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Aim in the Heart
-Part 1-

Story begins happened in Japan (Tokyo), The love story between two lovers )Jake) & (Saya( , They were together since the days of high school until the completion of the university , One day they were Promenade in public parks in night ,They were talking and laughing , At this time they was attacked by four men The two of them Catch (Jake) and Beat him(Punch) ,and two others Catch (Saya) and They raped the poor girl , And (Jake) trying to save her, but they grabbed (Jake) strongly and they hit in his head And he lost consciousness. After he regaining consciousness ,He look around and he find (Saya) in Ground she not Moving, Approached to her and carry her and screaming for help
(Jake):SOMEBADY HELP.
the another time he took her to the Hospital But the
Doctors Said :I'm so Sorry Mr. But she was already dead Before you Bring her here.
(Jake) in Shock,
(Jake): Saya ? Saya is dead? No………. No no no its can't be NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAYA
(Jake) screaming and Crying ,And here begins the painful moments .
After that the Police ask (Jake) some Questions about What happen. But (Jake) was in Shock He can't answer any Questions. and then the chief of the Police Station ask from the Investigator the Best investigators in the Police Station his name is(Albert).
Chief: I Think you know why I call you to come here in my Office.
(Albert): of course.
Chief: Your job is to talk to Mr. (Jake) about What happen in the public parks last night.
(Albert): I'II see what can I do.
(Albert) Went to the Achieve room to Meet (Jake) and talk to him about What happen last night.
That Was the first Meet for (Albert) & (Jake).
(Albert) Hey there, My name is (Albert) I'm the Investigator.
(Jake): (…………..)
(Albert):I have some Questions for you, can you tell me What Exactly happen in public parks last night?
(Jake): (…………..)
(Albert) look to the (Jake)'s Face is really Dejected and Shock, and he try to be nice with him ,( talk to him Quietly voice).

(Albert): (Jake)I'm Really sorry about your Girlfriend ,But I want you to focus ,if you tell me What happen last night and What did saw, Maybe we can able to find the killer who killed your Girlfriend. try to remember What happen last night?
(Jake) he look to (Albert)'s face ,and then he finally talk.
(Jake):Me and (saya) we was Walking in public parks last night,Then we was attack by four Men .
(Albert):Did able to see the face of them?
(Jake): no….it was Dark.
(Albert): just try to remember (Jake),Maybe you saw the face of one them.
(Jake): I can't remember they Hit in my head.
(Albert): it okay (Jake) I think you need more time to remember.
(Jake): (…………..)
(Albert): here take it, is my card number if you remember any think just call me ,OK?
(Jake): (…………..)
And then (Albert) Left the room .


(To Be Continued)



By Thecloudyday89 (SARAH)

Updated 01-05-2013 at 12:46 AM by Shorty (Added (GRAPHIC CONTENT WARNING))

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    Aim in the Heart -Part 2-

    After a long time of (saya)'s dead, the Police didn't find Any Information about the Four criminals Who kill (saya). (Jake) he still Dejected and sad about The girl who really loved her along years ago, that night in his room sleeping in his bed he was Dreaming about (saya) and the four men who raped her and kill who Disgusting scene (Ugly moment) ,he Panic in his sleep and look around in room ,
    (Jake): Ah……it was Dream…… or Nightmare………..(saya).
    Every night he always see the Nightmares about (saya)'dead the poor guy.
    In the Morning (Jake) wake up in his bed and Went to the bathroom , Wash his face (By water) , and look at the mirror, he see the memories of (saya)'s and the four men and he Hears the four men Laughs when they raped (saya),(Jake) feel so Angry and he Broke the mirror and his hand bleeding .
    (Jake): (saya) I swear ....I swear I'll find These men who Hurts you they Will pay for this.
    Next day (Jake) went to the Store weapons to buy Gun ,and then went to the Training room To learn How to use a gun, and coincidence he saw Investigator (Albert) in the Training room , (Albert) he look to (Jake).
    (Albert): Hey (Jake),no time no see .
    (Jake): Investigator (Albert)?
    (Albert):Yes.. that's me, it been six month when we first met.
    (Jake): Yeah.
    (Albert):so…what are you doing here?
    (Jake):umm…..well….I……I'm here to training on how to use the Gun.
    (Albert): oh really!
    (Jake): yes.
    (Albert): Do you know How to use it?
    (Jake): Huh?
    (Albert): The Gun .
    (Jake): Oh..um…well…Not yet.
    (Albert): Do you need some help?
    (Jake): No, I can do it by my self.
    And then (Jake) try to learn How to use the Gun, He just press the trigger gun to shot the target (hit the target),But the Gun Doesn't work .
    (Jake):What's wrong with this Gun.
    Albert looked at Jake.
    (Albert):Hey, just press the Secretariat button.
    (Jake):(?)
    (Albert) Nigh to him.
    (Albert): Here let me show you ,
    Now shot the target .
    (Jake) press the trigger , But he didn't hit the target (He Miss the target).
    (Albert): You really need to train.
    (Jake):(……..).
    (Albert): How about that, I can Be your special trainer.
    (Jake):Huh???
    (Albert) smile to (Jake) And he put his hand on Jake's shoulder.
    (Albert):Come, you not going to lose anything.

