Also, as for feedback, I just want a second opinion. Whatever strikes you as good or bad I would like to know. Don't worry about being blunt and brutal, I'm pretty sure I'm a much harsher critic of my own work than other people.
I'll find out soon though I may not get to it until tomorrow. Sorry about the blank reply to your other story but hopefully the actual reply will prove to be helpful.
Worst thing is, that chapter is now pretty embarrassing to look at. It's one of the first things I've written since I started seriously thinking about becoming a writer. I think my 1st-person skills have been enhanced since then, so I hope I can pull it off this time around. I just hope he differs enough from the Chapter 2 narrator.
I feel you're close, but he either needs to be more personable or you may need to change the narrative voice to omniscient impartial narrator.
Okay, that prologue looks very interesting and I want to read more. Now, when it comes to my feedback, should I go very detailed? What aspects do you want me to focus on?
I'm sure it will be fine and I sent the prologue for mine so hopefully it won't be too boring. I will look over your chapters tomorrow (or I guess later today according to the clock) but I need to get some sleep for the evening. Take care and I'll check it out and give you feedback.
I just sent you mine. I had to split it, since it was pretty big. Still, hope you don't find it too tedious
I'm prrofreading them and fixing a few quirks.
Thanks a lot! I'm sure you can handle your novel as well Can't wait to read the chapters.
I'm sure you can find a way to make it work.
