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Aim in the Heart-Part 7-


For this moment (Albert) and (Jake) looking at each other .

(Albert): Say my name (Jake) .

(Jake): Why you want me to say your name ?

(Albert) kiss Jake's hand .

(Albert): if I told you Why , You will say my name Right?

(Jake):(………).

(Albert): Because I like you (Jake) ,I want you so Badly.

(Jake):You crazy .

(Albert) Kiss him again and Took him to his room in the Bed. They kissing and kiss By Tongue . But (Jake) he just Try to Push him.


(Jake):N-No… Wait….We Can't Do that, this is Crazy!
But (Albert) tell him by a low voice.


(Albert): is alright (Jake)….is alright .
They kissing By Tongue again , (Albert) Make him stretched on the bed, (Albert) take off his shirt and Begins to open Jake's shirt buttons then he kiss him in Jake's lips then Jake's Neck and lick it and he lick Jake's Teat and lick Jake's Legs .
(Albert): (Jake) I want to put it inside Now .
(Jake): Huh?....What?...You mean That ? Wait ……Don't!
(Albert): is That your first time? Don't worry about this (Jake) just Relax .
(Jake): please do it slowly .
He lifting Jake's legs above and put it inside him and they start the real sex .
(Jake): AHHH ! IT HURTS… AH....NN....AH .
(Jake) he Can't tolerate longer .

(Jake): I….I can't…. do it anymore .

(Albert): just hold on a little longer (Jake).

(Albert): I'M cumming…! AAAH !

The cum Scattered on Jake's chest and (Albert) stop and they looking at each other and Kissing (Sweet pretty kiss) .they fell in sleep and (Albert) he Hold (Jake) in sleep .

In the Morning (Albert) he Heard the phone ringing ,He Get up from the Bad and answer the phone .
(Albert): Hello?...............
Yes……………..
WHAT?
(Jake) he just wake up from his sleep When he Heard (Albert) .
(Albert): How is that happen?....................I'll be right there.
(Jake): What's wrong? Something happen?
(Albert) look to (Jake) and he tell him .
(Albert):(Jake) there something happen in the police station.
(Jake): What is it?
(Albert): The killer We arrest him yesterday They find him Dead.
(Jake):Dead?
(To Be Continued)

Aim in the Heart-Part 7-


For this moment (Albert) and (Jake) looking at each other .

(Albert): Say my name (Jake) .

(Jake): Why you want me to say your name ?

(Albert) kiss Jake's hand .

(Albert): if I told you Why , You will say my name Right?

(Jake) : (………) .

(Albert): Because I like you (Jake) ,I want you so Badly.

(Jake):You crazy .

(Albert) Kiss him again and Took him to his room in the Bed. They kissing and kiss By Tongue . But (Jake) he just Try to Push him.


(Jake):N-No… Wait….We Can't Do that, this is Crazy!
But (Albert) tell him by a low voice.


(Albert): is alright (Jake)….is alright .
They kissing By Tongue again , (Albert) Make him stretched on the bed, (Albert) take off his shirt and Begins to open Jake's shirt buttons then he kiss him in Jake's lips then Jake's Neck and lick it and he lick Jake's Teat and lick Jake's Legs .
(Albert): (Jake) I want to put it inside Now .
(Jake): Huh?....What?...You mean That ? Wait ……Don't!
(Albert): is That your first time? Don't worry about this (Jake) just Relax .
(Jake): please do it slowly .
He lifting Jake's legs above and put it inside him and they start the real sex .
(Jake): AHHH ! IT HURTS… AH....NN....AH .
(Jake) he Can't tolerate longer .

(Jake): I….I can't…. do it anymore .

(Albert): just hold on a little longer (Jake).

(Albert): I'M cumming…! AAAH !

The cum Scattered on Jake's chest and (Albert) stop and they looking at each other and Kissing (Sweet pretty kiss) .they fell asleep and (Albert) he Hold (Jake) in sleep .

In the Morning (Albert) he Heard the phone ringing ,He Get up from the Bad and answer the phone .
(Albert): Hello?
...............Yes
……………..WHAT?
(Jake) he just wake up from his sleep When he Heard (Albert) .
(Albert): How is that happen?....................I'll be right there.
(Jake): What's wrong? Something happen?
(Albert) look to (Jake) and he tell him .
(Albert) : (Jake) there something happen in the police station.
(Jake): What is it?
(Albert): The killer We arrest him yesterday They find him Dead.
(Jake) Dead?
(To Be Continued)

Aim in the Heart -Part 6-

Aim in the Heart -Part 6-

At this moment on the street (Jake) he just Saw the man one of the four men Who raped (saya) , (Albert) follow (Jake) and he look to him.

(Albert) : huh? What's wrong (Jake) ? What are you looking?