    (To Be Continued)
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    Aim in the Heart -Part 3-

    At this moment, Investigator (Albert) Became a special coach For (Jake), sometimes everyday (Jake) always meet (Albert) in the Training room, so He can gain some experience, (Albert) Teach him how and Coached to shot the target.
    (Albert):Okay (Jake) try to shot the target .
    (Jake) he shot the target .
    (Albert): Not Bad , Now try Again, But this time in the Heart.
    But (Jake) he Miss the target in the Heart.
    (Albert): Hey, I want you to focus, Just focused on your goal.
    (Jake) ( …..…)
    (Albert) Albert holds (Jake)'s Hands who holds the gun (From behind (Jake)'s back).
    ( (Jake) Panic )

    (Jake): HEY!!! What are you doing?
    (Albert) : (Jake) Remember , Aim in the Heart and shot the Heart , and Remember your goal is in the Heart, Forget everything around you ,And keep your focus on your goal required,
    Aim in the Heart.
    (Jake) Corrected toward the heart and Shot the Heart.
    (Albert) : You learn quickly.
    (Jake) smile.
    (Jake): Thanks .
    (Albert) : okay , Okay that's enough today we will complete training later.
    (Jake): okay, Thank you Investigator (Albert).
    (Albert) : please, this name is too long just call me (Albert).
    (Jake): alright, Mr. (Albert).
    (Albert): now you going to call me Mr.
    (Jake):umm……Mr. (Albert) about you hold my Hands From behind, please Don't do that again.
    (Albert) ( ……….).
    (Jake): if somebody see us They Will think we are linked.
    (Albert) :HaHaHa, you really Weird, anyway Do you have free time I just want to invite you for dinner after all this training.
    (Jake): um….well…
    (Albert) : I know the best place offering the best food.
    (Jake) thinks(Should I agree or not)
    (Albert) : Come on my account.
    (Jake): okay.
    (Albert) and (Jake) they Went to the restaurant and they Eating and talking.
    (Jake): Mr. (Albert) can I ask you something? Are you a foreigner?
    (Albert) : Do I look for you foreigner?
    (Jake): You not look from Japanese?
    (Albert) : Well the true is my mother is Japanese and my Father from U.S.A , he Grew up in New York City.
    (Jake): What???Your father Grew up in New York City.
    (Albert) : What? Are you surprised.
    (Jake): Wow! I didn't know that , But where did you born? In New York City or Tokyo ?
    (Albert) : Tokyo .
    (Jake): Have you ever visited the New York City.
    (Albert) : Yes every year , My parents and I We visited my grandparents, they living in New York City .
    (Jake): I've always dreamed to visit New York, And go to the place where the The Statue of Liberty.
    (Albert) : Then why don't you go?
    (Jake): Well is not easy for me.
    (Albert) smile for (Jake)
    (Jake) : (?) What?
    (Albert) : You look Cute when you talk.
    (Jake) his face coming Red


    (Jake): HEY!!! I'm Guy you shoud say that to a Girl.
    (Albert): HaHaHa, you really funny (Jake) .
    (Jake): you annoying.
    (Albert): Do you wanna have Drunk
    (Jake): sure .
    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-19-2012 at 07:36 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart -Part 4-

    After They finish eating the food and drunk, They Came out from the restaurant.
    (Jake): oh man ! I drunk too much.
    (Albert): I can Believe , you drunk Ten Class of Bars,are you feel alright?
    (Jake): I Feel Great.
    (Albert): You so drunk , Get in the car I Drive you Home .
    (Albert) and (Jake) ride to the car ( Albert's Car) , in the Way when (Albert) Driving the car.
    (Albert): Hey (Jake), Where Do you live?
    (Jake) Didn't answer.
    (Albert): (?)……Hey?
    (Albert) look at (Jake), He fell in sleep.
    (Albert):He fell in sleep.
    After a few Hours (Jake) seemed to see the dream about (saya) again , Suddenly (Jake) panic in his sleep .
    (Albert) just Hear him and come to him fast.
    (Albert): What's wrong?
    (Jake): Huh? Mr. (Albert)?
    (Jake) just look around he find him self sleeping in the couch.
    (Jake): Where I am ?
    (Albert): in my place, you Drunk too much and you fell in sleep like Baby,and I Don't know where you live , so I Bring you to my House.
    (Jake) (……..)
    (Albert): What's wrong? Bad Dream?
    (Jake): No it nothing.
    (Albert): It okay you can tell me ,if you wanna talk about this.
    (Jake): …………it was (saya).
    (Albert): (saya)? Your Girlfriend The girl who was killed six months ago?
    (Jake): Yeah…after she dead, Every night I see the same dream about That night these men attack us me and (saya) and they raping her then kill her, Every night I see this Nightmare.
    (Jake) began to cry.
    (Jake) : The Girl I love so much I imposed be to Protect her I imposed be to save her, Why I couldn't save her.
    (Albert) sitting on the couch Next to him and he put his hand on Jake's shoulder.
    (Albert) : Hey! Calm down It's not your fault .
    (Jake) : How should I to Calm down after What happen six months ago is Still stuck on my head , How should I to Calm down?
    (Albert) Feel Pity so much on (Jake) so he hold him.
    (Albert) : I wish I can help, it Seems you love her very much.
    (Jake): I Never thought I'm so weak for not saving her.
    (Albert) : is alright (Jake) easy now.
    (Albert) raise (Jake)'s face.
    (Albert) : is alright.
    He kiss him in his lips.
    (Jake) Push (Albert).
    (Jake): What the hell are you doing ? Why did you kiss me?
    (Albert) smile for him.
    (Albert) : I thought that will make you stop crying.
    (Jake) his face coming Red and so angry.
    (Jake): Are you a pervert ? I don't need this kiss and beside we both Guys.
    Then he left (Albert)'s house.


    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-17-2012 at 04:05 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    It's a good read so far Cloudy!
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    Aim in the Heart -Part 5-

