Mr Twisticles

I wrote this recently and would like to know what you think.



As you wander this deserted plain, alone and cold
The sky offers you its gift as you start to wilt
Shaded by clouds filled with the tears of painful histories
The heavens open and you blossom into life.

She plucked you from the field of daydream daisies
One in a million, your petals droop from the happy rays
Your addictions to pain, like solvent abuse she had mirrored ...

What, the actual smurf is with people nowadays?
Did we all just kind enter this era where someone can just smurf someone else over, with no care of the consequence of their feelings?
It drives me smurfing crazy how this is happening, I've got friends, coming to me and getting down, because someone in their life decided it would be fun to treat them as though they would be impervious to the hurt they would bring to their life.
Does no one appreciate the damage they can cause ...

Good evening, or morning or afternoon or night!

I have come to the conclusion that I am a busy boy!
My band; Looking Glass Diaries, are really hitting it hard now. We've been a full band for about 3 months and the guitarist and I have been writing music together for the band for a good year now.
We rehearse every thursday, which is good because there is stability and we also have 10 songs fully finished. Well, we have 13, but we have recorded 10 as a bedroom demo. The genius ...