Oh man I just came up with a motif for my book. It's also a motif for one of the main characters, and other characters touched by him by extension. And then I checked what it symbolizes and it just fits SO PERFECTLY! I THINK I AM BACK! GOD, PLEASE LET ME BE BACK!
If you notice any like big grammatical or spelling errors, let me know. But otherwise it's still an early draft so I'm looking for more general thoughts. Like pacing, detail, etc. If anything is confusing. You know it's always clearer in your head than it is to the reader xD. There's no big rush, I know you're busy. Thany thanky!
Do you want me to go into super detail or just my general thoughts?
Sure thing! If the heat doesn't slow my work down to molasses-drive, I'll check it at work tomorrow!
HOTLAND Ima send you my edited part 1 of chapter 1. Sharks and Karifean already took a look so it's been much improved. Just give it a look when you get a bit
Also, the muSIC IN UNDERTALE OMGGGGG!!!!!!
Sure, thanks!
Once it's done then maybe! I'm still rewriting my first two chapters. I can send something over once I have more of it. You can send me stuff as well! I'm a bit busy at the moment, but I WILL get to it when I have more time!
Ohh you can send me some of your stuff if you want me to give feedback!
