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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 9)

    After that When Yukimura Rie tell Taki that is over , they need to cut relationship and Broke up and back to the normal life , That Hurt Taki so much and make him crying , he run away .Yukimura Rie Thought that maybe Taki Must be in one of friends's house or maybe he come back to his House to his Parents , so he try to call Taki's house to make sure , Yoshizawa's Wife she Heard the phone ringing , She went to answer the phone .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Hello ?
    Yukimura Rie : Hi ... Ms. Yoshizawa , is me Yukimura Rie .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Oh! Hi , is everything alright ?
    Yukimura Rie : umm...well ... I was about to ask you , did Taki back home ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : No ! is something happen ? what did you tell him ?
    Yukimura Rie : I just I tell him , But He Didn't accept it and he refusal ,then he run away .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : What do you mean run away ?
    Yukimura Rie : He maybe went to one of his friends's house .
    But Taki he is not , he just want to be along , he is very sad Because of Yukimura Rie that he tell him they must Broke up and Taki don't want to do that and he cry , after that in the night , Taki was in the public parks sitting along by him self then he sleep , after that when Taki sleep , someone saw Taki , he come to him and try to wake him up .
    (?????): Hey , Kid wake up , you should not sleep here , is very cold , do you want to get Sick ,come wake up and go home .
    Taki he just open his eyes and he look to the man Who's talk to him , But Suddenly He can't Believe it what he saw .
    Taki : Could you be ...........
    (?????): Huh ?
    Taki : D....Daddy Jinnai !
    is Jinnai , He look to Taki's Face .
    Jinnai : Taki ?.....is that You ?
    Taki : So is really you .
    Jinnai : Taki ! what are you doing here ? why you not home .
    Taki : Daady Jinnai !
    He get up and Hug him .
    Taki : I Never thought that I'm going to see you agian .
    Jinnai : Taki .
    He hold him too , Then he took Taki to his house ( Jinnai's House ) .
    Jinnai : is been long time the last time I saw you .
    Taki : I'm.....I'm sorry .
    Jinnai : Huh ? you sorry ? sorry about what ?
    Taki : You Know ten years ago you Broke up with my dad Because of me .
    Jinnai : Taki ! What are you talking about I already told you before in not you fault .
    Taki : .........
    Jinnai : Taki , did you fight with your father ?
    Taki : um.....yes .
    Jinnai : about what ?
    Taki :........
    Jinnai : alright , I'm not going to ask Because is Family business .
    Taki : NO ....That is not Truth .
    Jinnai he smile for him .
    Jinnai : Taki , you still the same boy , Good and sensitive .
    Taki : um....Well the Truth is.....is....
    Jinnai : ?
    Taki : Months ago .....I meet someone and I ......in love with that Person .
    Jinnai : and that person...........?
    Taki : um......The Person is a Man , That why I fight with my father .
    Jinnai : is that so .
    Taki : ..........
    Jinnai : Then , is That Person love you ?
    Taki : Yes , But he want to Broke up with me and another something .....he have Fiancee .
    Jinnai : Did he said why he want to Broke up with you ?
    Taki : He said he don't want to make any Trouble with me after my father find out .
    Jinnai : I see .
    Taki he is very sad .
    Jinnai : I don't know anything about that , But I think I know that he really care about you .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Jinnai : he don't want to make any Trouble with you that Because he love you .
    Taki :..........
    Jinnai : It is Night now , you should sleep right now .
    He Brought Blanket and pillow and put it in the couch for Taki sleep on the couch .
    Jinnai : Goodnight Taki .
    Taki : Daddy Jinnai .
    Jinnai : What it is ?
    Taki smile .
    Taki : I'm Happy to see you again .
    Jinnai smile too .
    Jinnai : me too Taki , me too .
    Taki fall in sleep , then after that , Jinnai try to call someone in the phone , someone answer the phone , After the phone call , the someone he call him , He come to the Jinnai's House , Jinnai he open the Door , the someone is Yoshizawa ( Taki's father ) .
    Jinnai : Yoshizawa , is been long time .
    Yoshizawa : Where is Taki ?
    Jinnai : He is sleeping in the Living room , let just left him sleep and come with me to another room , we going to talk .
    They went to room anoher room .
    Jinnai : Yoshizawa , Taki told me everything .
    Yoshizawa : really ? what did he told you ?
    Jinnai : well , he told me that he is in love with a man and you not accept with that .
    Yoshizawa : He should know that what is he doing is really big Mistake .
    Jinnai : Why do you think is really big Mistake ?
    Yoshizawa : Why do you ask me ? you already know that .
    Jinnai : Yoshizawa , That man I'm sure he is love Taki .
    Yoshizawa : and how do you know that ? you don't even know him .
    Jinnai : That Because He Broke up with Taki .
    Yoshizawa : He did ? and how is Taki ?
    Jinnai : You ask me ? What about you ?
    Yoshizawa : me ?
    Jinnai : Ten years ago after we Broke up How did you feel after I left you , did you ever feel sad or Broken Heart .
    Yoshizawa : We not talking about us , we talking about Taki .
    Jinnai : just answer my question .
    Yoshizawa : I have already passed those feeling , and Taki well do the samething too .
    Jinnai : Why you just let Taki love Whatever he want ?
    Yoshizawa : I'm his father , and I Care about his future .
    Jinnai : Really , well I'm his father too and I Care about him too , but that is not mean you can prevent with who he love .
    Yoshizawa : That is not of you Business .
    Jinnai : This is my Business .
    Yoshizawa : No is not .
    Jinnai : Yoshizawa , along Ten years I still miss you I miss Taki and I'm sorry for never Listen to you .
    Yoshizawa : Do you think I'm not miss you ?
    Jinnai : Yoshizawa , just let Taki decide and let him stay here with me afew days .
    Yoshizawa : alright , if you say so .
    After that Yoshizawa left Jinnai's House .




    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-26-2013 at 07:43 PM by Thecloudyday89
  3. Thecloudyday89's Avatar
    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 8)

    After that in Yukimura Rie's house , Yukimura Rie he talk with Yoshizawa's Wife and he well try to talk with Taki about this , When Taki get inside Yukimura Rie's house , is about time for Yukimura Rie to tell Taki about something ( They in Living room ) .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , we need to talk .
    Taki : What is it ?
    Yukimura Rie : just sit down and Listen to me .
    Taki : is something wrong ?
    Yukimura Rie : No , is not , But Let's get to the heart of the matter and face it .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yukimura Rie : Taki .......You need to back to you normal life .
    Taki : What ? What do you mean ?
    Yukimura Rie : I mean is over between us , we must cut Our relationship .
    Taki : WHAT ?
    Yukimura Rie : I'm sorry Taki .
    Taki : You want to Broke up with me ? Why ? I thought you love me .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , I'm really don't want to make you any Trouble , I'm Teacher and You my Student .
    Taki : No.....No .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , please.... try to understand .
    Taki : I don't want to Broke up with you .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki .
    Taki : Sensei , I love you .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , my Fiancee Mitsuko and I , we going to get marry Next two Month .
    Taki : I Don't Care .
    He Grab Taki's Shoulders
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , please , go back to you Parents and Apologize to them , everything is going to be alright , you have Hinata and she love you .
    Taki being Crying .
    Taki : You don't understand me .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki .
    Taki : YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND .
    He run out from the door from Yukimura Rie's house .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki ! Wait ...Come Back .




    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-22-2013 at 04:52 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 7)

