Thank you
Yeah, I noticed it had more mistakes than usual Nevertheless, it was a great read
Because I posted it before editing it or going over it again, so it wasn't that well written :P
I did! Why wouldn't I?
You really liked it?
Sure, I'll read it as soon as I have the time Locky's prompt was a nice surprise. I think I'm gonna write anothe Evie & Chuck chapter
I have a new prompt up if you want to read it .
I'm kind of interested in gender issues (that's what my MA seminar is about), so I think it's great that my character seemed natural
It wasn't overly obvious, which I think is what makes it good. Sometimes people try to write from the POV of someone of a different gender, and they either end up coming across as the author's gender, or its just so obvious that you can tell the gender of the author because its overly feminine/masculine.
Thanks for the mognet! I'll make sure to read through it in my spare time One more thing I noticed about your feedback, though. You said I wrote the prompt from a female POV quite well. That's interesting, 'cause I didn't really try to make her really obviously female, I was just thinking about being in her shoes XD
