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Oki <3
Was very entertaining. It was dialogue heavy, which works for that scene, because you're focusing on personal interaction. You may want to mention other people arriving after Nathan, and then Dylan. That way Erica can notice she's suddenly outnumbered instead of arriving to kill Dylan, and then deciding she's outnumbered even though the same number of people are there.
Was good?
BRAINWASHED!!!! :0
Merci chou
Okay, I will! Good luck with the bike today. Cardio like that is a really great idea.
I did a new writing prompt if you want to read it
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Drive me to school in this.