    After that , Taki was in the Yukimura Rie's house ( They having sex) , in the morning Taki was sleep with Yukimura Rie in the Bed , when he wake up , He saw Yukimura Rie's Cat , He Carry cat in his lap and Rub cat's fur ( cat's Head ) , Then Yukimura Rie wake up too and He hold Taki from Behind his Back .
    Yukimura Rie : Good Morning .
    Taki : Good Morning .
    Yukimura Rie : What do you like to eat for Breakfast food ?
    Taki : I'm not Hungry Right now , But Can I use the Bathroom .
    Yukimura Rie : On you Right .
    He went to take Shower , then after that come out from the Bathroom and he Wear his Clothes.
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , did your Parents Know that Where you are now ?
    Taki : I just tell them I'm staying in my friend's house .
    Yukimura Rie : Then can you just stay here for a little While .
    Taki : No , I need to go Back home .
    Yukimura Rie : alrght then , see you later .
    After that Taki went home , when he come back home , he get inside .
    Taki : I'm Home .
    Yoshizawa and his Wife was in the Living room .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Oh! welcome SweetHeart .
    Yoshizawa : Taki , Where have you been ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Dear , He was in his friend's house , he tell us yesterday .
    Yoshizawa : Taki .
    Taki : I was in my friend's house .
    Yoshizawa : Don't lie to me Taki .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yoshizawa : Yesterday I saw you , I saw you you with a man and I saw you two kissing then you get inside his house .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Yoshizawa ! What are you talking ?
    Taki : You Spying on me ?
    Yoshizawa : Did you have sex with him ?
    Taki : What the Hell kind of questions is that?
    Yoshizawa : just answer my questions .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Dear , Calm down .
    Taki : How could you Spying on me ? and beside , I can date whatever I want .
    Yoshizawa : What did you say ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Please you two , stop Fighting .
    Yoshizawa : I ask you to stay away from this man .
    Taki : that is not of your business , you did the same thing you and daddy Jinnai , You were in love with him , even you two both guys .
    He Slap Taki's face .
    Yoshizawa : Do you ever remember this topic that about me and Jinnai , we Broke up Because we did that for you own good , for your future , we immolate for you .
    Taki : But Dad , I love him and he love too .
    Yoshizawa : I Don't Care if he love you or not I just I want you to stop seeing this man .
    Taki : No , I wan't do that .
    Taki went out from the door ( He Get out from his house after he fight with his father ) .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Taki ! Wait .....Come Back .
    After that , Taki went back to the Yukimura Rie's house , He Knock the door , Yukimura Rie went to open the door and he surprise When saw Taki .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki !?
    Taki : um...is that bad time to come here ?
    Yukimura Rie : What ? What it is , Why did you come back ? Did you forget something?
    Taki :.............
    Yukimura Rie : come in .
    Taki he get inside and he about to tell Yukimura Rie about what happing .
    Taki : umm...Sensei , my Parents.... They know .
    Yukimura Rie : ?
    Taki : about us , my father was watching me and he saw me with you , he know about our relationship .
    Yukimura Rie : Did They get you out from the house ?
    Taki : No , They didn't , I'm the one who left .
    Yukimura Rie : Then what ? What are you going to do about that ?
    Taki : can I stay here afew days in your place ?
    Yukimura Rie : I'm not sure is that good idea . But alright .
    He Allowed Taki to stay in his house , the Next day in the morning in the Yukimura Rie's house , someone Knocking the door ,Yukimura Rie went to see who's in the door .
    Yukimura Rie : Who is it ?
    (?????) : Excuse me , are you Yukimura Rie ?
    Yukimura Rie : Yes I'am , and you are ?
    (?????) : I'm Taki's mother and I want to talk to you .
    is Yoshizawa's Wife , and Yukimura Rie open the door for her .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : um... Hi , is Taki here ?
    Yukimura Rie : No , He Went to the store to buy something .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : So he did to come here to you place .
    Yukimura Rie : Do you want come inside and wait for him ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Oh! no ...I just I want to talk to you .
    She get inside and they went to the Living room , they sit and talking .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Are you and Taki .......um ....well you know .
    Yukimura Rie didn't say anything .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Mr.Yukimura Rie let me tell you something , I'm not his mother ,I'm his father's Wife .
    Yukimura Rie : ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : I know his father long years ago , and he was in love with a guy , they were togther and living togther after he always want to have son , he Rent a woman to take the vaccine to become pregnant by his Baby by his Sperm , after Taki's born , They both raise Taki , But after Taki become 8 years old they Broke up Because of the School when they find out that Taki live with two men Gay , and the Director of the school ask him he should be worry about your son future and That all is going to affect to his mind Because of his father doing those thing , and Taki he really did .
    Yukimura Rie : I understand now , I'm very sorry it was my fault ,I'll try to talk to him .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : please tell him to come back home .
    Yukimura Rie : I well , don't worry .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Thank you .
    She left Yukimura Rie's house , Then Taki come back to Yukimura Rie's house , when get inside , Yukimura Rie was about to tell him .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , we need to talk .




    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-20-2013 at 09:20 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 6)


    After That in Taki's Home , Yoshizawa's Wife she look to the time ( is 10:35 PM) , Taki didn't come home ( That Because he is in Yukimura Rie's House ) But they didn't know where is Taki now , Yoshizawa Taki's father ask his Wife .
    Yoshizawa : Taki didn't come home Yet ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : I don't know , Maybe he is Hanging around with his friends somewhere .
    and suddenly The Both heard the door Knocking , She went to open the door and it was Taki .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Taki !
    Taki : I'm Home .
    Yoshizawa come to him and he angry .
    Yoshizawa : Taki , Do you know What time is it ? You very late .
    Taki : I'm Sorry .
    Yoshizawa Note something on Taki's Neck , There is Traces kiss on Taki's Neck .
    Yoshizawa : Taki , Next time if you go somewhere , just let us know or give us a call .
    Taki : alright .
    Taki went to his room , and Yoshizawa He Seemed skeptical about something when he saw the Traces kiss on Taki's Neck .The Next in the College after the lesson end , Taki went to the Yukimura Rie's House , Taki and Yukimura Rie They are in the Room ( They about to have sex ) Taki take off his Clothes and he sit in the Bed and Yukimura Rie take his jacket and his Shirt , and He come to Taki , Taki he look to him .
    Taki : Hm! What ?
    Yukimura Rie : We going to do something Different .
    Taki : ?
    He Open his zipper Trousers .
    Yukimura Rie : lick it .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yukimura Rie : What ? you don't want to do that ?
    Taki he Touch Yukimura Rie's ochinchin and he lick it ( it was the first time for Taki )
    (Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , and lick )
    Yukimura Rie : Taki ,That's Enough .
    But Taki he's still Slurp and lick Yukimura Rie's ochinchin .
    (Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , glance , glance , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp )
    Yukimura Rie : H...Hey ...Taki That's Enough , put your Mouth out .
    Then Yukimura Rie Splurt his cum inside Taki's Mouth .
    Taki : MM !!
    Yukimura Rie laugh .
    Yukimura Rie : I Tell you , put your Mouth out .
    Then in the Bed , He put his ochinchin inside Taki's ass .
    Taki : AAAAH.....AH....HAA...HAA.....U..WA... .
    After that , Taki Fall in sleep and after that when he wake up , He Heard song of piano from another room , Wear something ( Not Clothes) and went to the another room and find Yukimura Rie planing piano the muisc of he planing piano was so pretty , Yukimura Rie saw Taki .
    Yukimura Rie : You wake !
    Taki : When did you learned playing the piano ?
    Yukimura Rie : When I was 6 age , I use to play piano everyday , is make me feel better .
    Taki : is really Beautiful music when you play the piano , is make me better when I Hear it .
    Yukimura Rie : Are you hunger ? Do you want to eat something ?
    Taki : No , But can I take a shower ,
    Yukimura Rie : Sure , is over there .
    He went to take shower , Then after that when he come out from the bathroom , The Both heard the door Knocking , Yukimura Rie went to see Who's on the Door .
    Yukimura Rie : Who's is it ?
    Mitsuko : Rie , is me .
    It was Mitsuko on the door .
    Yukimura Rie : Shut !! is my Fiancee .
    Before he open the door , he went to Taki Fast .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , is my Fiancee ,she here , don't let her see you , go and Hide fast .
    Taki He Wear his Clothes fast . and he Hide to the another room ,Yukimura Rie went to open the door for his Fiancee .
    Mitsuko : Hi Rie , Did I surprised you .
    Yukimura Rie : Hi Mitsuko ,Get in .
    He take her to the living room .
    Yukimura Rie : So... why are you here ?
    Mitsuko : That's a stupid question , Of course I come here to see you .
    Taki Try to get out Without she note him , he went to the door and he went out . after week ago in Taki's Home , Taki was ready to go for a date with Hinata .
    Taki : I'm going now .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Don't be late Sweet Hart .
    Taki : Okay , Bye .
    He went out .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : That is so nice , our son going for a date with a girl for the first time .
    Yoshizawa : He should be more careful what's he doing .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Dear , you should be happy for you son going for a date with a girl ,and why you so worry about this ?
    Yoshizawa : That not what I worry about it .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : ?
    She look to him and she know what he mean .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Dear , you Don't need to worry about him , he is with a girl not man .
    Yoshizawa : ..............
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Yoshizawa , I know you and Jinnai long time ago and I know how much you love Jinnai before you two Broke up , But you did the Right thing for Taki and Jinnai Know that too .
    Yoshizawa : Can we just not talking about that .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : I'm Sorry .
    after that , Taki and Hinata went Together to the Amusement parks They taking good time in the Amusement parks , they went inside House of Horror , Railroad and then he buy her stuffed bear , after that they went to eat but suddenly they saw Yukimura Rie and his Fiancee .
    Taki and Hinata : Sensei !?
    He look to them .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki ! and Hinata !
    Mitsuko : What a surprise ! Your students here too !
    Hinata : Hi , my name is Hinata nice to meet you miss .
    Mitsuko : Oh ! you so cute .
    Yukimura Rie : so , you two taking a date ?
    Hinata her face coming red and Taki he can't look to Yukimura Rie .
    Mitsuko : Me and my Fiancee we about to go to eat , Do you went to join us ?
    They didn't say anything .
    Mitsuko : come in , let eat Together .
    They went Together and they sit on the Table and they about to ask for food .
    Taki : umm.....I'm going to the bathroom .
    Yukimura Rie : Me too .
    They went to the bathroom , they get inside .
    Yukimura Rie : a date with a girl ?
    Taki : You did the same thing .
    Yukimura Rie laugh about this and Then they kissing and they going to have sex in the bathroom .
    Taki : Sensei , is that okay ? I mean they the girls waiting for us .
    Yukimura Rie : just 5 Minute .
    He put his ochinchin inside Taki's ass .
    Taki : AH.....AH....HA....U..WA... .
    When they have sex in the bathroom , Hinata and Mitsuko They were talking .
    Mitsuko : You have nice boyfriend .
    Hinata : Oh ... No! he is not my boyfriend .
    Mitsuko laugh .
    Mitsuko : You reminded me of myself Dear , But I'm someday in the Future maybe he well become your Future husband , just like me .
    Hinata her face coming so red too much of Mitsuko telling her that . Then Yukimura Rie and Taki they back and they eat , after that Taki and Hinata went home and Yukimura Rie and Mitsuko too . in the College after the lesson end , Taki went with Yukimura Rie to the Yukimura Rie's house , they get to the car without nobody see them , After they arrived at the house ,they Got out of the car and Yukimura Rie just kiss Taki , then they inside , But there is a car and someone was watching them ( is Yoshizawa , Taki's father , he saw his son with a man )


