Conversation Between milliegoesbeep and Jiro

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  1. Nonsense; you're actually doing an excellent job with all the grammar. I'll keep an eye out for any other little mistakes but honestly it's not really that necessary. Just helps that I'm a little bit OCD about the little things xD I do have a suggestion though! Blocks of text can be overwhelming (although one "episode" at a time is really good at breaking it down) but I think you need a way to highlight items and such. Bolding them doesn't make them stand out too much; have you considered colouring them differently? I think it might make the text look a little bit "nicer" I guess is the word, and helps readers scan for the collectibles
  2. I'd be honoured! My grammar isn't all that fantastic so I'd be happy for you to edit through it. I'll be doing some more walkthrough today so I'm hoping the guide will help you through
  3. I admire your persistence then; what an undertaking! I'm actually a bit of an editing whiz and Baloki said he's already been chatting with you, but I thought I should ask; is it alright if I edit a few minor grammatical errors as you go? It saves you having to worry about any possible mistakes, not that there are many at all! You're actually pretty infallible, but I did notice an open bracket that doesn't get closed But yeah, I'm just keen to help out if that's alright by you! I can't contribute to the construction as sadly I haven't done any more than play the prologue but I more than happy to be your support and cheerleader on this journey
  4. Thank you I'm writing it as I go along so it take a very long time .___.
  5. Have you already written a lot of it, or are you doing it as you go? I've never really embarked on writing a walkthrough before but I realise that it's a huge time investment and with how well you're doing, I want to give you all the support I can!
  6. Oh, you're very sweet. Thanks, I'm glad the guide is useful!
  7. You are already one of my favourite members! I'm going to be using your guide to Final Fantasy XIII-2 when I start playing it soon (school is kicking my butt ) so I look forward to more and more updates! I don't really have suggestions for you other than keep up the great work
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