Conversation Between Miss Mae and Jinx

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  1. You love me.
  2. oh my god
  3. What can I say? I'm a sexy bear. Everyone wants a piece.
  4. Okay, I've got us interacting. Feel free to add some dialogue from my character in your response as well. BoB's Jahred appears to also be trying to get Tala's attention in his latest entry, so I'm not sure how this three-way (well, four-way if we count shion's Kathvi) interaction is going to pan out, but whatever.
  5. I am actually working on my post RIGHT NOW
  6. Awesome. Tyvm! At the moment I'm thinking maybe chapter 7 and 8, because I didn't want to throw them straight into a sex scene but I think the most of my educational content thus far has been in chapter 8. But I'd love a second opinion!
  7. I'll look over them again and give you an answer!
  8. Hey. I'm pitching my 50 Shades of 50 Shades analysis to a publisher and need to choose part of what I've done so far as a work sample. Which chapter/s do you think show how funny and educational I am most effectively? Help!

    I'm going to ask Shorty as well, just to poll people who seem to be enjoying it.
  9. Okay. Well, I might write a very short bit and have my character meet yours and leave it at that. You're a much stronger writer than I am, and I feel a lot safer with you 'controlling' my character than I do yours.
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