    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-21-2013 at 07:03 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 5)

    At this moment , Taki and Yukimura Rie They having sex everyday in the College (They Have sex in the library , bathroom and Then they have sex in the classroom sometime ) . afew days in the College after the lesson end , all the students left the classroom and went home Except Taki , he want to talk with Yukimura Rie .
    Taki : Sensei , Can I Talk to you ?
    Yukimura Rie : What is it Taki ?
    Taki : Umm.....well.....you know the all days we doing that .....Maybe we should not doing that in the College .
    Yukimura Rie he look to Taki .
    Taki : Well....I....
    Yukimura Rie : You want come to my place ?
    Taki : ................
    Yukimura Rie : I don't have any Plan , so you can come to my house anytime .
    Taki he just look to Yukimura Rie and he want to tell him something .
    Taki : Sensei , That day , I want to tell you ....I................
    and suddenly Then someone Knocking on his door .
    Taki and Yukimura Rie They look Who's Knocking on the door , it was a woman ( Pretty Woman ) .
    TheWoman : Hi Rie .
    Yukimura Rie : Mitsuko !? What are you doing here ?
    Her name is Mitsuko . She Approached him (come near to him) and kiss him in his lip
    Taki saw her she kissing Yukimura Rie and he Shock .
    Mitsuko : is that Wrong for a Girl to come here and see her Future husband .
    Taki : ( Huh ? What ?) .
    Mitsuko she look to Taki .
    Mitsuko : is that Boy one your students .
    Yukimura Rie : Yes . his name is Taki
    Mitsuko : Hi , My name is Mitsuko , I'm Yukimura Rie's Fiancee .
    She is Yukimura Rie's Fiancee . and Taki Get angry when he saw her kissing Yukimura Rie in his lip .
    Taki : Nice to meet you , if you Excuse me , I'm leaving now .
    Yukimura Rie : Hey ! Taki Wait .
    He left , and Then when he went out he saw Hinata , she was waiting for him outside in the Introduction Door ( College's Introduction door ) .
    Taki : Hinata ? Did you stand here all the time waiting for me ?
    Hinata her face coming red .
    Hinata : Umm....Yes .
    Taki : Sorry to keep you waiting .
    Hinata : Oh no , is okay , can we walk home .
    He smile for her .
    Taki : alright .
    Then they walk home and Yukimura Rie saw them from the Window .
    Mitsuko : is something Wrong Rie ?
    Yukimura Rie : Oh no , Nothing at all .
    The Next day , Taki wan't to come any near from Yukimura Rie after when he saw from yesterday . after the lesson end , everybody went home and Taki went with Hinata to walk home , after that they get to the Hinata's house .
    Hinata : Thank you to walk me home .
    Taki : You welcome .
    Hinata : so Taki , can we go out to the nice place someday ?
    Taki : are you ask me for a date ?
    Hinata :..............
    Taki : Sure , Why not .
    Hinata : REALLY !
    Taki : Yes , How about next week , 03:00 PM to the Amusement parks .
    Hinata : Thank you Taki .
    Then she get inside home and went home , and then in his way , someone come to him by the car , is Yukimura Rie , he come to Taki .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki .
    Taki : Sensei !?
    Yukimura Rie : Get in the car .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yukimura Rie : I said Get in the car .
    Taki : What are you talking about ? leave me alone .
    Yukimura Rie Came down from the car and He Grab Taki and Threw him to the car .
    Taki : WHAT ARE YOU DOING ?
    He Drive the car to his house and He Grab Taki inside the house and He Slam him in the Bed .
    Taki : What Do you think you doing ?
    Yukimura Rie Taking off his jacket .
    Yukimura Rie : Yesterday you said we should not doing that in the College , so we going to do that Right here Right now .
    Taki : What ?
    Yukimura Rie : Take your Clothes off now .
    Taki : No , I Don't want That .
    Yukimura Rie : Shut up now and take your Clothes off .
    Taki : NO.
    He try to left But Yukimura Rie stop him Slam him in the Bed again and Grab Taki his two Hands
    Yukimura Rie : You not going anyway .
    Taki : LET ME GO !
    He kiss Taki in his Mouth and put his Tongue inside Taki's Mouth But Taki Bite him .
    Yukimura Rie : OOW !
    Taki : Why are you doing this to me ? Why you just leave me alone .
    He Being to Cry , Yukimura Rie look to him and try to talk to him Quietly .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , are you angry Because you saw me with my Fiancee when she kiss me?
    Taki Didn't say anything .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , I'm really feel bad about when you saw that , But when I saw you going out with someone else , This is really pisses me off .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yukimura Rie : Yes , That is True .
    Taki : Sensei ?
    He just left Taki's Hands and sit in the bed .
    Yukimura Rie : I Don't have anything to say .
    Taki : But Sensei , Don't you love your Fiancee ?
    Yukimura Rie : I Never thougth you well ask me about that .
    Taki : ?
    Yukimura Rie : But alright, long time ago Mitsuko and I We were friends since we were kids and I tell you before she Daughter of my Mother's Friend , after that the Engagement was the decision of our parents , That why she become my Fiancee Without my resolutions and I don't have any feeling with her , I Don't feel in love with her . But that day when you kiss me , I Had Strange Feeling I never feel it with Girl .
    Taki : Huh !?
    Yukimura Rie : You the First Taki I have feeling with you .
    They looking at each other .
    Taki : Sensei , I'm really sorry .
    Yukimura Rie : is okay if you don't want to have sex with me anymore .
    Taki : No , is not that , Before you Fiancee come , there something I was want to tell you .
    Yukimura Rie : What is it ?
    Taki's Face coming into Red .
    Taki : I.......I Want to tell you that I.......I......
    Yukimura Rie : Hmm?
    Taki : I like you ....Really like you .
    Yukimura Rie Smile for him Then he kiss him in his lip , Then they kissing by Tongue and they both Taking Clothes off ,Yukimura Rie Kissing Taki's Neck and licking and licking Taki's Teat and Such Taki's Teat .
    Taki : UU..AAH...NN !
    He licking Taki's Leg and licking Taki's ochinchin .
    (Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , glance , pant , pant and lick )
    and his Finger Slimy , slide in and Thrust in Taki's ass .
    Taki : AHH....AH ...NN !
    He is Splurt his cum in the Yukimura Rie's Face ,Then Yukimura Rie put his ochinchin inside Taki's ass .
    Taki : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    Taki : AAAAH.....AH....HAA...HAA.....U..WA... .
    After that they stop and they fall in sleep , afew houre Taki just wake up and Yukimura Rie and Taki just ask him .
    Taki : Sensei , should we have sex agian ?
    Yukimura Rie laugh about this
    Yukimura Rie : if you want to .
    and they have sex agian .


    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-07-2013 at 05:13 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 4)

    The Next Days , in Taki's house , Taki was sleep in his Bed and he was thinking about what happen that day with his Teacher Yukimura Rie When he have sex with him in the library ,and he still thinking about this , his Body get so hot when he Remember those thing that Yukimura Rie did to him and he Being Catching his ochinchin and Remember How Yukimura Rie Kiss him by Tongue and Rip his Shirt , licking hisTeat , Slurp and glance his ochinchin and Then Yukimura Rie put his ochinchin inside Taki's ass , Taki still Catching his ochinchin .
    Taki : NN...FU!......H...A...AH...N... .
    ( Stroke , Stroke , Stroke , Stroke )
    He Being Twitch .
    Taki : URGH....!
    He Spurt his cum in his Bed .
    Then someone Knocking on his door , is Yoshizawa's Wife , Taki's father ,
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Taki are you awake ?
    Taki : Ah .....um....Yes I'm awake.....j....just Wait a minute .
    He Clean his cum from his Bed before she get to his room , Then She get to his room .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : SweetHeart You didn't eat your dinner yet and I brought you food .
    Taki : Oh ! Thanks Mom .
    She sit next to him in his bed .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Then Taki , Tell me about it , How your days in the College ?
    Taki : is Great .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : That is it ?
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Aren't you going to tell me more ?
    Taki : Well .......um..... I Met new Friends and we Study and eating Together in the College .
    Yoshizawa's Wife Smiling .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : Didn't you meet a Girl in the College ?
    Taki : Huh !? WHAT?
    She Laughing .
    Yoshizawa's Wife : HA HA ..... Oh is nothing , Goodnight SweetHeart .
    She kiss him in his Head .
    Taki : Goodnight .
    Then she left the room . In the Morning in the College in the classroom ( During Lesson ) , Yukimura Rie was a expound the lesson , Taki was looking to Yukimura Rie and he wasn't advertent to the expound the lesson , Then a Girl Who's sit Next to him try to talk to him , Her name is Hinata
    Hinata : Hey , Taki , What's Wrong ?
    Taki : Huh ? No......Nothing .
    Hinata : What are you going to do after the lesson end ?
    Taki : Why are you ask ?
    Hinata her face coming Red .
    Hinata : Well.....I Was wonder if you don't mine to Walk with me home .
    Taki : ?....um....Sure Why not .
    after the First lesson end and They taking time rest , Taki went to the bathroom , after that he was Wash his hands , Then Yukimura Rie Get to the bathroom and he find Taki .
    Yukimura Rie : Hey Taki ! How you doing ?
    Taki Surprised When he saw him .
    Taki : Huh ! Sensei ?....Hi !
    Yukimura Rie Washing his hands and Taki look to him and say something in his mine .
    Taki : ( Should I talk to him ? or not ) .
    Yukimura Rie : Hmm? What is it ?
    Taki : Nothing .
    Yukimura Rie look to him .
    Taki : um....Sensei , I was wonder ......if you .....
    Yukimura Rie : ?
    Taki : um....Never mind .
    He was about to leave the bathroom But Yukimura Rie Stop him ( He Catch Taki's Hand ) .
    Yukimura Rie : I Know What are you thinking Taki .
    Taki : What ?
    Yukimura Rie : Come here , we have 20 Minute before the lesson Start .
    He took him inside the Toilet room and he Close the Door .
    Taki : Sensei .... Wait we can't do that Right here somebody well Note it .
    Yukimura Rie : Don't worry about this .
    Then he Kiss him and Kissing him by Tongue and he sit on the Toilet and put Taki on his lap , Then put his ochinchin inside Taki's ass .
    Taki : AHHHHHHH !
    Yukimura Rie : low your Voice Taki if you don't want anyone note us .
    Taki : But.. I can't ...i..it Hurts .
    Yukimura Rie : Then put this Napkin in your Mouth .
    He put the Napkin in Taki's Mouth to low Taki's Voice . Then they having sex
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    Taki : MMPH!.....NNGH!...NN!
    After that they stop and they went Back to the classroom , Taki went to take his sit , when he try to sit ....
    Taki : Oow !
    Hinata she look to him .
    Hinata : Huh ? Taki , What's Wrong ?
    Taki : Nothing .
    Hinata : Taki , are you feel alright ? you look Tired .
    (That Because He had sex with Yukimura Rie , That why he Tired ) .
    Taki : No , is Nothing I'm fine .
    Hinata : alright Then , after the lesson end I'll be wating for you outside in the Introduction Door ( College's Introduction door ) .
    Taki : okay .


