I read your feedback, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it . I did really like your story. I didn't want to come off like I didn't. but I know you appreciate a good bit of constructive criticism focusing on what can be improved, as opposed to what is already good. Now that I know the situation between the two more, it makes more sense. I feel like a lot of the times in stories you have a whirlwind romance out of nowhere that doesn't always make sense. When you start something that intensely, there are almost always problems because you haven't taken the time to get to know the person on a deeper level. So I'm glad you'll be exploring that part, that makes it much more unique and interesting in my opinion. As far as my scene, sharky and I wrote it together, so he was nervous about me posting it. He came up with the fighting terms and explained a few things and I took it and added the personality of the characters and the setting and such. He'll be happy to know it was so well received
I just left you some feedback! If you have any more questions, feel free to ask I like your IX thread from what I've read in it so far. I'll try to respond to it ASAP. Anyway, thanks for your feedback I'm glad you noticed that the relationship was rushed, because that later turned out to be the point. I say it like that because I never intended this story to be a romance. It was meant to focus on the paranormal aspect and how delving into these themes keeps those people from having a normal life and Evie and Chuck's relationship was intended to be completely platonic. Basically, I intended for it to be a sort of X-files thing with paranormal investigators instead of FBI agents. And then they went and fell in love. I did not intend for that to happen, and I don't think they did either, they just did. I think it was the whole situation and desperate need for someone who understands that pushed them together. Now, if I write any more stories with them (which I intend to do!), I'll probably delve into how crazy it is that this relationship is going so fast and what kind of problems they may face because of that. I figured that if I am going to write a love story then I don't want it to follow the Hollywood pattern of the guy getting the girl in the climax, I wanted to begin a tale with them getting together and then focus on how hard and interesting maintaining that relationship actually is. I'm glad you liked it and I really appreciate that you had the patience to read through all of it It was a first for me on so many levels and I spent so much time on it, it felt like a huge risk.
Also, http://home.eyesonff.com/final-fanta...-me-part1.html
I'm reading it now.
It is up! My story is up! I would really appreciate it if you found the time to read it all and share some thoughts on it with me. But that's only if you really have the time for it, since it's really long this time around. I'll get to reading yours in just a minute
Well, it is until you get it written down Not that it's a bad thing. I think all books star out like that. It's pretty much the same with my book.
Thank you! And that would be great . I always feel like talking to people about my story but I feel like a lamo. It's like unless I get published I just feel like I'm talking about my imaginary world xD
Me too You're a really great friend, shion. I wish you all the best. And I really love the story you're writing. Keep at it and who knows? Maybe someday we'll see each other's books at a store?
Well I'm glad you found such good things
I'm fine. My heart seems really stable lately I have a lot to study, but I still always try to find time to write something. The prompt thread has helped me realize writing is something I love. And you guys are all so awesome, I feel so loved here on EoFF and I used to be such a loner