    Three Days later (Jake) Didn't see (Albert) long three days , after the last time when he left (Albert)'s house (after the kiss) ,He Still troublesome because of the kiss .He just Remember (Albert) how he hold him and kiss him , and (Jake) touch his lip, then his face coming Red again .
    (Jake): ( (Albert)……That Idiot , I'm really don't wanna see him again ) .
    The another time (Jake) Went out for walk in the streets , he look around the Stores and then he Went inside the Store to buy something ,Then he just collided with someBody.
    (Jake): Oh !….. Sorry sir my Bad.
    The person that (Jake) collided was Investigator (Albert) .
    (Jake): Mr. (Albert)???
    (Albert): Hey (Jake) ! How you doing? Why didn't come to the to the Training? it been three days.
    (Jake) not looking to the (Albert)'s face and he didn't say anything .
    (Albert): What's wrong?
    (Jake): Shut up and leave me alone.
    . (Albert): (?) .
    (Jake) Want to go out from the Store But (Albert) Catch (Jake)'s shoulder .
    (Albert): just hold it right here, What is the matter with you? why are you so angry?
    (Jake): You can't fool me so leave me alone.
    (Albert): Who said I'm trying to make you a fool (Jake)?
    (Jake): just let me go!
    (Albert): let me guess, it was about the Kiss Right?
    (Jake) his coming Red so much.
    (Jake): No is not that……is just I don't wanna see you again .
    (Albert): Come you don't have to be angry about one kiss from a guy .
    (Jake) is about to explode from the intensity of the anger and embarrassment.
    (Jake): SHUT UP AND LEAVE ME ALONE YOU BASTARD!
    (Jake) just Get out from the Store's Door.
    (Jake): Don't come any closer from me .
    (Jake) he just collided with another person .
    The person (Man): Hey Watch it , you F***king Idiot !
    (Jake) look at the Man's face , (Jake) in Shock !
    (Jake): ( That Man……That's the man one from the four men who raped (saya)!!!


    (To Be Continued)
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    Aim in the Heart -Part 6-

    At this moment on the street (Jake) he just Saw the man one of the four men Who raped (saya) , (Albert) follow (Jake) and he look to him.

    (Albert) : huh? What's wrong (Jake) ? What are you looking?

    (Jake): The man……That's the man one of the four men Who raped (saya) is HIM !

    (Albert) : are you sure?

    (Albert) Went to speak with this man .

    (Albert) : Hey! Excuse me sir Can I talk to you for second ?

    The person (Man) Change into (Killer)'s name , He saw (Albert)'s insignia .

    The (Killer) : trout !
    The (Killer) Try to Run .
    (Albert) : HEY! STOP!
    (Albert) began chasing This Killer and The Killer he Ran towards the street and he caused chaos in the car and filled the road on Albert , But (Albert) was able to bypass ,He still chasing This Killer ,The Killer Stop in Deadend in his way (Wall) ,
    (Albert) : Sir I'm Investigator I don't wanna Hurts you I just want you to come with me to The police station for questioning.
    But the killer took out a knife from his pocket and he attack (Albert) . (Jake) he try to find (Albert) and the killer( where are they now?).Then he find them , (Albert) he Catch the killer he Lie down on the ground and just put the handcuffs on the killer's hands .
    (Albert) : Sir you are under arrest for attack the Investigator So You have the right to remain silent .
    (Jake): Mr.(Albert) ?
    (Albert) turn around his face on (Jake).
    (Albert): Hmm? (Jake)?
    (Jake) he just look to him and………. .
    (Jake): Oh my god (Albert) You Bleeding !
    (Albert): Huh?
    (Jake): Your arm !
    (Albert) he look to his arm he injured by killer's knife .
    (Albert): Oh ! I didn't notice this .

    In The police station the killer Was in interrogation room . The Chief want to see (Albert) .
    Chief : What's this all about ?
    (Albert): This Guy…… Well I was trying to talk to him ,But he Ran from me , I Follow him and then he attack me by a knife .
    Chief : Do you have any idea Why he attack you?
    (Albert): No……But he the one from the four men who attack (Jake) and raped the Girl her name (saya) six month ago .
    Chief : are you sure ?
    (Albert): This is all up to (Jake) if he Remember one of the killers's face
    (Albert) asked the policeman to attend (Jake) here.
    (Jake) look at the mirror to another side from the interrogation room looking to the Killer's face and (Albert) ask him .
    (Albert): (Jake) are you sure that the man one from the four men who attack you and (saya).
    (Jake) began remembered the man He's the one from the four men, There is no mistakes ,He Ran into inside the interrogation room .
    (Albert): HEY! (Jake) Wait come Back here .
    (Jake) punched in the killer's face.
    (Jake): YOU BASTARD ! YOU KILL (SAYA) I WELL NEVER FORGIVE WHAT YOU DID TO HER .
    The Two policeman Stop him and take him out from the interrogation room To keep him away from the killer before he going to kill him .
    Later the killer Didn't confess anything about the crime.
    The Chief want to talk to (Jake) .
    Chief : You still here Mr. (Jake).
    (Jake): The killer is he going to tell where's the others was with them?
    Chief : No, we need more time to make him confess, so you don't need to stay here, Go home.
    (Jake): Where's is Mr. (Albert) .
    Chief : He Want home .
    (Jake): What? Didn't he go to the Hospital? The Wound in his arm was deep .
    Chief : Well….he said he can Take care about his Wound.
    (Jake) want to the (Albert)'s house he Click on the button bell house, (Albert) want to open the door and he Surprise when he saw (Jake).
    (Albert): Huh? What are you doing here I Thought you don't want to see me again?
    And he saw the Pack first-aid (Jake) carries with him .
    (Albert):and Why you carry this with you? .
    (Jake): umm….is for you Wound .
    (Albert): (Jake) you don't have to I'm fine .
    (Jake): Can I come inside?
    (Albert): Yes come in.
    He Began handles Albert's Wound and puts for him bandage in his Wound.
    (Jake): I'm Sorry about this, it was my fault to get you this Wound.
    (Albert): Why it his to be your fault ? I was trying to do my job, is Chasing the criminals and took them to the justice .
    (Jake): So you take Seriously about doing you job to protect people from the criminals and put you self in danger .
    (Albert): This police job .
    (Jake) (………).
    (Albert): What? Are you worried ?
    (Jake) (………).
    (Albert) look at (Jake)'s face , He sees sadness in (Jake)'s face . so he raise (Jake)'s face and kiss him again .But (Jake) this time he didn't Push him .
    (Jake): Why?
    (Albert): if you about to cry, I won't let you cry .
    (Jake): Mr. (Albert) ?
    (Albert): Call me By my first name .

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-17-2012 at 03:30 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart -Part 6-
    Updated 11-16-2012 at 08:56 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart-Part 7-


    For this moment (Albert) and (Jake) looking at each other .