    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-06-2013 at 02:50 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 3)

    After that the Next day , Taki was Embarrassing from kissing his Teacher Yukimura Rie and beside he have Fiancee .
    in the classroom ,When Yukimura Rie was a expound the lesson , Taki can't look to the Yukimura Rie after what he did , After the lesson end , all the students left the classroom and Taki was want to leave too But Yukimura Rie just call him .
    Yukimura Rie : Hey Taki , I just want to talk to you for Minute .
    Taki just Panic and he don't want to talk to him .
    Taki : I'm sorry Sensei , I'm really don't time I need to go .
    Taki left classroom Fast .
    Yukimura Rie : Hey Taki , Wait ......
    After afew days , Taki still try to Avoid from Yukimura Rie , after that there is no students College after the lesson end and Taki was in the library reading Books , he was along in the library , But after that someone get to the library , is Yukimura Rie and he saw Taki , He take his chance to try to talk to him .
    Yukimura Rie : You still here ?
    Taki Panic and he saw Yukimura Rie .
    Taki : S..... Sensei ?
    Yukimura Rie : The all students went Home and you still here reading Books .
    Taki : I....I was about to leave now .
    Taki was trying to leave But Yukimura Rie Stop him .
    Yukimura Rie : I won't let you Run this time .
    Taki still try to run But Yukimura Rie Catch Taki's hand .
    Yukimura Rie : Don't Run Taki .
    Taki : Let me go .
    Yukimura Rie Catch another Taki's hand and He Slam him on the shelf books .
    Taki : What are you doing ? Let me go .
    Yukimura Rie : Why are you trying Avoid me from the other days ?
    Taki : Umm ....well ...I .....
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , just tell me , Why did you kiss me ?
    Taki just thought that Yukimura Rie is angry Because he kiss him and they Both Guys .
    Taki : Sensei I'm really sorry about it was Mistake from me , I'm Sorry .
    Yukimura Rie : That not the answer I want it .
    Taki : Huh ?
    Taki marvel .
    Yukimura Rie : The others days you just look at me by look Strange and Your face coming red , Then You kiss me For some reasons .
    Taki : Well............I..........
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , I'm not going to let you go anyway after you going to answer my Question .
    Taki : ...............
    Taki Didn't say anything and his face look down , and Yukimura Rie get angry .
    Yukimura Rie : Damn it , this is really pisses me off .
    He raise Taki's Face and he Kiss him .
    Taki : ?
    He still kissing him and then he put his Tongue inside Taki's Mouth and kissing by Tongue , Then Yukimura Rie get his Tongue out from Taki's Mouth and they looking at each other .
    Taki : Sensei ?
    Yukimura Rie : Don't try to Hide Your feeling .
    He Slam Taki on the table office .
    Taki : Sensei ! What are you doing ?
    He Rip Taki's Shirt .
    Taki : Sensei ! Wait ....Stop .....
    Yukimura Rie : Why you want me to stop ?
    Taki : W.....we can't do that and you have Fiancee .
    He Look to Taki's face .
    Yukimura Rie : You the one Who start first and Kiss me .
    Taki : Sensei , Please .......
    He licking Taki's Teat .
    Taki : AH...Sensei.... UN.....AH… .
    ( licking , licking , Nibble , licking and Bite Taki's Teat )
    Taki : AHHHHH.
    Then He taking off Taki's Trousers and He Touching Taki's ochinchin
    ( Note : (ochinchin) is a child's world for '' penis'' )
    Taki : No Sensei Don't Touch there .
    Then He taking off Taki's Pants internal and He licking Taki's ochinchin and he put it inside his Mouth .
    (Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , glance , pant , pant and lick )
    Taki : MM!….AH!..AH!......NN!
    Yukimura Rie still Slurp and glance Taki's ochinchin .
    Taki Being Sweats
    Taki : AAAAAAAAAH !
    He Splurt his cum in Yukimura Rie's Mouth . Yukimura Rie turn Taki around on the table office (Introduction Taki 's body On the table office ) , He put his Finger inside Taki's ass.
    Taki : Sen......sei..... AHH!....HAA....NN! .
    Then he put his ochinchin inside Taki's ass .
    Taki : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!


    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    Taki Crying from the Pain .
    Taki : Sensei...... it ....... it Hurts .......AAH!!
    Yukimura Rie : is That your First Time ?
    Taki : YAS ...AH...... IT IS MY FIRST TIME ......AAAH!
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    Taki : AAAAH.....AH....HAA...HAA.....U..WA...
    Taki 's cum spurt on the table office and Yukimura Rie stop it and put out his ochinchin from Taki's ass and his ass too much cum coming out from his ass and Fall in the floor .
    Yukimura Rie turn Taki around and kiss him by the Tongue .

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-06-2013 at 07:16 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Unconcept Love

    ( Part 2)

