Kind of exciting actually. I feel just taking the step to display the story in a public venue really helped despite getting reamed in the critique. I am doing a revision right now, so if you want to critique that when it's finished, I would be very happy. I definitely feel the feedback has made it into a better opening.
So how does it feel after getting your first critiques?
On second thought, reading through the critiques have basically summarized what you said about the original, so I feel I have enough to go on.
It's up to you, I think I already got like four critiques on it, hell you can just pm or email your critique if you want to wait on it.
Hmm... So would you prefer I give you a thorough inline critique now, or should I wait while its visible so others can critique it before it leaves the spotlight?
It has a few changes in terms of being a better grammatically, but otherwise it's the same piece I sent you.
Hey, so is your Soul thing you posted exactly the same prologue you sent me and I already gave feedback on, or is it a rewrite? I'm not sure if I should clutter it with my feedback if you already have it, as that would make it leave the spotlight sooner
Glad to hear you're in the final stretch.
I think I'm done with the thesis. Here's hoping my supervisor okays it. I'm not sure I can take more revisions
I'll check them out. I finally earned enough Karma to post something, but I'm not sure if I want to start with my novel or do a short story instead.