(Jake): The man……That's the man one of the four men Who raped (saya) is HIM !

(Albert) : are you sure?

(Albert) Went to speak with this man .

(Albert) : Hey! Excuse me sir Can I talk to you for second ?

The person (Man) Change into (Killer)'s name , He saw (Albert)'s insignia .

The (Killer) : trout !
The (Killer) Try to Run .
(Albert) : HEY! STOP!
(Albert) began chasing This Killer and The Killer he Ran towards the street and he caused chaos in the car and filled the road on Albert , But (Albert) was able to bypass ,He still chasing This Killer ,The Killer Stop in Deadend in his way (Wall) ,
(Albert) : Sir I'm Investigator I don't wanna Hurts you I just want you to come with me to The police station for questioning.
But the killer took out a knife from his pocket and he attack (Albert) . (Jake) he try to find (Albert) and the killer( where are they now?).Then he find them , (Albert) he Catch the killer he Lie down on the ground and just put the handcuffs on the killer's hands .
(Albert) : Sir you are under arrest for attack the Investigator So You have the right to remain silent .
(Jake): Mr.(Albert) ?
(Albert) turn around his face on (Jake).
(Albert): Hmm? (Jake)?
(Jake) he just look to him and………. .
(Jake): Oh my god (Albert) You Bleeding !
(Albert): Huh?
(Jake): Your arm !
(Albert) he look to his arm he injured by killer's knife .
(Albert): Oh ! I didn't notice this .

In The police station the killer Was in interrogation room . The Chief want to see (Albert) .
Chief : What's this all about ?
(Albert): This Guy…… Well I was trying to talk to him ,But he Ran from me , I Follow him and then he attack me by a knife .
Chief : Do you have any idea Why he attack you?
(Albert): No……But he the one from the four men who attack (Jake) and raped the Girl her name (saya) six month ago .
Chief : are you sure ?
(Albert): This is all up to (Jake) if he Remember one of the killers's face
(Albert) asked the policeman to attend (Jake) here.
(Jake) look at the mirror to another side from the interrogation room looking to the Killer's face and (Albert) ask him .
(Albert): (Jake) are you sure that the man one from the four men who attack you and (saya).
(Jake) began remembered the man He's the one from the four men, There is no mistakes ,He Ran into inside the interrogation room .
(Albert): HEY! (Jake) Wait come Back here .
(Jake) punched in the killer's face.
(Jake): YOU BASTARD ! YOU KILL (SAYA) I WELL NEVER FORGIVE WHAT YOU DID TO HER .
The Two policeman Stop him and take him out from the interrogation room To keep him away from the killer before he going to kill him .
Later the killer Didn't confess anything about the crime.
The Chief want to talk to (Jake) .
Chief : You still here Mr. (Jake).
(Jake): The killer is he going to tell where's the others was with them?
Chief : No, we need more time to make him confess, so you don't need to stay here, Go home.
(Jake): Where's is Mr. (Albert) .
Chief : He Want home .
(Jake): What? Didn't he go to the Hospital? The Wound in his arm was deep .
Chief : Well….he said he can Take care about his Wound.
(Jake) want to the (Albert)'s house he Click on the button bell house, (Albert) want to open the door and he Surprise when he saw (Jake).
(Albert): Huh? What are you doing here I Thought you don't want to see me again?
And he saw the Pack first-aid (Jake) carries with him .
(Albert):and Why you carry this with you? .
(Jake): umm….is for you Wound .
(Albert): (Jake) you don't have to I'm fine .
(Jake): Can I come inside?
(Albert): Yes come in.
He Began handles Albert's Wound and puts for him bandage in his Wound.
(Jake): I'm Sorry about this, it was my fault to get you this Wound.
(Albert): Why it his to be your fault ? I was trying to do my job, is Chasing the criminals and took them to the justice .
(Jake): So you take Seriously about doing you job to protect people from the criminals and put you self in danger .
(Albert): This police job .
(Jake) (………).
(Albert): What? Are you worried ?
(Jake) (………).
(Albert) look at (Jake)'s face , He sees sadness in (Jake)'s face . so he raise (Jake)'s face and kiss him again .But (Jake) this time he didn't Push him .
(Jake): Why?
(Albert): if you about to cry, I won't let you cry .
(Jake): Mr. (Albert) ?
(Albert): Call me By my first name .