    long years ago after Jinnai and Yoshizawa They Broke up , Yoshizawa he Marry a woman after he Broke up with Jinnai and for Taki to have mother ,Taki he become 18 age and his time to go to the College , In the first year Taki went to the College for the first year ( University of Arts ) , In the classroom Taki take his seating place and The lesson began , and then Income professor to the classroom and He identified himself to the first year students , his name is Yukimura Rie ( 29 age) ,
    Yukimura Rie : Good morning Class I'm Yukimura Rie and welcome for the first year in the College , I will be your Teacher in this class .
    After the end of a lesson , some students ask Taki to go with them to the Cafeteria to eat Lunch and he went with them , after one week later , Taki Went to the store to buy something and then The way a coincidence he met Yukimura Rie the Teacher in his College .
    Yukimura Rie : are you one of the my students in the classroom ?
    Taki : Yes , I'am , my name is Taki , nice to meet you .
    Yukimura Rie Extended his hand to a handshake Taki .
    Yukimura Rie : Nice to meet you too Taki . Do you like to Drink Tea ?
    Taki : Sure , why not .
    They went to the Cafe for tea , and then they Talking . Then Taki saw the Ring in Yukimura Rie's left Right and he ask him .
    Taki : You betrothed ?
    Yukimura Rie : Yes , Two Month ago . My Fiancee she Daughter of my Mother's Friend .
    Taki : is she Beautiful ?
    Yukimura Rie : Hey ! Don't ask more Questions of My Fiancee .
    Taki : Oh.... Sorry .
    After they talking the Both went Home , The Next day in the College , Yukimura Rie was in the library and Taki find him there ,
    Taki : Oh! Good morning Sensei .
    ( Note : Sensei is mean Mr or Teacher )
    Yukimura Rie : Good morning Taki . well you mine to open the Window this library Need some conditioned ( Air ).
    Taki : alright .
    When he Try to open the Window , the Window Broke and his hand injured .
    Taki : OOW !
    Yukimura Rie look at him and come to him fast .
    Yukimura Rie : are you alright ? you Bleeding .
    He put hanky on Taki's Hand to stop bleeding , and he took him to the Clinic ( Clinic in the College ). after that they in the Clinic's Room .
    Yukimura Rie : is your hand okay ?
    Taki : is find , Thank you .
    Yukimura Rie : I Don't have any idea about why the Window Broke , and sorry it was my fault
    Taki : No .... is not , I'm just fine .
    Yukimura Rie Smile And Taki when he look to the Yukimura Rie's Smile and suddenly Taki feel Strange feeling .
    Yukimura Rie : Hmm? What's wrong ?
    Taki : umm......no......nothing .
    The Next day Was a rainy day , Taki was in the College , he can't go home with this rain and nobady in College just him , and then he was along Waiting for the rain to stop but then he saw a car coming here it was Yukimura Rie .
    Yukimura Rie : Huh ? Taki ? Why are you still here ?
    Taki : Sensei ? I just can's go home by this rainy day , and why did you come here ?
    Yukimura Rie : I just Forgot some files in the classroom .
    He Came down from the car .
    Yukimura Rie : Hey Taki , let me Drive you Home , Get to the car .
    Taki : Thanks .
    He Went to bring the files and he go back to the car and he get in Then he look to the Taki's Hand is bleeding again
    Yukimura Rie : Taki ? your Hand is bleeding .
    Taki : What ? Oh man .
    Yukimura Rie : My house is close from here , let me take you to my place first and Change the bandage for your wound .
    Taki : alright .
    in the Way when Yukimura Rie Driving the car , They arrived to the Yukimura Rie's house , and then they get inside the house .
    Yukimura Rie : Sit here and wait , I'm going to bring the Pack first-aid .
    after he bring the Pack first-aid , He Removes bandage on Taki's hand , Taki he look to the Yukimura Rie's Face and he had Strange feeling again ,Then Yukimura Rie cleaning Taki's hand from the bleed , Taki Feel Shudder .
    Yukimura Rie : is That Hurt ?
    Taki : uuh.... no .
    He put new bandage on Taki's hand .
    Yukimura Rie : okay , is done .
    Taki : Thanks Sensei .
    Yukimura Rie look to the Window is still raining .
    Yukimura Rie : is still raining outside , Taki you should stay here Little longer in place after the rain stop .
    Taki : um...well ..okay .
    Yukimura Rie : Do you like to Drink Coffee .
    Taki : Sure .
    Yukimura Rie went to the Kitchen to making Coffee . and Taki look around thr room and he saw too much books Yukimura Rie have and he saw too Yukimura Rie have Piano .
    Taki : You have Piano Sensei .
    Yukimura Rie : Yeah , I play the piano sometime .
    He give him cup of Coffee .
    Taki : Thanks .
    Taki just Heard cat's Voice , he look and he saw cute Kitten .
    Yukimura Rie : Oh yeah ! I Forgot to give her food .
    He went to the Kitchen and he bring food for his Kitten .
    Taki : Nice Kitten .
    Yukimura Rie : Do you have Dog or Cat or some Animals ?
    Taki : No , I Wish I have .
    Taki look to the piano .
    Yukimura Rie : Why are you looking to the piano ?
    Taki : oh ! is nothing ....I just I wonder if don't mine to play it .
    Yukimura Rie : You ask me to play the piano ? alright .
    Yukimura Rie went to the piano and he play it , When he play the piano the Music of this piano was so Beautiful and Very quiet , He feel the Music Catching his Heart , Yukimura Rie stop and look to Taki .
    Yukimura Rie : What's wrong Taki ? you face is very red ?
    Taki : Huh ?
    Yukimura Rie come to him and he Catch Taki's Forehead To see his temperature if he sick .
    Yukimura Rie : are you feel sick something ?
    Taki feel Yukimura Rie's Hand , He is so Warm , And suddenly Taki kiss Yukimura Rie in his Lips .
    Yukimura Rie : ?
    Yukimura Rie didn't do anything , he just look to him and ask him .
    Yukimura Rie : Taki , What do you think you doing ?
    Taki : uumm..... I .....um......I'm Sorry Sensei , I....I'm leaving now .
    Yukimura Rie : Hey ! Taki Wait , is still raining outside .
    Taki left Yukimura Rie's House and he feel Embarrassing from what did he do .

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-04-2013 at 05:55 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    ( Unconcept Love )

    Part - 1 -


    This story begins With two lovers ( Jinnai and Yoshizawa ) They were together since they were kids , They live together long time ago after they finish the College , Yoshizawa always want to have Children , But He can't marry a woman Because he love Jinnai and he is a Gay ( Both Gay ) , So he occurred Idea That he don't have to get marry , he is going to Rent a woman , she take the vaccine to become pregnant by his Baby ( Yoshizawa's Sperm ) , Then They found the woman suitable , She take the vaccine and then she become pregnant , A fter 9 Month The Baby born ( Boy ) Yoshizawa's first child , Jinnai and Yoshizawa They They decide to call him Taki , A few Year Taki he become 6 year old and is about Time to go to School , Yoshizawa take his son to the school to registration of his son in a school , Taki going to school everyday , Yoshizawa Connects his son to the school every Morning and after the School Jinnai come to school and take Taki to the Home Everyday , The other Kids ask Taki ,
    Kids : is That Man is your Father ? ( Who is Connects him to the school )
    Taki : Yes .
    and Then after that They ask him agian .
    Kids : Who's That Man ? ( Take Taki to the Home )
    Taki : He is my Father .
    Kids : Your Father ???
    Taki : Yes , I have Two Fathers .
    Kids : ????????????????????????
    After That in the School In a drawing lesson , the Teacher ask the Children to draw and paint something about the Happy family .
    The Kids drawing and the Teacher Watching the Children's draw and Then she saw Taki 's picture .
    The Teacher : What this Taki ?
    Taki : is my dad kissing my another dad .
    The Teacher feel horrified , She take picture from him and Catch his Hand
    The Teacher : Taki Come with me Now .
    Taki : What ? What did I do?
    She take him to the Room's Director of the School , She talk to the Director and show her Taki 's picture . and Then The Director try to talk with Taki and ask him A few questions .
    Director : Taki Be Honestly , Did you really saw your father kissing your another father ?
    Taki : ummm......yes .
    Director : are they kissing by the Mouth ?
    Taki :.........yes .
    Director : is there another something they do than a kiss ?
    Taki remained silent .
    Director : is alright Taki , just tell me .
    Taki : ..........T........They doing something Strange in the Room in the Bed .
    Director : Did you saw them ?
    Taki : They Both Naked and Moving and my dad he is Issued Votes .
    Director knew it and she tell him to go back to the classroom , Then she talk with the Teacher .
    The Teacher : so is that mean they are Gay ?
    Director : I'm afraid that ...... yes they are .
    The Teacher : Then what we should do ? This may affect the future of the boy and his mind .
    Director : That is going to affect the Children in the School too .
    The Teacher : and should we talk to them ?
    Director : I'm going to call Mr.Yoshizawa .
    After that when she call him , he come to the School , he want to the Room's Director .
    Yoshizawa : What is it Director ? is Taki did something wrong ?
    Director : You better to look to this Taki 's picture .
    He look and .......
    Yoshizawa : uuuum....well ....Taki have Big Imagination .
    Director : Mr.Yoshizawa , I Know the truth , You should be worry about your son future , That all is going to affect to his mind Because of the Wrong thing you doing .
    After a long talk with the Director , he take Taki to the home and want to talk with Jinnai .
    Yoshizawa : Jinnai , we need to talk .
    Jinnai : What is it ?
    Yoshizawa : I was in the School and I talk with the Director , and ......... she know about us .
    Jinnai : So what if she know about us ?
    Yoshizawa : But is all about Taki Because that we living together long time ago and she said that Will affect the reputation of the school and Taki 's future .
    Jinnai : I Don't care what she say , that is not her Business .
    Yoshizawa : we should talk about our relationship .
    Jinnai : What do you mean by we should talk about our relationship ?
    Yoshizawa : well is about Taki and our relationship......
    Jinnai : are we talking about or our relationship ?
    Yoshizawa : is just ......
    Jinnai : You the one who want to have a son from the begins .
    and Then they star Fighting .
    Yoshizawa : Can you just Listen to me ?
    Jinnai : Listen to What ? you Want to Broke up our relationship Because of the Director what she said ?
    They still Fighting and Taki Hear them from his room .Then they stop Fighting and Taki Sleep in his bed , Jinnai Went to the Taki 's Room .
    Jinnai : Hey Taki , are you sleep ?
    Taki he look to him .
    Taki : did you Fight with my dad Because of me ?
    Jinnai : No , is not Because of you , we just have some problems , Men's problems .
    Taki : are you two stop Fighting ?
    Jinnai : Taki , you should not to be worry , We do this for your own good , Now go back to sleep .
    Taki : Okay , Goodnight Daddy .
    Jinnai : Goodnight son .
    He kiss him in Taki's Head and left the room .
    The Next Day , Taki didn't find Jinnai and he ask his father ( Yoshizawa ) .
    Taki : Dad , where is Daddy Jinnai ?
    Yoshizawa just told him the truth that They Broke up and Jinnai left the house and never come back and it is for doing what is good for Taki . Taki Crying , and he well never see his father Jinnai .


