What's McGuffin no.1?
Okay, it's official. Wiimotes are now McGuffin no. 2.
Or blame it all on wiimotes. Wiimotes work.
It was. It's meant to be wacky and a bit stupid. I have actually never seen the Hangover, and I'm straight edge, so there's no way I could ever get that wasted. Making that scene feel authentic required tons of guesswork.
The beginning reminded me of the Hangover movie and all the characters are likeable so far. The scene with the car bursting through the wall felt like it came out of nowhere, but I'm assuming that was intentional.
That's so nice of you to say So I take it you enjoyed the chapter?
I'd just keep doing what you're doing. They come across more naturally that way.
But yeah, you're not the first to miss it. I guess the "make-out" mention wasn't enough. But how do I go about it without making it sound like "Freddie the gay guy extended his gay arm and embraced his gay life partner Ian, gaily"?
I've been around so many gay people in the past couple of years that I don't even think about it anymore. So, yes. It is good.
That's... Good, I guess? XD