    (Albert): Say my name (Jake) .

    (Jake): Why you want me to say your name ?

    (Albert) kiss Jake's hand .

    (Albert): if I told you Why , You will say my name Right?

    (Jake) : (………) .

    (Albert): Because I like you (Jake) ,I want you so Badly.

    (Jake):You crazy .

    (Albert) Kiss him again and Took him to his room in the Bed. They kissing and kiss By Tongue . But (Jake) he just Try to Push him.


    (Jake):N-No… Wait….We Can't Do that, this is Crazy!
    But (Albert) tell him by a low voice.


    (Albert): is alright (Jake)….is alright .
    They kissing By Tongue again , (Albert) Make him stretched on the bed, (Albert) take off his shirt and Begins to open Jake's shirt buttons then he kiss him in Jake's lips then Jake's Neck and lick it and he lick Jake's Teat and lick Jake's Legs .
    (Albert): (Jake) I want to put it inside Now .
    (Jake): Huh?....What?...You mean That ? Wait ……Don't!
    (Albert): is That your first time? Don't worry about this (Jake) just Relax .
    (Jake): please do it slowly .
    He lifting Jake's legs above and put it inside him and they start the real sex .
    (Jake): AHHH ! IT HURTS… AH....NN....AH .
    (Jake) he Can't tolerate longer .

    (Jake): I….I can't…. do it anymore .

    (Albert): just hold on a little longer (Jake).

    (Albert): I'M cumming…! AAAH !

    The cum Scattered on Jake's chest and (Albert) stop and they looking at each other and Kissing (Sweet pretty kiss) .they fell asleep and (Albert) he Hold (Jake) in sleep .

    In the Morning (Albert) he Heard the phone ringing ,He Get up from the Bad and answer the phone .
    (Albert): Hello?
    ...............Yes
    ……………..WHAT?
    (Jake) he just wake up from his sleep When he Heard (Albert) .
    (Albert): How is that happen?....................I'll be right there.
    (Jake): What's wrong? Something happen?
    (Albert) look to (Jake) and he tell him .
    (Albert) : (Jake) there something happen in the police station.
    (Jake): What is it?
    (Albert): The killer We arrest him yesterday They find him Dead.
    (Jake) Dead?
    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-19-2012 at 08:00 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart-Part 7-


    For this moment (Albert) and (Jake) looking at each other .

    (Albert): Say my name (Jake) .

    (Jake): Why you want me to say your name ?

    (Albert) kiss Jake's hand .

    (Albert): if I told you Why , You will say my name Right?

    (Jake):(………).

    (Albert): Because I like you (Jake) ,I want you so Badly.

    (Jake):You crazy .

    (Albert) Kiss him again and Took him to his room in the Bed. They kissing and kiss By Tongue . But (Jake) he just Try to Push him.


    (Jake):N-No… Wait….We Can't Do that, this is Crazy!
    But (Albert) tell him by a low voice.


    (Albert): is alright (Jake)….is alright .
    They kissing By Tongue again , (Albert) Make him stretched on the bed, (Albert) take off his shirt and Begins to open Jake's shirt buttons then he kiss him in Jake's lips then Jake's Neck and lick it and he lick Jake's Teat and lick Jake's Legs .
    (Albert): (Jake) I want to put it inside Now .
    (Jake): Huh?....What?...You mean That ? Wait ……Don't!
    (Albert): is That your first time? Don't worry about this (Jake) just Relax .
    (Jake): please do it slowly .
    He lifting Jake's legs above and put it inside him and they start the real sex .
    (Jake): AHHH ! IT HURTS… AH....NN....AH .
    (Jake) he Can't tolerate longer .

    (Jake): I….I can't…. do it anymore .

    (Albert): just hold on a little longer (Jake).

    (Albert): I'M cumming…! AAAH !

    The cum Scattered on Jake's chest and (Albert) stop and they looking at each other and Kissing (Sweet pretty kiss) .they fell in sleep and (Albert) he Hold (Jake) in sleep .

    In the Morning (Albert) he Heard the phone ringing ,He Get up from the Bad and answer the phone .
    (Albert): Hello?...............
    Yes……………..
    WHAT?
    (Jake) he just wake up from his sleep When he Heard (Albert) .
    (Albert): How is that happen?....................I'll be right there.
    (Jake): What's wrong? Something happen?
    (Albert) look to (Jake) and he tell him .
    (Albert):(Jake) there something happen in the police station.
    (Jake): What is it?
    (Albert): The killer We arrest him yesterday They find him Dead.
    (Jake):Dead?
    (To Be Continued)
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    After that in the police station they find The killer was Dead , (Albert) Went to the police station .

    (Albert): Where is the body?
    The policeman took him to the dungeon which was The Killer caged .
    Policeman : Here is the body .
    (Albert): Who did he Die?
    Policeman : We don't have any idea yet .
    (Albert): Hmm?
    Policeman : What is it ?
    (Albert): He must be die by Poison !
    Policeman : Poison? How do you know that?
    (Albert): just look at his Mouth is too much Foam coming out from his mouth and his Eyes is up too much ,He must be Drunk something , Go and tell them to take this Body to the Chamber nomination and Take this Cup of coffee to examine is must be contain something.
    Policeman :Yes Sir !
    After a few Hours (Jake) Was Walking around in the street he is so Angry about The killer's Dead .
    (Jake):( DAMN IT! I was so close to find the Killers……now How can I find the others?…..Still ….Still want to get my Revenge).
    After (Jake) was Walking in his way , someone Hit him in his head and he lost consciousness, and They took him away.
    (Albert) ask the Doctor (specializes in filtration) about The killer's Body .
    (Albert): What did you find out?
    Dr. : You was Right this Man Die By Poison and This Poison we find it in the Cup of coffee is look like someone give it to him , he didn't know the Cup of coffee contain the Poison .
    (Albert): That Mean someone want him dead , so he could not give police information about them . Damn it !
    Policeman : Excuse me … Investigator (Albert) .
    (Albert): What is it?
    Policeman : There is kidnapping happen in the street.
    (Albert): Huh?
    Policeman : Come with me You can see it in the Surveillance Camera .
    (Albert) Went to see The kidnapped in the Surveillance Camera .
    (Albert): Okay show me now.
    Policeman : Yes Sir .
    (Albert) Look to the screen , he see the man was walking and there is someone Behind just Hit him in his Head and put him in the Car, They was two Who kidnapped the Man . (Albert) saw Something strange in the screen .
    (Albert): Turn it Back the video .
    Policeman : Yes Sir .
    He Turn it Back the video , (Albert) looking to this man who was kidnapped ,it was (Jake) .
    (Albert): Damn ! it's (Jake) ! Hey , try to find those numbers of this Car And Find the location,
    NOW HURRY .
    Policeman : Yes Sir .