    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-06-2013 at 05:29 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Note : This Story (Aim in the Heart ) I saw it in my dream so I Write it this story. I Hope you well like when you read it . and this is ( YAOI ) , If is anyone love this story and you want this story to be into manga so please help me to sand this story to the writer (Makoto Tateno) and show to her , to make my story into Manga she the only one who can draw (Paint) this story into Manga ( YAOI ) . So PLEASE PLEASE Help me .
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    Aim in the Heart - Part 13-


    The Next Day in the Morning (Jake) Left The hospital , His family came to him to connect it to the Jake's house ( By Car ) . After they arrived at the Jake's house , They Stayed with him After lunch , Then they left .
    Jake's Mother : Honey is There something you need Before I go ?
    (Jake) : No Mom , I fine , Thank you Very much .
    Jake's Mother : alright Take care .
    (Jake) : See you later .
    She Get into the car with the others family and they left . (Jake) he Closes the Door and he setting in the couch , He Was thinking about What he said to (Albert) .
    (Jake) : ( Clean Me ?.......Did I say Clean Me ? I'm I Crazy something ? What the Hell is wrong with me ? I have sex with a Guy , I supposed Not to Do that ).
    He Took out his cell phone from his pocket and he look to the Albert's Number (phone's Number) .
    (Jake) : ( This Strange ? Why I feel like I want To see him ? )
    (Jake) just look at the Window is Raining out side , Then sleep in couch and he still thinking about (Albert) .
    (Jake) : ( I'm I in love with him ? Why I want him so Badly ? )
    (Jake) He Can't Stop Thinking about (Albert) , So He just wear his jacket and he Went out to the Albert's House to see him . He arrived at Albert's home , He was Trying to Knock the Door But he didn't .
    (Jake) : ( Wait……What should tell him ? Why I'm I here ? ) .
    He just trying to leave But suddenly after he turn around He saw (Albert) Behind him and (Albert) was carry with him Grocery bag (He just returned from Shopping By his car ) .
    (Albert) : (Jake) ?
    (Jake) : M…Mr. (Albert) !
    (Albert) : How long have you been here ? Don't tell you been waiting for me the all day.
    (Jake) : No I just Get here ?
    (Albert) : Come inside is Raining .
    They Get inside .
    (Albert) : I'm going to Brought you towel You very Wet . He went to Brought towel for , (Jake) Then He saw something on the Table There is Some messages one them from New York City .
    (Jake) : Huh ? New York City ?
    He open the messages from New York City To Read What is saying . It said They accepted (Albert) to work with The Police Station (CSI: New York) and he had to moving to the New York City .
    (Albert) : Sorry to keep you waiting (Jake) I Brought you towel .
    (Albert) Saw (Jake) reading his messages .
    (Albert) : (Jake) What are you doing ?
    (Jake) : Are you planning to moving to the New York City ?
    (Albert) : Yes , long time ago I was Trying so hard to get this job in New York City Before I met you , and now finally Get This job , all I need Do to is moving There .
    (Jake) : so you accepted this job .

    (Albert) : Yes I Did .

    (Jake) : Then What about Me ?

    (Albert) : Hm ?

    (Jake) : You going to moving to the New York City , But What about me ? are you going to leave me Behind .
    (Albert) : Actually…….No .
    (Jake) : ?
    (Albert) Took out something from his jacket ( pocket ) . ( his jacket was in the couch )
    (Albert) : Here .
    (Jake) : What is this ?
    (Albert) : Just open it .
    (Jake) He open the envelope and he find inside the envelope two ticket to New York City .
    (Jake) : Ticket to New York City ?
    (Albert) : I wasn't planning to go alone .
    (Jake) : You Mean………
    (Albert) : You said You always dreamed to visit New York , I Know this is crazy But I Want you to come With me to New York .
    (Jake) : But I……………
    (Albert) : (Jake) , Come With me .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert)….. But I already tell you before is not easy for me .
    (Albert) : Is Okay as long I'm here with you .
    (Jake) : I…..I just want to think about this .
    (Albert) : Then just Take one with you if you change your mind , and I Must remind you , I will be at the airport on Saturday at 9:00 AM .
    (Albert) took the towel , he put it in Jake's Hair and he Drying him .
    (Albert) : You Clothes very Wet , you going to Get Cool , you should Take it off , I'll Brought for you some to wear it .
    (Jake) Didn't say anything ( His face just look Down ) .
    (Albert) : (Jake) ?
    (Jake) He look to (Albert) , They look at each other ,Then They Kissing , When were they kissing (Albert) taking off Jake's Clothes ( Jake's jacket and Shirt ) He put his hand inside Jake's Trousers .
    (Jake) : Nu…Hmm .
    He Touching Jake's Sensitive area (ochinchin) .
    ( Note : (ochinchin) is a child's world for '' penis'' )
    and He Thud (Jake) on the couch , They Kissing By Tongue and (Albert) Still Touching Jake's (ochinchin) Then He Take off his Shirt , He taking off Jake's Trousers and the Pants internal , He licking Jake's (ochinchin) and he put it inside his Mouth .
    ( like he is going to eat Jake's (ochinchin) )
    (Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , glance , pant , pant and lick )
    (Jake) : MM!….AH!..AH!......NN!
    He Being Sweats so much from that .
    (Jake) : AAAAAH !
    ( Sppt )
    Jake's cum Splurt in Albert's Mouth ( Albert's Mouth full of Jake's cum ) ,(Jake) sits in the lap of (Albert) ( in couch ) and he licking Jake's Teat ( (Jake) Holding (Albert) ) ,
    ( licking , licking , Nibble , licking )
    (Jake) : HN...HN.....UN...UH.....AH… .
    ( lick and Bite Jake's Teat )
    (Jake) : AHH !
    (Albert) lifting (Jake) a little above , to put him in his (ochinchin) .
    (Jake) : AHHHHHHH !
    (Albert) : Move you self (Jake) .
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    (Jake) : AAAAH.....AH....HAA...HAA.....U..WA...
    Jake's cum spurt on Albert's Face , Then (Jake) Drop on (Albert) and (Albert) grab Jake's Head ( Kissing By Tongue ) . They overturn and (Albert) Put his (ochinchin) inside (Jake) again .
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    (Jake) : HA... HA... AH!...AH..AAH !.... AH!... AH!... AH!...
    (Jake) His eyes Being Tears from the pain and he Holding (Albert) .
    He stopped for temporarily and he Kissing (Jake) ( Kissing By Tongue ) . And……..

    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    (Jake) : AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH…..ALBERT ! AHHH…….
    ( It was a real sexual relationship )
    Then They fell asleep in the couch ,
    in 5:00 AM (Jake) he Wake up before (Albert) , He Get up and he wearing his clothes .Then He look to the Ticket on the Table and He didn't Decides to go with him yet , So He take the Ticket with him and he left Albert's House . after that (Albert) Wake up from his Sleep and he didn't find (Jake) . In a few days on Saturday (Albert) went to the airport ( Ready to moving to the New York City ) , (Albert) sitting and waiting for the media Issue the plane will be Ready to fly to the New York City , and he waiting for (Jake) before he ascends to the plane ,after that the media Issue said the plane is now Ready , so all the passenger must ride to the plane . But (Albert) didn't see (Jake) , he is not here yet , He ride to the plane , and He Take his seat , He look to the Window , Then The Captain of Flight said the plane will be ready to fly in Five minutes , and is too late (Jake) is not Coming ,
    (Albert) : ( is look like he's not coming ) .
    (?????) : Excuse me Is this seat reserved ?
    (Albert) : ?
    (Albert) he just look to the person who's speak to him and he surprising ( is (Jake) ) .
    (Albert) : (Jake) ! I thought you not coming .
    (Jake) : Well....That because I don't want to miss that to go to the New York .
    (He don't want to admit , The true is , he want to be with (Albert) )
    (Albert) Laughing so much .
    (Albert) : Ha Ha Ha .
    (Jake) : Hey ! What are you Laughing for ?
    (Albert) : Ha Ha Ha …..No …is nothing .
    The plane start to Flight , and Then The plane on the way to the New York City .after They arrived to the New York City , (Albert) took (Jake) to the trip ( To The Statue of Liberty ) in night , Then They went up to The Statue of Liberty's Head .
    (Jake) : Wow ! I can see The New York from here , It's beautiful and the New York's lighting is pretty at night .
    (Albert) : I'm glad that you like it .
    (Jake) he look to (Albert) and he smile .
    (Jake) : (Albert) .
    He look to (Jake) .
    (Jake) : Thanks you .
    Then they Kissing and Holding .
    ( They going to have sex in The Statue of Liberty's Head )
    (Jake) : I love you (Albert) .
    (Albert) : I love you too (Jake) .

    ( The End )
    Updated 11-22-2012 at 08:28 AM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart - Part 12-