(To Be Continued)

Aim in the Heart -Part 5-

Three Days later (Jake) Didn't see (Albert) long three days , after the last time when he left (Albert)'s house (after the kiss) ,He Still troublesome because of the kiss .He just Remember (Albert) how he hold him and kiss him , and (Jake) touch his lip, then his face coming Red again .
(Jake): ( (Albert)……That Idiot , I'm really don't wanna see him again ) .
The another time (Jake) Went out for walk in the streets , he look around the Stores and then he Went inside the Store to buy something ,Then he just collided with someBody.
(Jake): Oh !….. Sorry sir my Bad.
The person that (Jake) collided was Investigator (Albert) .
(Jake): Mr. (Albert)???
(Albert): Hey (Jake) ! How you doing? Why didn't come to the to the Training? it been three days.
(Jake) not looking to the (Albert)'s face and he didn't say anything .
(Albert): What's wrong?
(Jake): Shut up and leave me alone.
. (Albert): (?) .
(Jake) Want to go out from the Store But (Albert) Catch (Jake)'s shoulder .
(Albert): just hold it right here, What is the matter with you? why are you so angry?
(Jake): You can't fool me so leave me alone.
(Albert): Who said I'm trying to make you a fool (Jake)?
(Jake): just let me go!
(Albert): let me guess, it was about the Kiss Right?
(Jake) his coming Red so much.
(Jake): No is not that……is just I don't wanna see you again .
(Albert): Come you don't have to be angry about one kiss from a guy .
(Jake) is about to explode from the intensity of the anger and embarrassment.
(Jake): SHUT UP AND LEAVE ME ALONE YOU BASTARD!
(Jake) just Get out from the Store's Door.
(Jake): Don't come any closer from me .
(Jake) he just collided with another person .
The person (Man): Hey Watch it , you F***king Idiot !
(Jake) look at the Man's face , (Jake) in Shock !
(Jake): ( That Man……That's the man one from the four men who raped (saya)!!!


(To Be Continued)

It's a good read so far Cloudy!

Aim in the Heart -Part 4-

After They finish eating the food and drunk, They Came out from the restaurant.
(Jake): oh man ! I drunk too much.
(Albert): I can Believe , you drunk Ten Class of Bars,are you feel alright?
(Jake): I Feel Great.
(Albert): You so drunk , Get in the car I Drive you Home .
(Albert) and (Jake) ride to the car ( Albert's Car) , in the Way when (Albert) Driving the car.
(Albert): Hey (Jake), Where Do you live?
(Jake) Didn't answer.
(Albert): (?)……Hey?
(Albert) look at (Jake), He fell in sleep.
(Albert):He fell in sleep.
After a few Hours (Jake) seemed to see the dream about (saya) again , Suddenly (Jake) panic in his sleep .
(Albert) just Hear him and come to him fast.
(Albert): What's wrong?
(Jake): Huh? Mr. (Albert)?
(Jake) just look around he find him self sleeping in the couch.
(Jake): Where I am ?
(Albert): in my place, you Drunk too much and you fell in sleep like Baby,and I Don't know where you live , so I Bring you to my House.
(Jake) (……..)
(Albert): What's wrong? Bad Dream?
(Jake): No it nothing.
(Albert): It okay you can tell me ,if you wanna talk about this.
(Jake): …………it was (saya).
(Albert): (saya)? Your Girlfriend The girl who was killed six months ago?
(Jake): Yeah…after she dead, Every night I see the same dream about That night these men attack us me and (saya) and they raping her then kill her, Every night I see this Nightmare.
(Jake) began to cry.
(Jake) : The Girl I love so much I imposed be to Protect her I imposed be to save her, Why I couldn't save her.
(Albert) sitting on the couch Next to him and he put his hand on Jake's shoulder.
(Albert) : Hey! Calm down It's not your fault .
(Jake) : How should I to Calm down after What happen six months ago is Still stuck on my head , How should I to Calm down?
(Albert) Feel Pity so much on (Jake) so he hold him.
(Albert) : I wish I can help, it Seems you love her very much.
(Jake): I Never thought I'm so weak for not saving her.
(Albert) : is alright (Jake) easy now.
(Albert) raise (Jake)'s face.
(Albert) : is alright.
He kiss him in his lips.
(Jake) Push (Albert).
(Jake): What the hell are you doing ? Why did you kiss me?
(Albert) smile for him.
(Albert) : I thought that will make you stop crying.
(Jake) his face coming Red and so angry.
(Jake): Are you a pervert ? I don't need this kiss and beside we both Guys.
Then he left (Albert)'s house.


