I didn't get to read the whole thing yet, but I did notice the paragraph where you describe how to fight a battle that might need to be cut. If you're doing something like this, you don't need that kind of information. It should be more about what the game was about & what you think of it. Really, that's the only kind of thing I would look out for when writing this kind of stuff. The only caveat is, if something w/ the gameplay stands out (positively or negatively) then you can mention it (example, "in FFVIII I find it a pain to have to do the trigger command when fighting as Squall when I'm trying to make my selections for my other characters").
I mean if it doesn't seem boring or to drag on I'll leave it as is, I just don't want it to come off as wall of text, so if it doesn't seem too long I'll just worry about correcting what needs correcting and not the length. Sharky said it was fine so there you go Thanks for reading~
I've skimmed it & will see where we can tighten it up. 1,200 doesn't sound too bad, but when I get a chance I'll see what we can do w/ it.
About 1200 words. I'll send you my Xillia review draft to look over~ Dun worry about spelling and grammar and whatnot, I was just getting my ideas on paper
Have you done a word count on any of them? I'm sure if they're ~500-1,000 words, it wouldn't be bad. I know BoB's aren't too brief & everyone's itching to see his to completion. If you want me to look over any of them, I can.
I've started writing my reviews for my games list so that when its time to post it I don't have to write 60+. However, I think they might be too long and people will be bored and hate it
Yeah some I can already tell will be on the list so once I feel I've basically "peaked" at it, I'll probably watch the rest or read the story or something and move on
That sounds like a good idea. It's good to add a different spin on it. Remember, you probably don't have to finish each game to know how you feel about it, so don't stress yourself to complete every game. The most important thing is having fun, which the list is all about.
Oh I am so very excited for the house, thank you! I'm not sure how long it will take. I'm trying to power through it. I've been playign Xenoblade but it's a massive game. However, I've caught up to the story online and I know how it plays so I'm thinking of just watching the rest. I got through Xillia (almost, a level or two left) in a few weeks, I'm about halfway done Fire Emblem, and I've got a few more going. I guess it depends on the lengths of the games. Like I said, it'll be March at the latest. I'm pretty jazzed about it! I'm even doing a favourite character section to make it less generic and more personal
That's great! I can't wait to see it. 20 more games should be what, a few months? lol I've been so busy w/ my stories & stuff I haven't even thought of mine in a while. Anyway, congrats on the house! You must be elated.