    After That When (Jake) fell Down on the ground , He open his Eyes and he see the Light ,He saw (saya) .
    (Jake) : (saya) ?
    He Think he is Dead now .
    (saya) she Smiling for him .
    (saya) : (Jake),Thank you ,But I Don't Want you to suffer For me ,So I want you to pursue your life , Don't suffer for me .
    (Jake) : (saya) !
    (saya) Catch Jake's Face By her Hands .
    (saya) : Promise Me (Jake) You well pursue your life for me .
    (Jake) began to cry.
    (Jake) : I want to be Together again (saya) .
    (saya) : (Jake) I always Be in your Heart , Don't Cry
    I love You (Jake)
    Then she kiss him .
    (saya) : Good Bye .
    She left him And she start Walking away into the Light .
    (Jake) : (saya) ?
    He runs after her and Duration his hand to her .
    (Jake) : (saya) ……Wait …..(saya) Don't Go please I Want to be With you , Don't Go please .
    (saya)…………. SAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA .
    And suddenly (Jake) Wake up and he find himself in the Bed , and There is someone with him , is Jake's Mother .
    Jake's Mother : (Jake) ,Oh Thanks Goodness You Finally Wake .
    (Jake) : Mother?
    Jake's Mother She Hold him and she Start Crying .
    Jake's Mother : Oooh (Jake) I was so worry about You , You Didn't wake up for two weeks in hospital .
    (Jake) : Two Weeks ?
    (Jake) He just Remember Now That He was kidnapped and Then (Albert) Come to him and save him .
    (Jake) : (Albert) ? Where is (Albert) ?
    Jake's Mother : You Mean That Investigator Who save your Life ? long Two Weeks He just come to The hospital To see You Everyday ,and He was Sitting here and Watching you ,Waiting for you to wake up, he Was very Worry about you .
    (Jake) : (Albert) Was here Everyday ?
    Jake's Mother : I'm going to tell everyone Now , (Jake) I'm so happy to see alright .
    After a few Hour Jake's Mother She Went Home and (Jake) Still in The hospital Sleeping in the Bed alone in the Room , But someone Knocking on the door .
    (Jake) : Who is it ?
    The someone open the Door and he Get in .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert) !
    (Albert) : (Jake) ! You Wake .
    (Jake) : Did you come here to see ? .
    (Albert) : Yes, They Told me you Can leave The hospital Tomorrow Morning .
    (Jake) : Yeah .
    (Albert) : are you alright ? Is your body still hurts?
    (Jake) : No …. I'm Fine .
    (Albert) look at Jake's Face .
    (Albert) : These criminals who kidnapped you They Working with The Chieftain Who's name is (Gai) They call him (Boss) and he is responsible for the sale and manufacture of illegal weapons and drugs , He deal with the rest of the criminals in the sale of arms or drugs or Both and Beside He is heartless criminal .
    (Jake) : and………..
    (Albert) : Don't Worry about this , The Policemen has Been arrested him and the rest of the gang too , Court will decide fate them Those criminals And especially their leader (BOSS) .
    (Jake) : (……….) .
    (Albert) : Oh another something , The Man you Shot him his name is (Yokozawa) he is Gai's Younger Brother and He………
    (Jake) : I Know .
    (Albert) : Hmm? (Jake) are you alright .
    (Jake) : I…..I Shot someone…….. I kill him ,and I never did that Before .
    (Albert) : (Jake) look it me .
    He look at (Albert) .
    (Albert) : is alright , Everything is going to be fine .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert) .
    (Albert) : Yes ?
    (Jake) : ummm…….Thank you For saving my life .
    (Albert) : (Jake) if you need anything just call me ,Okay . You need a rest .
    (Albert) He about to leave But (Jake) Stop him ( He Catch Albert's Hand ) .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert) Please Don't leave .
    (Albert) : What? You want me to Stay here ?
    (Jake) : (……….) .
    (Albert) : is alright , if you want me to stay I'll stay .
    (Jake) Still Catching Albert's Hand and He Trembling now .
    (Jake) : Clean Me .
    (Albert) : Huh?
    (Jake) : They F**ck My Body , I Want you Clean Me Right Now .
    (Albert) : What are Talking about ? I Don't want to Do that Right now (Jake) , We in hospital and you Tired , You Need to Get a rest First .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert)…..Please .
    (Albert) he look to him .
    (Albert) : (Jake) I Don't Want To Hurt you .
    (Jake) : You said You like me , When He F**ck me it was So Hurts like something Burning inside me , My Body Still Hurts From That .
    (Albert) : (Jake) …….
    (Jake) : all I Did Was Thinking about you To Come and save me .
    (Albert) : But I Did come for you ,Right ?
    (Jake) : Yes .
    (Albert) : Do You Think if I have sex with you just for clean you Body ,Well Make you feel Better ?
    (Jake) : Yes .
    (Albert) : alright Then .
    (Albert) He just Take off his Shirt and They Kissing ( (Jake) Holding (Albert) and they kissing ,Sleeping in the Bed) .
    (Albert) : (Jake), if you change your Mind just tell me to stop .
    (Jake) : No….just put it inside me .
    (Jake) Turn around On the bed (Introduction Jake's body On the bed ) . and (Albert) put it inside him
    ( The Real Sex ) .
    (Jake) : AAAAAAAAAAH .
    (Albert) : Do you want me to Stop ?
    (Jake) : No……Keep Going .
    (Albert) Catching Jake's Hand and he Kiss Jake's neck back .
    (Albert) : I'll Clean all your Body They Dirtied you .
    (Jake) : AH…….U...WA...HAAA...AH…. AAAAH .
    After They have sex , (Jake) Fell aSleep , (Albert) he kiss Jake's front(forehead) and Then he left the hospital .

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-19-2012 at 07:58 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart - Part 11-


    After That moment , (Gai) He hurting (Jake) By rape , (Jake) His body has completely collapsed , Then (Gai) He finally stop .
    (Gai) : Hm….That wasn't Bad !
    Okay …..I'll open the chains on your hands and Get some Rest , I'll Be Back later .
    He open the chains on the Jake's hands and (Jake) fell Down on the ground Then (Gai) left him and he close the Door , (Jake) He can't move ,He can't feel his Body , But he just Note something ( That is the same What happen to (saya) when they raped her , She raped By Four Men , They Hurts her too much by rape That Why she Die ) .
    (Jake) : is……..is that What happen to you (saya) ? is that……the same Pain ?
    Is this the last day I will live in it?......(saya)….. I'm really sorry …. I swear to find Them and Make Them pay for you Dead ….But now I can't , .
    And he start Crying .
    (Jake) : I'm sorry (saya)…….. I'm sorry .
    later (Jake) Still on the ground Without any move ,But Then There was a noise (like someone fighting ) from the another side from the Door.
    someone open the Door , Is (Albert) , He Finally Found (Jake) , He come to him and lift him .
    (Albert): (Jake) ! (Jake) ! Wake up !
    (Jake) Open his Eyes and he found (Albert) in front of his eyes .
    (Jake) : Al…… Al…….. Albert ?
    (Albert): (Jake) Don't Worry I'll get you out from here .
    he look to (Albert) .
    (Jake) : Y…..You late .
    (Albert): (?) .
    (Albert) he look to (Jake) he is Nude and his Body so much Punch and injured, But He Note something,There is too much Blood Between Jake's legs and in the ground .
    (Albert):Those bastard ! What the Hell Did they do to you?
    (Albert) Take off his jacket and dresses for Jake and He intolerable That What they did to him .
    ( He knew That They Torturing Painful torture him and raped him ) .
    (Albert): Hey , Can you stand?
    (Jake) : I Can't Feel my Body.
    (Albert): Then I'll Carry you , To Get you out here .
    (Albert) Carrying (Jake) Went out from the Door and he look right and left
    To make sure nobody here , (Jake) he just saw the Man Was guarding the door ,He was the one from the four man who's kill (saya) (The Third killer ) (Albert) kill him , he Broke killer's Neck .
    (Albert) Went to the path Carrying (Jake) ,And They Get to the Big Place Where they Keep too much Box container on weapons, drugs . Then (Albert) Passes this way so they could reach to the exit . But someone shoting them By guns, (Albert) Ran Fast to find place to hide (Carrying (Jake) With him ) , He find place with many Box and He put (Jake) Down .
    (Albert): Hey (Jake) , Look at me , I'll Go and take Care these men , No matter what happen don't leave you place Okay . I'll be Back for you .
    (Albert) Took out his Gun and he Went to Find These armed men .
    someone shoting , (Albert) Hide Behind the Box and he try to look (They are only Three men ) . (Albert) waiting for the moment to be able to shot one them , one of them has emerged and (Albert) Shot him . and the second Start shoting (Albert) . But (Albert) was able to void the bullet and he Shot the second . He just look there and there But He can't see The Third ,He out from the hiding place . And suddenly The Third Shot him from behind , But (Albert) Turn around Fast and Shot him .then He trying to go Back to (Jake) to Make sure he's alright . But (Albert) saw man Searching here and he Very Close to the Jake's bunker were's he Left him .So he Near to him quietly and He Pointing the Gun in the Man's head .
    (Albert) : Put you Gun Down .
    He Put his Gun Down ( The Man was The Fourth Killer ) .
    But (Albert) Heard someone speak from behind .
    (?????): I Think you shoud Put you Gun Down too .
    But (Albert) Catch The Fourth Killer Quickly fast and He Pointing the Gun in The Fourth Killer's head .
    (Albert): If you Shoot I'll Shoot him .
    The Man is (Gai) :HaHaHa……Do you Think I'm Really Care about him .
    (Gai) Shot The Fourth Killer (Three Shoots ) ,And (Albert) Ran Fast to Hid .
    (Gai): You Can Ran But you can't Hid .
    (Gai) Searching For (Albert) .
    (Gai): Come Out … Come Out Whatever you are .
    (Albert) Hiding and he Heard steps walking which means he approaching to him ,He just comeout and Trying to Shot him But (Gai) Shot Albert's Gun and his Gun Throw away , (Albert) Became without weapons . (Gai) Near to (Albert) and Pointing the Gun in Albert's Face so Close .
    (Gai) :HaHaHa……You very Slow, Now Do you have something to say ?
    (Albert) Quickly Catch Gai's Gun and They Both try to Take the Gun Then The Gun Throw away . (Albert) and (Gai) Fighting , (Gai) Hit (Albert) in his Face and Punch in his stomach, (Albert) Hit (Gai) in his Face (Two Punch ) and (Gai) Hit him in his jaw But Then (Albert) Hit him and Punch his stomach (By his leg) Then (Gai) Fell Down and (Albert) Took out his handcuffs and Put it in Gai's hands .
    (Albert): Yes.….. I have something to say, you under arrest .
    But someone behind him .
    (?????):Okay…..Game over.
    (Albert) surprised .
    It was The second killer (Yokozawa) The Last killer .
    (Yokozawa) : Just Stand and Turn around .
    (Albert) Did What he request him to Do , (Albert) want to ask him about something .
    (Albert): It Seems that you linked to the murder the man was Imprisoned in the dungeon that I arrest him .
    (Yokozawa) : That Right , We just saw you arresting him , so all I did is just disguised in policeman uniforms to Get to The police station ,Then I went to him and talk to him and he tell me about that Guy that We :bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: his Girlfriend six month ago .
    (Albert): So you give him Cup of coffee Which is contain of Poison .
    (Yokozawa) : So You noticed this ,Yes I put the Poison in his Cup ,So he can't give any information of Our workplace to the Police , We don't need him anyway .
    (Albert): Is that Why you kidnapping (Jake) Because you Thought he still Remember your Face and that Well Be problem for you ?
    (Yokozawa) : Enough now ,and Say GoodBye To the World .
    He going to Shot (Albert) But Then unexpected Sudden .
    (?????): Don't try to press the trigger of your Gun .
    (Yokozawa) : Huh !?
    (Albert): (Jake) !!
    It was (Jake) and he carries a gun in his hand (Albert's Gun) .
    (Jake): Put you Gun Down and Turn around .
    (Yokozawa) Put his Gun Down and he Turn around .
    (Jake) look at Yokozawa's Face .
    (Jake): You Kill (saya) the Girl I love The Good Girl The innocent and She died an ugly death . I'll Never Forgive you, Go to the HELL !
    And he Shot him in the head ((Yokozawa) is Dead ) .Then (Jake) fell Down on the ground .
    (Albert): (Jake) ?....... (Jake) ! .
    , He Went fast to him and lift him .
    (Albert): (Jake) ....... hold on, just Stay With Me .

