I want some!
the haribo smurfs are good!
Freya said the same thing about the "smut".
That sounds fine to me. I think she wants to make sure the story isn't smut or anything.
Pike, I asked an artist if I could use their artwork for one of my stories for EoFF. They got back to me & asked if they could see the story first. Do you think this is normal procedure? Should I let her see it?
I can see how it would be confusing though
AH! Now I see it! I didn't read it properly. That's why you're the professional.
take out the prepositional statement "at the time" and it makes sense. "the ((at the time)) very radical idea." "very radical idea" is the subject, "the" is denoting that subject.
Originally Posted by Pike He eventually became an engineer and, in the 1950s, the at the time very radical idea of playing games on a television screen began to swirl around in his imagination. The what @ the time?
Nah, that "the" is actually supposed to be there!