    (To Be Continued)
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    Aim in the Heart-Part 9-


    When (Albert) knew that (Jake) Has been kidnapped , He told The Policeman to find those numbers of this Car to able to find the location ( The place Where they took (Jake) ) .
    And for the (Jake) When he was unconscious , Kidnappers poured water on him and he Regain consciousness , He find himself ( He Found his hands Restricted up by chains ) .
    (Jake) : What the Hell ? What is going on here?
    (?????) : Well…Well ! You finally Wake up !
    (Jake) look at the person who's talking wait him .
    (Jake) : Who are you ? and what do want from me?
    (?????) : Don't you Remember me ? We Met Before .
    (Jake) : Huh?
    (Jake) he look to the person's Face and he Remember , He knew this face .
    (Jake) : You !……YOU THE ONE WHO KILL (SAYA) !
    (?????) Change into The second killer : (Saya)? Who's (Saya)?
    (Jake) : BASTARD! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU .
    The second killer : Ohhh..Yes ! You Mean The pretty Girl from the public parks at that night , I Remember That time we F**ck her, I'm Really Enjoy to F**ck her Body and I Want to F**ck her again .
    (Jake) Feel tantrum anger When he Heard that (burst of anger intensity ).
    (Jake) : YOU SON OF BITCH !
    The second killer Punch in Jake's stomach and it really Hurt him .
    The second killer : Silence ……and Beside I'm not the only one who kill you Girlfriend , they was with Me .

    The Two Men with him They are Involved in a crime in the death of (saya) . So The (saya)'s killers is finally Complete .


    The Third killer : What are we going to do with him now?
    The Fourth Killer : We can do whatever we want…Right (Yokozawa) ?
    The second killer His name (Yokozawa) .
    (Yokozawa): Well….I was Thinking about this .
    (Yokozawa) raise Jake's face and he look to him with a wicked smile .
    (Yokozawa): What are we going to do you ?
    They Torturing (Jake) Painful torture (Hitting him too much) .
    After that (Albert) Still Waiting for The Policeman to Give him the location of the Kidnappers's (Jake).
    Policeman : Investigator (Albert) I find the location of the Kidnappers .
    (Albert) : Tell me, Where is it ?
    Policeman told him the location , (Albert) went quickly And Riding into the car to go to the location of the Kidnappers's (Jake) .
    (Albert) : I Hope its Not to late……. (Jake) just Stay alive .
    After that when (Albert) want to the location of the Kidnappers .The Kidnappers Torturing (Jake) so much and His body is exhausted from the Torture, Then someone open the Door and he come inside .
    (?????): What going on here?
    (Yokozawa): Oh ! Brother ! You Back .
    (?????): Who's that ?
    (Yokozawa): No Body …..we just play with him .
    The Man who open the door he's (Yokozawa)'s Big Brother his name (Gai) , he is Arms dealer and drug (BOSS).
    (Gai) look to the (Jake) and raise him to see Jake's Face .
    (Gai): He have pretty Face! Hey , I Can't Believe it you didn't give him to me first .
    (Yokozawa): Sorry.. Bro.
    (Gai): Look at his body it is full of Punch , You Hit him so much .But anyway I think I can play with this Baby .
    (Yokozawa): Do whatever you like Brother .
    (Gai): Can you Guys leave me with him Now ?
    (Yokozawa): Okay is all yours Now .
    They lift the room , (Jake) so tried and wake , He look at to (Gai) (What he going to do with him?).
    (Gai): Now…..Should we play?

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-16-2012 at 08:58 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart- Part 10-


    After They Torturing (Jake) , They left him With (Gai) , (Gai) Taking off his Jacket and his Shirt Then he disarmament his belt (Trouser belt) . And He approached to (Jake) .
    (Gai): Now…..Should We Start ?
    (Jake) his Body so Collapsible , (Gai) He Catch Jake's hair (By his hand) painfully and he lifted to the above into his face . And he Get his tongue into inside Jake's mouth.

    ( It Hurts, like he going to Torn Jake's tongue) .

    (Jake): Hnnnnn…….Ah…..ku……Hmmmmm.

    (Jake) Bite Gai's mouth and (Gai) his mouth Bleeding .
    (Jake): Don't ……. put you ………. Dirty tongue in my MOUTH
    So He Catch Jake's Neck and Suffocate him .
    (Gai): You are so fierce , I'm going To F**ck Right Now .
    Jake's Face turned into concern face , is not use He can't Ran away from that .
    He take off Jake's Trouser Then Jake's Pants internal, Then He lifting Jake's legs above.
    (Jake): NOOO….STOP!
    He raped him .
    (Jake): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !
    (Jake) Screaming From the Pain , (Gai) Hurts him so much, Even Jake's eyes tears From the Pain , So much Cum Fall in the Ground with too much Blood (Jake's Blood ), The only thing (Jake) Thinking is (Albert) , he Hope He well Come here and save him now .
    (Jake) said in his mind : (Albert) Help me .

