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mauiemau
08-25-2006, 06:48 PM
Hi all!

I'm new on this forum(though registered a long time ago), but had to post one of my drawings here :) I hope you'll like it :) A chocobo! :D love them :P

chocobo (http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9840/scannenaa0.jpg)

I'd love to hear what you think of it :)

lovehurts
08-25-2006, 07:09 PM
Add a link or crop it next time.

This may sound odd to you but if that is really your work it is quite good. I love what you did with the neck-breast section of the bird. You dont need much more detail on the other feathers that are sort of plain in the piece but in order to give it more texture I suggest it. Just a little more detail there.

You did well with dimensions I call tell what wing is in front of the other. The legs are good too. YOu captured shading to make things round and what not but maybe you should practice adding a light source too.

VERY NICE WORK.:D

Clone 01
08-26-2006, 01:43 AM
great picture,but make it a thumbnail or something.alot of people seem to be drawing this picture lately.u did really well though!

mauiemau
08-26-2006, 07:26 PM
thnx! :) :D :D

I'd doesn't sound odd to me that you say that. I think I had to put my name on it to make it truly my drawing :)
But I drew it about a year ago (when I had time for it ;) )

This was my first picture on which I used shading. I normally just drew the outlines ;) but thnx for the comments! :D ( don't ment to say I can do better now :p )

This is my latest drawing, a moomba. Not totally happy with the result, but it still looks fine i think :)

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7121/scannen0002vo3.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scannen0002vo3.jpg)

BizarroSephiroth
08-26-2006, 08:06 PM
OMFG!!! Thats better than anything I could do! Great work!

Rocket Edge
08-27-2006, 04:39 PM
Good work. You have good potential as the picture seems accurate enough, just try on work on your strenght of line for the future, as this wil make it look more clean. :)