I think its good enough to continue. You really did write very good characters and it was a very intriguing story. It made me want to read more! I've never actually written a short. And I think I'm so in love wit my characters because I've spent 18 years developing them and the story and changing them, modifying them, adding or removing thing, so it's basically what I want it to be now. I am ending up giving Nina a bigger role than anticipated though. I like her more than I thought and she's ending up being a romantic interest. Did you know that in my head back in like, 98, Alex used to be a girl named Crystal who has blonde hair, except for the tips which were black, and she wore like a sparkly blue dress? Oh 6 year old shion :P. And thanks for the compliments . It's always encouraging to see progress, so I am glad I've been improving.
They're really good! It's like, both with your writing and drawing, I can see clear progress. It's amazing really. My progress is usually so slow that I don't notice it until I look back on my work form a couple months ago. It's also been a long time since I made any progress whatsoever on my drawings, but then again, I haven't really been practicing that hard. Your progress is still astounding and I hope that it's gonna keep you motivated! Do you think this story is good enough to be continued? Because I have a couple of ideas that I think might be interesting, but not really sure if this story can really take it. Writing comedy is really hard, but I gotta admit I think I did a good job on the characters. Do you ever get such a feeling? I mean, obviously you love the characters from your novel, I can tell, but do you sometimes make up characters for a short or something and instantly fall in love with them?
Sure, no problem! Thanks for following my drawings!
Thank you so much for the feedback
Yaaaay congrats!
I just beat the champion in Pokemon X I think this game has the easiest main game section so far.
I might look into it, actually! It's been a while since I've read any manga. The last one was xxxHolic, I think.
I don't like the anime as much, but I really like the manga. It's basically about some people who turn in to stuff with cold water and turn back with hot water. Like Ranma turns in to a girl, his dad in to a Panda, etc. It's also a love story. Ranma's father basically promised him to 2 different women and he ended up engaged to another by an amusing series of events, so he has 3 finacees, and one of them is the classic neither of them can admit their feelings for one another. Another of his finacees turns in to a cat and he's afraid of cats, so that can be pretty funny, too. I think there's a few sites that will let you read it for free if you're ever interested.
I actually haven't. I watched just a bit of the anime back when it aired on the German channel RTLII - in German I was a kid, so I barely remember it
Have you ever read the Ranma 1/2 manga?