    (To Be Continued)
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    INCREDIBLE

    This line " So much Cum Fall in the Ground with too much Blood (Jake's Blood )" really spoke to me and made (Psychotic) feel so scared

    You are a good writer (Sarah) and I wish to court you.
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    Aim in the Heart - Part 11-


    After That moment , (Gai) He hurting (Jake) By rape , (Jake) His body has completely collapsed , Then (Gai) He finally stop .
    (Gai) : Hm….That wasn't Bad !
    Okay …..I'll open the chains on your hands and Get some Rest , I'll Be Back later .
    He open the chains on the Jake's hands and (Jake) fell Down on the ground Then (Gai) left him and he close the Door , (Jake) He can't move ,He can't feel his Body , But he just Note something ( That is the same What happen to (saya) when they raped her , She raped By Four Men , They Hurts her too much by rape That Why she Die ) .
    (Jake) : is……..is that What happen to you (saya) ? is that……the same Pain ?
    Is this the last day I will live in it?......(saya)….. I'm really sorry …. I swear to find Them and Make Them pay for you Dead ….But now I can't , .
    And he start Crying .
    (Jake) : I'm sorry (saya)…….. I'm sorry .
    later (Jake) Still on the ground Without any move ,But Then There was a noise (like someone fighting ) from the another side from the Door.
    someone open the Door , Is (Albert) , He Finally Found (Jake) , He come to him and lift him .
    (Albert): (Jake) ! (Jake) ! Wake up !
    (Jake) Open his Eyes and he found (Albert) in front of his eyes .
    (Jake) : Al…… Al…….. Albert ?
    (Albert): (Jake) Don't Worry I'll get you out from here .
    he look to (Albert) .
    (Jake) : Y…..You late .
    (Albert): (?) .
    (Albert) he look to (Jake) he is Nude and his Body so much Punch and injured, But He Note something,There is too much Blood Between Jake's legs and in the ground .
    (Albert):Those bastard ! What the Hell Did they do to you?
    (Albert) Take off his jacket and dresses for Jake and He intolerable That What they did to him .
    ( He knew That They Torturing Painful torture him and raped him ) .
    (Albert): Hey , Can you stand?
    (Jake) : I Can't Feel my Body.
    (Albert): Then I'll Carry you , To Get you out here .
    (Albert) Carrying (Jake) Went out from the Door and he look right and left
    To make sure nobody here , (Jake) he just saw the Man Was guarding the door ,He was the one from the four man who's kill (saya) (The Third killer ) (Albert) kill him , he Broke killer's Neck .
    (Albert) Went to the path Carrying (Jake) ,And They Get to the Big Place Where they Keep too much Box container on weapons, drugs . Then (Albert) Passes this way so they could reach to the exit . But someone shoting them By guns, (Albert) Ran Fast to find place to hide (Carrying (Jake) With him ) , He find place with many Box and He put (Jake) Down .
    (Albert): Hey (Jake) , Look at me , I'll Go and take Care these men , No matter what happen don't leave you place Okay . I'll be Back for you .
    (Albert) Took out his Gun and he Went to Find These armed men .
    someone shoting , (Albert) Hide Behind the Box and he try to look (They are only Three men ) . (Albert) waiting for the moment to be able to shot one them , one of them has emerged and (Albert) Shot him . and the second Start shoting (Albert) . But (Albert) was able to void the bullet and he Shot the second . He just look there and there But He can't see The Third ,He out from the hiding place . And suddenly The Third Shot him from behind , But (Albert) Turn around Fast and Shot him .then He trying to go Back to (Jake) to Make sure he's alright . But (Albert) saw man Searching here and he Very Close to the Jake's bunker were's he Left him .So he Near to him quietly and He Pointing the Gun in the Man's head .
    (Albert) : Put you Gun Down .
    He Put his Gun Down ( The Man was The Fourth Killer ) .
    But (Albert) Heard someone speak from behind .
    (?????): I Think you shoud Put you Gun Down too .
    But (Albert) Catch The Fourth Killer Quickly fast and He Pointing the Gun in The Fourth Killer's head .
    (Albert): If you Shoot I'll Shoot him .
    The Man is (Gai) :HaHaHa……Do you Think I'm Really Care about him .
    (Gai) Shot The Fourth Killer (Three Shoots ) ,And (Albert) Ran Fast to Hid .
    (Gai): You Can Ran But you can't Hid .
    (Gai) Searching For (Albert) .
    (Gai): Come Out … Come Out Whatever you are .
    (Albert) Hiding and he Heard steps walking which means he approaching to him ,He just comeout and Trying to Shot him But (Gai) Shot Albert's Gun and his Gun Throw away , (Albert) Became without weapons . (Gai) Near to (Albert) and Pointing the Gun in Albert's Face so Close .
    (Gai) :HaHaHa……You very Slow, Now Do you have something to say ?
    (Albert) Quickly Catch Gai's Gun and They Both try to Take the Gun Then The Gun Throw away . (Albert) and (Gai) Fighting , (Gai) Hit (Albert) in his Face and Punch in his stomach, (Albert) Hit (Gai) in his Face (Two Punch ) and (Gai) Hit him in his jaw But Then (Albert) Hit him and Punch his stomach (By his leg) Then (Gai) Fell Down and (Albert) Took out his handcuffs and Put it in Gai's hands .
    (Albert): Yes.….. I have something to say, you under arrest .
    But someone behind him .
    (?????):Okay…..Game over.
    (Albert) surprised .
    It was The second killer (Yokozawa) The Last killer .
    (Yokozawa) : Just Stand and Turn around .
    (Albert) Did What he request him to Do , (Albert) want to ask him about something .
    (Albert): It Seems that you linked to the murder the man was Imprisoned in the dungeon that I arrest him .
    (Yokozawa) : That Right , We just saw you arresting him , so all I did is just disguised in policeman uniforms to Get to The police station ,Then I went to him and talk to him and he tell me about that Guy that We :bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: his Girlfriend six month ago .
    (Albert): So you give him Cup of coffee Which is contain of Poison .
    (Yokozawa) : So You noticed this ,Yes I put the Poison in his Cup ,So he can't give any information of Our workplace to the Police , We don't need him anyway .
    (Albert): Is that Why you kidnapping (Jake) Because you Thought he still Remember your Face and that Well Be problem for you ?
    (Yokozawa) : Enough now ,and Say GoodBye To the World .
    He going to Shot (Albert) But Then unexpected Sudden .
    (?????): Don't try to press the trigger of your Gun .
    (Yokozawa) : Huh !?
    (Albert): (Jake) !!
    It was (Jake) and he carries a gun in his hand (Albert's Gun) .
    (Jake): Put you Gun Down and Turn around .
    (Yokozawa) Put his Gun Down and he Turn around .
    (Jake) look at Yokozawa's Face .
    (Jake): You Kill (saya) the Girl I love The Good Girl The innocent and She died an ugly death . I'll Never Forgive you, Go to the HELL !
    And he Shot him in the head ((Yokozawa) is Dead ) .Then (Jake) fell Down on the ground .
    (Albert): (Jake) ?....... (Jake) ! .
    , He Went fast to him and lift him .
    (Albert): (Jake) ....... hold on, just Stay With Me .

