be posting as soon as i post the last page of this comic on here)my other excuse is that i was also going mad wating for my pillow that has renji on it in the mail i almost drove to pennsilvannia to kill the guy for not sending it to me at the correct time <.<; also im extremely happy because it was TATSUMI RENARU'S(cerberus's dad)BIRTH DAY FRIDAY =DDDD 2/2/07 me and my friend ran around school yell happy b-day renaru (though i was on cruches riding the elevator up and down hopping around cause i sprained my knee lemme tell ya spending 4 hours in a hospital with a retarded dress thingy thats open in the back is no fun its very embarrasing)and i was gonna post 2 chapters but because my photobucket hats me i was only able to upload one chapter so here it is (sorry for talking too much but i had to get it all out x.x)
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[Owen Macwere]

I really enjoyed it very much, keep up the good work, Reenie!. :D

[Twilight Edge]

IM MA LUVING 73H H17705H1 PUNCH!

[Reeno the Alchemist]

G00<| !|\/| GL4<| JOO 3|\|JO'|3<| |\/|4 CO|\/|!C =DDDDD

[Reeno the Alchemist]

alright Reeno here with chapter 17 =D
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[Owen Macwere]

lol, these Dragons are so cute!. :p
Good job on this.

[Yuffie The Failure]

HI REENO YOUR DOING A GOOD JOB :D

[Twilight Edge]

VROOOOOO~~~~~~!

ACKKKKKK!!!!1!1111

great! However, when the dragons first appeared, do they somehow look VERYYYYYYYYYYYYYY small to me?

[Reeno the Alchemist]

so i am here to bring you chapter 18 guess what?2 more chapters till its over.and twilight you just THINK theyre small <.<; >.> ^^ yea mhmm that JUST happened.i was viewing this thread to notice that it is only 3 pages long when path of the shadow was 5 hmm maybe because we fought alot on there ^^ i unno anyways heres 18...OH and i was looking at a bleach chapter cover when i was drawing this its amazing how i can redraw things to my own advantage <3\
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[Twilight Edge]

It's okay. ;)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

^^ 1~more~chapter~to~go~~~~~ :DDDD so like these fight scenes 5uxors so if you want to feel free to make fun of them with me.i promice you this much when this is finished and i post path of the asassin it'll be so much better it'll rock your checkered sox you dont own ok?oh and i made a quiz and im gonna test you all to see how well you memory is :) hehehe >=) anywho here ya go :)
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HAR HAR HAR SWORDS ACTIVATE NYYAAA :BBBBB that is by far the stupidest attack i ever thought of im really ashamed XD

[Owen Macwere]

Swords activate. lol XD

[Yuffie The Failure]

HI REENO YOUR DOIN A GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

[Garnie]

one word
he he he he he he he he he

[Twilight Edge]

LOL. Shikai or Bankai? :D

[Reeno the Alchemist]

actually niether :) <.< my final tech was based of of Serge's Lvl 7 tch Flying Arrow from chrono cross but it differs alot ^.~

[Reeno the Alchemist]

YIPPIE~LAST CHAPTER HERE WE GO~
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there it is :) well now we are going to start path of the assasin crisis of war wich takes place waaaay before both seasons <3 its way better than both of my first 2 seasons combined and ill be posting those in a new thread sometime today <3 but now i must quiz you to see how much you paid attention ^.~ please in your replys just say the answers and ill grade you~ if you read both seasons YOU must take this quiz cause reeno was up till midnight thinking of it;.; and if you get a bad grade i wont care cause my friend helped produce it and she got a 35% XD anyways ok here we go~

#1)what is Raines maiden last name?
A)Hakane B)AsawaC)ZanatearD)Hittakashi
#2)What race is Damien from?
A)RondoB)HumanC)DemonD)Kozzarian
#3)How do you tell if someones from Kozaria even though they appear normal? (pick2 answers)
A)blonde hair blue eyesB)Wear the kozzarian symbol on their backsC)have red triangles under their eyesD) have black or red hair
#4)How many chapters are in Path of the Shadow?A)20 B)9 C)15 D)10
#5)In what ranked order are the mercenarys from lowest to highest?
A)sota leahna siege lindeza reine jimaru san B)leahna lindeza reine sota jimaru san siege C)sota leahna siege jimaru lindeza san D) sota leahna siege lindeza jimaru reine san
#6)What is tifas little friends name?
A)blippity bloop B)blopp blipp C)blipp blopp D) blip blop
#7)in what relation is riyu to raine?
A)closest friend B)uncle C) brother D) half brother
#8)why does zack kick cerberus in path of the assasin?
A) he didnt sweep the floor B) didnt cook dinner C)forgot to bring in the wood D)didnt do the laundry
#9)what body part was cerberus infected with
A)right arm B)left arm C)right leg D)left leg
#10)How did saito die?
A)lossage of blood B)a high fever C)stimina D)old age
#11)What is raine scared of?
A)spiders B)needles C)lightning D)darkness
#12)Where is renaru company?
A)centaku villa B)Kozaria C)Motoru D) Capital
#13)What chapter does cerberus get his memory back?
A)7 B)8 C)9 D)10
#14)what is Saito jr.'s full name?
A)Saito Hittoshi Hakane B)Saito cerberus tousan C)saito cerberus hakane D)saito hittoshi tousan
#15)Who tells cerberus to get a life?A)Hittoshi B)Zack C)Raine D)Saito
#16)Why do the people hate Renaru?(pick 2)
A)they make wepons B)he treats the people bad C)he told the people things that never happened D)he became a dictator

alright there you go there was origonally 20 questions but they were ones you wouldnt know ^.^

[Yuffie The Failure]

is this friend me IT IS ISNT IT!?? It's not my fault I don't know that crap ;[

[Reeno the Alchemist]

NO IT IS NOT YOU YOU FOOL DO YOU REMEMBER ME HANDING YOU 2 PAGES OF QUESTIONS NO I DIDNT >;(

[Twilight Edge]

Finally got time read it through. Fantastic. :) But I ain't doing the questions. :D

[Reeno the Alchemist]

good xD i didnt expect you to do it i just typed it for fun it was only meant for 1 person and 1 person only you can either do it or not :) its up to oui (<-- you in al bhed)