Hehe, thanks
Very excited!
Chance is the next narrator for "Eden". You excited? I'll try to upload his chapter today, and maybe chapter 2 to Natoya as well, but you know that one
Yeah I could do that, thanky
Hmm... I'm kind of stuck here, but Ill think of it. In the meantime, maybe you could come up with something if you switch up the sentence? Like you could go for "hitting her was harder than..." - I think that may leave more breathing room.
Yes. And either tone would work for this scene
And you mean that she evades so well, correct?
Hmm... You want that comical or serious?
Do you have a good metaphor for something that's hard to hit. Like She was harder to hit than ________ Also thanky for the help
No dreading. Only short. Sentences.