    Don't Die (Jake) Stay With Me

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-20-2012 at 10:30 AM by Thecloudyday89
  15. Psychotic's Avatar
    INCREDIBLE

    This line " So much Cum Fall in the Ground with too much Blood (Jake's Blood )" really spoke to me and made (Psychotic) feel so scared

    You are a good writer (Sarah) and I wish to court you.
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    Aim in the Heart- Part 10-


    After They Torturing (Jake) , They left him With (Gai) , (Gai) Taking off his Jacket and his Shirt Then he disarmament his belt (Trouser belt) . And He approached to (Jake) .
    (Gai): Now…..Should We Start ?
    (Jake) his Body so Collapsible , (Gai) He Catch Jake's hair (By his hand) painfully and he lifted to the above into his face . And he Get his tongue into inside Jake's mouth.

    ( It Hurts, like he going to Torn Jake's tongue) .

    (Jake): Hnnnnn…….Ah…..ku……Hmmmmm.

    (Jake) Bite Gai's mouth and (Gai) his mouth Bleeding .
    (Jake): Don't ……. put you ………. Dirty tongue in my MOUTH
    So He Catch Jake's Neck and Suffocate him .
    (Gai): You are so fierce , I'm going To F**ck Right Now .
    Jake's Face turned into concern face , is not use He can't Ran away from that .
    He take off Jake's Trouser Then Jake's Pants internal, Then He lifting Jake's legs above.
    (Jake): NOOO….STOP!
    He raped him .
    (Jake): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !
    (Jake) Screaming From the Pain , (Gai) Hurts him so much, Even Jake's eyes tears From the Pain , So much Cum Fall in the Ground with too much Blood (Jake's Blood ), The only thing (Jake) Thinking is (Albert) , he Hope He well Come here and save him now .
    (Jake) said in his mind : (Albert) Help me .

    (To Be Continued)
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    Aim in the Heart-Part 9-


    When (Albert) knew that (Jake) Has been kidnapped , He told The Policeman to find those numbers of this Car to able to find the location ( The place Where they took (Jake) ) .
    And for the (Jake) When he was unconscious , Kidnappers poured water on him and he Regain consciousness , He find himself ( He Found his hands Restricted up by chains ) .
    (Jake) : What the Hell ? What is going on here?
    (?????) : Well…Well ! You finally Wake up !
    (Jake) look at the person who's talking wait him .
    (Jake) : Who are you ? and what do want from me?
    (?????) : Don't you Remember me ? We Met Before .
    (Jake) : Huh?
    (Jake) he look to the person's Face and he Remember , He knew this face .
    (Jake) : You !……YOU THE ONE WHO KILL (SAYA) !
    (?????) Change into The second killer : (Saya)? Who's (Saya)?
    (Jake) : BASTARD! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU .
    The second killer : Ohhh..Yes ! You Mean The pretty Girl from the public parks at that night , I Remember That time we F**ck her, I'm Really Enjoy to F**ck her Body and I Want to F**ck her again .
    (Jake) Feel tantrum anger When he Heard that (burst of anger intensity ).
    (Jake) : YOU SON OF BITCH !
    The second killer Punch in Jake's stomach and it really Hurt him .
    The second killer : Silence ……and Beside I'm not the only one who kill you Girlfriend , they was with Me .

    The Two Men with him They are Involved in a crime in the death of (saya) . So The (saya)'s killers is finally Complete .


    The Third killer : What are we going to do with him now?
    The Fourth Killer : We can do whatever we want…Right (Yokozawa) ?
    The second killer His name (Yokozawa) .
    (Yokozawa): Well….I was Thinking about this .
    (Yokozawa) raise Jake's face and he look to him with a wicked smile .
    (Yokozawa): What are we going to do you ?
    They Torturing (Jake) Painful torture (Hitting him too much) .
    After that (Albert) Still Waiting for The Policeman to Give him the location of the Kidnappers's (Jake).
    Policeman : Investigator (Albert) I find the location of the Kidnappers .
    (Albert) : Tell me, Where is it ?
    Policeman told him the location , (Albert) went quickly And Riding into the car to go to the location of the Kidnappers's (Jake) .
    (Albert) : I Hope its Not to late……. (Jake) just Stay alive .
    After that when (Albert) want to the location of the Kidnappers .The Kidnappers Torturing (Jake) so much and His body is exhausted from the Torture, Then someone open the Door and he come inside .
    (?????): What going on here?
    (Yokozawa): Oh ! Brother ! You Back .
    (?????): Who's that ?
    (Yokozawa): No Body …..we just play with him .
    The Man who open the door he's (Yokozawa)'s Big Brother his name (Gai) , he is Arms dealer and drug (BOSS).
    (Gai) look to the (Jake) and raise him to see Jake's Face .
    (Gai): He have pretty Face! Hey , I Can't Believe it you didn't give him to me first .
    (Yokozawa): Sorry.. Bro.
    (Gai): Look at his body it is full of Punch , You Hit him so much .But anyway I think I can play with this Baby .
    (Yokozawa): Do whatever you like Brother .
    (Gai): Can you Guys leave me with him Now ?
    (Yokozawa): Okay is all yours Now .
    They lift the room , (Jake) so tried and wake , He look at to (Gai) (What he going to do with him?).
    (Gai): Now…..Should we play?

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-16-2012 at 08:58 PM by Thecloudyday89
  18. Thecloudyday89's Avatar
    Aim in the Heart-Part 8-


    After that in the police station they find The killer was Dead , (Albert) Went to the police station .

    (Albert): Where is the body?
    The policeman took him to the dungeon which was The Killer caged .
    Policeman : Here is the body .
    (Albert): Who did he Die?
    Policeman : We don't have any idea yet .
    (Albert): Hmm?
    Policeman : What is it ?
    (Albert): He must be die by Poison !
    Policeman : Poison? How do you know that?
    (Albert): just look at his Mouth is too much Foam coming out from his mouth and his Eyes is up too much ,He must be Drunk something , Go and tell them to take this Body to the Chamber nomination and Take this Cup of coffee to examine is must be contain something.
    Policeman :Yes Sir !
    After a few Hours (Jake) Was Walking around in the street he is so Angry about The killer's Dead .
    (Jake):( DAMN IT! I was so close to find the Killers……now How can I find the others?…..Still ….Still want to get my Revenge).
    After (Jake) was Walking in his way , someone Hit him in his head and he lost consciousness, and They took him away.
    (Albert) ask the Doctor (specializes in filtration) about The killer's Body .
    (Albert): What did you find out?
    Dr. : You was Right this Man Die By Poison and This Poison we find it in the Cup of coffee is look like someone give it to him , he didn't know the Cup of coffee contain the Poison .
    (Albert): That Mean someone want him dead , so he could not give police information about them . Damn it !
    Policeman : Excuse me … Investigator (Albert) .
    (Albert): What is it?
    Policeman : There is kidnapping happen in the street.
    (Albert): Huh?
    Policeman : Come with me You can see it in the Surveillance Camera .
    (Albert) Went to see The kidnapped in the Surveillance Camera .
    (Albert): Okay show me now.
    Policeman : Yes Sir .
    (Albert) Look to the screen , he see the man was walking and there is someone Behind just Hit him in his Head and put him in the Car, They was two Who kidnapped the Man . (Albert) saw Something strange in the screen .
    (Albert): Turn it Back the video .
    Policeman : Yes Sir .
    He Turn it Back the video , (Albert) looking to this man who was kidnapped ,it was (Jake) .
    (Albert): Damn ! it's (Jake) ! Hey , try to find those numbers of this Car And Find the location,
    NOW HURRY .
    Policeman : Yes Sir .

    (To Be Continued)
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