(To Be Continued)

Aim in the Heart -Part 3-

At this moment, Investigator (Albert) Became a special coach For (Jake), sometimes everyday (Jake) always meet (Albert) in the Training room, so He can gain some experience, (Albert) Teach him how and Coached to shot the target.
(Albert):Okay (Jake) try to shot the target .
(Jake) he shot the target .
(Albert): Not Bad , Now try Again, But this time in the Heart.
But (Jake) he Miss the target in the Heart.
(Albert): Hey, I want you to focus, Just focused on your goal.
(Jake) ( …..…)
(Albert) Albert holds (Jake)'s Hands who holds the gun (From behind (Jake)'s back).
( (Jake) Panic )

(Jake): HEY!!! What are you doing?
(Albert) : (Jake) Remember , Aim in the Heart and shot the Heart , and Remember your goal is in the Heart, Forget everything around you ,And keep your focus on your goal required,
Aim in the Heart.
(Jake) Corrected toward the heart and Shot the Heart.
(Albert) : You learn quickly.
(Jake) smile.
(Jake): Thanks .
(Albert) : okay , Okay that's enough today we will complete training later.
(Jake): okay, Thank you Investigator (Albert).
(Albert) : please, this name is too long just call me (Albert).
(Jake): alright, Mr. (Albert).
(Albert): now you going to call me Mr.
(Jake):umm……Mr. (Albert) about you hold my Hands From behind, please Don't do that again.
(Albert) ( ……….).
(Jake): if somebody see us They Will think we are linked.
(Albert) :HaHaHa, you really Weird, anyway Do you have free time I just want to invite you for dinner after all this training.
(Jake): um….well…
(Albert) : I know the best place offering the best food.
(Jake) thinks(Should I agree or not)
(Albert) : Come on my account.
(Jake): okay.
(Albert) and (Jake) they Went to the restaurant and they Eating and talking.
(Jake): Mr. (Albert) can I ask you something? Are you a foreigner?
(Albert) : Do I look for you foreigner?
(Jake): You not look from Japanese?
(Albert) : Well the true is my mother is Japanese and my Father from U.S.A , he Grew up in New York City.
(Jake): What???Your father Grew up in New York City.
(Albert) : What? Are you surprised.
(Jake): Wow! I didn't know that , But where did you born? In New York City or Tokyo ?
(Albert) : Tokyo .
(Jake): Have you ever visited the New York City.
(Albert) : Yes every year , My parents and I We visited my grandparents, they living in New York City .
(Jake): I've always dreamed to visit New York, And go to the place where the The Statue of Liberty.
(Albert) : Then why don't you go?
(Jake): Well is not easy for me.
(Albert) smile for (Jake)
(Jake) : (?) What?
(Albert) : You look Cute when you talk.
(Jake) his face coming Red


(Jake): HEY!!! I'm Guy you shoud say that to a Girl.
(Albert): HaHaHa, you really funny (Jake) .
(Jake): you annoying.
(Albert): Do you wanna have Drunk
(Jake): sure .
(To Be Continued)

Aim in the Heart -Part 2-

After a long time of (saya)'s dead, the Police didn't find Any Information about the Four criminals Who kill (saya). (Jake) he still Dejected and sad about The girl who really loved her along years ago, that night in his room sleeping in his bed he was Dreaming about (saya) and the four men who raped her and kill who Disgusting scene (Ugly moment) ,he Panic in his sleep and look around in room ,
(Jake): Ah……it was Dream…… or Nightmare………..(saya).
Every night he always see the Nightmares about (saya)'dead the poor guy.
In the Morning (Jake) wake up in his bed and Went to the bathroom , Wash his face (By water) , and look at the mirror, he see the memories of (saya)'s and the four men and he Hears the four men Laughs when they raped (saya),(Jake) feel so Angry and he Broke the mirror and his hand bleeding .
(Jake): (saya) I swear ....I swear I'll find These men who Hurts you they Will pay for this.
Next day (Jake) went to the Store weapons to buy Gun ,and then went to the Training room To learn How to use a gun, and coincidence he saw Investigator (Albert) in the Training room , (Albert) he look to (Jake).
(Albert): Hey (Jake),no time no see .
(Jake): Investigator (Albert)?
(Albert):Yes.. that's me, it been six month when we first met.
(Jake): Yeah.
(Albert):so…what are you doing here?
(Jake):umm…..well….I……I'm here to training on how to use the Gun.
(Albert): oh really!
(Jake): yes.
(Albert): Do you know How to use it?
(Jake): Huh?
(Albert): The Gun .
(Jake): Oh..um…well…Not yet.
(Albert): Do you need some help?
(Jake): No, I can do it by my self.
And then (Jake) try to learn How to use the Gun, He just press the trigger gun to shot the target (hit the target),But the Gun Doesn't work .
(Jake):What's wrong with this Gun.
Albert looked at Jake.
(Albert):Hey, just press the Secretariat button.
(Jake):(?)
(Albert) Nigh to him.
(Albert): Here let me show you ,
Now shot the target .
(Jake) press the trigger , But he didn't hit the target (He Miss the target).
(Albert): You really need to train.
(Jake):(……..).
(Albert): How about that, I can Be your special trainer.
(Jake):Huh???
(Albert) smile to (Jake) And he put his hand on Jake's shoulder.
(Albert):Come, you not going to lose anything.

(To Be Continued)