    Don't Die (Jake) Stay With Me

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-20-2012 at 10:30 AM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart - Part 12-


    After That When (Jake) fell Down on the ground , He open his Eyes and he see the Light ,He saw (saya) .
    (Jake) : (saya) ?
    He Think he is Dead now .
    (saya) she Smiling for him .
    (saya) : (Jake),Thank you ,But I Don't Want you to suffer For me ,So I want you to pursue your life , Don't suffer for me .
    (Jake) : (saya) !
    (saya) Catch Jake's Face By her Hands .
    (saya) : Promise Me (Jake) You well pursue your life for me .
    (Jake) began to cry.
    (Jake) : I want to be Together again (saya) .
    (saya) : (Jake) I always Be in your Heart , Don't Cry
    I love You (Jake)
    Then she kiss him .
    (saya) : Good Bye .
    She left him And she start Walking away into the Light .
    (Jake) : (saya) ?
    He runs after her and Duration his hand to her .
    (Jake) : (saya) ……Wait …..(saya) Don't Go please I Want to be With you , Don't Go please .
    (saya)…………. SAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA .
    And suddenly (Jake) Wake up and he find himself in the Bed , and There is someone with him , is Jake's Mother .
    Jake's Mother : (Jake) ,Oh Thanks Goodness You Finally Wake .
    (Jake) : Mother?
    Jake's Mother She Hold him and she Start Crying .
    Jake's Mother : Oooh (Jake) I was so worry about You , You Didn't wake up for two weeks in hospital .
    (Jake) : Two Weeks ?
    (Jake) He just Remember Now That He was kidnapped and Then (Albert) Come to him and save him .
    (Jake) : (Albert) ? Where is (Albert) ?
    Jake's Mother : You Mean That Investigator Who save your Life ? long Two Weeks He just come to The hospital To see You Everyday ,and He was Sitting here and Watching you ,Waiting for you to wake up, he Was very Worry about you .
    (Jake) : (Albert) Was here Everyday ?
    Jake's Mother : I'm going to tell everyone Now , (Jake) I'm so happy to see alright .
    After a few Hour Jake's Mother She Went Home and (Jake) Still in The hospital Sleeping in the Bed alone in the Room , But someone Knocking on the door .
    (Jake) : Who is it ?
    The someone open the Door and he Get in .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert) !
    (Albert) : (Jake) ! You Wake .
    (Jake) : Did you come here to see ? .
    (Albert) : Yes, They Told me you Can leave The hospital Tomorrow Morning .
    (Jake) : Yeah .
    (Albert) : are you alright ? Is your body still hurts?
    (Jake) : No …. I'm Fine .
    (Albert) look at Jake's Face .
    (Albert) : These criminals who kidnapped you They Working with The Chieftain Who's name is (Gai) They call him (Boss) and he is responsible for the sale and manufacture of illegal weapons and drugs , He deal with the rest of the criminals in the sale of arms or drugs or Both and Beside He is heartless criminal .
    (Jake) : and………..
    (Albert) : Don't Worry about this , The Policemen has Been arrested him and the rest of the gang too , Court will decide fate them Those criminals And especially their leader (BOSS) .
    (Jake) : (……….) .
    (Albert) : Oh another something , The Man you Shot him his name is (Yokozawa) he is Gai's Younger Brother and He………
    (Jake) : I Know .
    (Albert) : Hmm? (Jake) are you alright .
    (Jake) : I…..I Shot someone…….. I kill him ,and I never did that Before .
    (Albert) : (Jake) look it me .
    He look at (Albert) .
    (Albert) : is alright , Everything is going to be fine .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert) .
    (Albert) : Yes ?
    (Jake) : ummm…….Thank you For saving my life .
    (Albert) : (Jake) if you need anything just call me ,Okay . You need a rest .
    (Albert) He about to leave But (Jake) Stop him ( He Catch Albert's Hand ) .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert) Please Don't leave .
    (Albert) : What? You want me to Stay here ?
    (Jake) : (……….) .
    (Albert) : is alright , if you want me to stay I'll stay .
    (Jake) Still Catching Albert's Hand and He Trembling now .
    (Jake) : Clean Me .
    (Albert) : Huh?
    (Jake) : They F**ck My Body , I Want you Clean Me Right Now .
    (Albert) : What are Talking about ? I Don't want to Do that Right now (Jake) , We in hospital and you Tired , You Need to Get a rest First .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert)…..Please .
    (Albert) he look to him .
    (Albert) : (Jake) I Don't Want To Hurt you .
    (Jake) : You said You like me , When He F**ck me it was So Hurts like something Burning inside me , My Body Still Hurts From That .
    (Albert) : (Jake) …….
    (Jake) : all I Did Was Thinking about you To Come and save me .
    (Albert) : But I Did come for you ,Right ?
    (Jake) : Yes .
    (Albert) : Do You Think if I have sex with you just for clean you Body ,Well Make you feel Better ?
    (Jake) : Yes .
    (Albert) : alright Then .
    (Albert) He just Take off his Shirt and They Kissing ( (Jake) Holding (Albert) and they kissing ,Sleeping in the Bed) .
    (Albert) : (Jake), if you change your Mind just tell me to stop .
    (Jake) : No….just put it inside me .
    (Jake) Turn around On the bed (Introduction Jake's body On the bed ) . and (Albert) put it inside him
    ( The Real Sex ) .
    (Jake) : AAAAAAAAAAH .
    (Albert) : Do you want me to Stop ?
    (Jake) : No……Keep Going .
    (Albert) Catching Jake's Hand and he Kiss Jake's neck back .
    (Albert) : I'll Clean all your Body They Dirtied you .
    (Jake) : AH…….U...WA...HAAA...AH…. AAAAH .
    After They have sex , (Jake) Fell aSleep , (Albert) he kiss Jake's front(forehead) and Then he left the hospital .

