a new art peace

[Yew-Yevon]

well heres another one. Its been a wile since I did some drawing, but I got this book in Calgary that teaches how to draw Manga art, so I bought it in the hopes of improving. I just finished drawing a new picture so, tell me what you think... and please tell me what you think needs more work.

[Breine]

It looks very good - I especially like her eyes. Overall the drawing could use some more colour, though. Maybe it's the scanner that's messed it up and made them pale, who knows - but since it's manga it would be nice with eye popping colours :) Keep up the good work.

[Rengori]

I kinda don't like the way the nose is shaded, it looks like it's a dark twinkle, other than that it's good.

[rubah]

she has no nose :O

but pretty eyes !

[scrumpleberry]

That is verrrry nice.

[Alive-Cat]

The drawing itself is perfect! :)
But I would say use ink instead of what you are using there, because it makes it seem amateur when it's not a solid colour. :-\
Ink is the way to go, ink is the FUTURE! :love:

[lovehurts]

I like it all I think the nose is fine. :D

[Yew-Yevon]

Thank you all for the comments and helpful tips. It was my first real effert.
The drawing itself is perfect!
But I would say use ink instead of what you are using there, because it makes it seem amateur when it's not a solid colour.
Ink is the way to go, ink is the FUTURE! (thanks and yes Alive-Man, Ink would be much better. however I'm a bit too poor to have a rainbow of ink right now)


I'm trying some full body pics to. two are street fighters (Akuma is proving to be very hard espesialy the face) and one is just a chick I made up...there my first ones so they won't look wow or anything

[AdVenT]

Nice work...

[Rocket Edge]

Great work. I love the eyes.

[Yew-Yevon]

Akuma is complete :)...(I just had to look in my Street Fighter15 anivuresery maual)

[Yew-Yevon]

Sorry for the dubble post but I wanted to show a profile picture I made of Motoko from "Ghost in the Shell". I finaly bought some ink pens and tried it out.

PS: I know the hair is wrong :( didn't have the right colors.

[lovehurts]

that female looks damn fine.

[tan]

It's very detailed and very well-drawn, and I like the way you kind of color with a top-to-bottom motion because it makes it look very smooth, in a way. It's a very nice piece :D

[Yew-Yevon]

Thanx! :D Im looking forward to doing Lulu, Tidus, and Rikku as well.

[Clone 01]

there pretty good!well done! the only thing is that when i do pics i would press down on the c/pencil to get its ful color and not have any bits of the white page cumin through.its just to get a more solid color, it might make the pics look better.

[Yew-Yevon]

Heres a pic of Rikku...I made the error of not drawing the skeleton first, wich made the body look off.


the only thing is that when i do pics i would press down on the c/pencil to get its ful color and not have any bits of the white page cumin through.its just to get a more solid color, it might make the pics look better.

ya but then I end up breaking the c/pencils. :(

[Clone 01]

wel dont press down too hard now,just enough to get full color.

[Eminem's_No.1_Fan]

All excellent, show us more, please, PLEASE!!!!

[Yew-Yevon]

heres my newest pic...well its realy the start of a comic. let me know what you think :D

[Rogue]

nice

[Yew-Yevon]

Pages 2 and 3 of my comic plus a detailed pic of the male charater and a pic of Chi from Chobits.


helpful Critisism please :)

[41-Inches-Wide]

You proportion the facial features perfectly.

[Yew-Yevon]

My comic is coming a little slow. dose anyone have some helpful tips for the story?