Oh wow, I had no idea it was this personal. It does sound like a good idea to keep it just between the two of you, then Hope all goes well with that, them! Just keep up the good work. Don't you give up now! As for the other story - you betcha! I'll gladly read your stuff!
With that said, I don't mind discussing another story I've been wanting to work on with you to see what you think.
I wish I could but I can't, I'm actually writing it for a special someone and made a promise I would let them read it when it was done. Part of me feels like I may just leave it as something only the two of us would know, especially since she kind of inspired the story initially and I don't really know if she would want me to share it with anyone. I might change my mind since part of me feels I should let an editor take a look at it so I can fix it better but right now it has been a bit of a personal journey going through it again. I don't know... part of me is feeling weird about the whole story and I may be making a bigger deal out of something that really isn't but part of me would love to tell her only she has read it and no one else. It's kind of my version of Elton John's "Your Song". I don't know...
You have to let me read it once it's done. It sounds awesome!
It's been... interesting to say the least. It sounds more like a silly children's story right now but I'm still working on a first draft. My main issue is that I am terrible with sticking to poetic formula and have been using a weird hodge-podge method. Each stanza is five lines, with two sets rhyming with each other but the final lines all rhyme with each other to create some thematic rhythm. Course I am talking out of my ass on whether this will actually be engaging since I never did well with poetry myself and it has always been one of my least favorite mediums. Still it's good to try new things and I feel I've gotten farther with the story than I would have with a traditional story narrative. I can already tell the final product will be radically different from the first draft as I do more research on poetic form.
Oh wow, that sounds intriguing! I always sucked at poems Hope it all turns out well for you!
I finally got started on the one story I whined about in my blog. I found that when I changed the format to something new that I've never tried it made writing it easier because I became less focused on feeling and more focused on getting the format correct. The story has become a narrative poem which I have never tried before.
Pretty good actually, thanks for asking I'm changing "Eden" from stories into a novel. That will require some more tweaking from me, but I really think something good may come from it. And how are things on your end?
Well happy to hear you are enjoying it as much as I did. How is your writing going?
Yeah, heard about that. That actually made me think that some of the new demon designs look like something right out of Power Rangers Anyway, I don't really dislike the new designs, it's just kinda different. The only one I think is offensive is Lucifer. But hey, what can you do So yeah, loving the game. It really exceeded my expectations, and I always have high expectations of games that you recommend