    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 11-19-2012 at 07:58 PM by Thecloudyday89
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    Aim in the Heart - Part 13-


    The Next Day in the Morning (Jake) Left The hospital , His family came to him to connect it to the Jake's house ( By Car ) . After they arrived at the Jake's house , They Stayed with him After lunch , Then they left .
    Jake's Mother : Honey is There something you need Before I go ?
    (Jake) : No Mom , I fine , Thank you Very much .
    Jake's Mother : alright Take care .
    (Jake) : See you later .
    She Get into the car with the others family and they left . (Jake) he Closes the Door and he setting in the couch , He Was thinking about What he said to (Albert) .
    (Jake) : ( Clean Me ?.......Did I say Clean Me ? I'm I Crazy something ? What the Hell is wrong with me ? I have sex with a Guy , I supposed Not to Do that ).
    He Took out his cell phone from his pocket and he look to the Albert's Number (phone's Number) .
    (Jake) : ( This Strange ? Why I feel like I want To see him ? )
    (Jake) just look at the Window is Raining out side , Then sleep in couch and he still thinking about (Albert) .
    (Jake) : ( I'm I in love with him ? Why I want him so Badly ? )
    (Jake) He Can't Stop Thinking about (Albert) , So He just wear his jacket and he Went out to the Albert's House to see him . He arrived at Albert's home , He was Trying to Knock the Door But he didn't .
    (Jake) : ( Wait……What should tell him ? Why I'm I here ? ) .
    He just trying to leave But suddenly after he turn around He saw (Albert) Behind him and (Albert) was carry with him Grocery bag (He just returned from Shopping By his car ) .
    (Albert) : (Jake) ?
    (Jake) : M…Mr. (Albert) !
    (Albert) : How long have you been here ? Don't tell you been waiting for me the all day.
    (Jake) : No I just Get here ?
    (Albert) : Come inside is Raining .
    They Get inside .
    (Albert) : I'm going to Brought you towel You very Wet . He went to Brought towel for , (Jake) Then He saw something on the Table There is Some messages one them from New York City .
    (Jake) : Huh ? New York City ?
    He open the messages from New York City To Read What is saying . It said They accepted (Albert) to work with The Police Station (CSI: New York) and he had to moving to the New York City .
    (Albert) : Sorry to keep you waiting (Jake) I Brought you towel .
    (Albert) Saw (Jake) reading his messages .
    (Albert) : (Jake) What are you doing ?
    (Jake) : Are you planning to moving to the New York City ?
    (Albert) : Yes , long time ago I was Trying so hard to get this job in New York City Before I met you , and now finally Get This job , all I need Do to is moving There .
    (Jake) : so you accepted this job .

    (Albert) : Yes I Did .

    (Jake) : Then What about Me ?

    (Albert) : Hm ?

    (Jake) : You going to moving to the New York City , But What about me ? are you going to leave me Behind .
    (Albert) : Actually…….No .
    (Jake) : ?
    (Albert) Took out something from his jacket ( pocket ) . ( his jacket was in the couch )
    (Albert) : Here .
    (Jake) : What is this ?
    (Albert) : Just open it .
    (Jake) He open the envelope and he find inside the envelope two ticket to New York City .
    (Jake) : Ticket to New York City ?
    (Albert) : I wasn't planning to go alone .
    (Jake) : You Mean………
    (Albert) : You said You always dreamed to visit New York , I Know this is crazy But I Want you to come With me to New York .
    (Jake) : But I……………
    (Albert) : (Jake) , Come With me .
    (Jake) : Mr. (Albert)….. But I already tell you before is not easy for me .
    (Albert) : Is Okay as long I'm here with you .
    (Jake) : I…..I just want to think about this .
    (Albert) : Then just Take one with you if you change your mind , and I Must remind you , I will be at the airport on Saturday at 9:00 AM .
    (Albert) took the towel , he put it in Jake's Hair and he Drying him .
    (Albert) : You Clothes very Wet , you going to Get Cool , you should Take it off , I'll Brought for you some to wear it .
    (Jake) Didn't say anything ( His face just look Down ) .
    (Albert) : (Jake) ?
    (Jake) He look to (Albert) , They look at each other ,Then They Kissing , When were they kissing (Albert) taking off Jake's Clothes ( Jake's jacket and Shirt ) He put his hand inside Jake's Trousers .
    (Jake) : Nu…Hmm .
    He Touching Jake's Sensitive area (ochinchin) .
    ( Note : (ochinchin) is a child's world for '' penis'' )
    and He Thud (Jake) on the couch , They Kissing By Tongue and (Albert) Still Touching Jake's (ochinchin) Then He Take off his Shirt , He taking off Jake's Trousers and the Pants internal , He licking Jake's (ochinchin) and he put it inside his Mouth .
    ( like he is going to eat Jake's (ochinchin) )
    (Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , Slurp , glance , pant , pant and lick )
    (Jake) : MM!….AH!..AH!......NN!
    He Being Sweats so much from that .
    (Jake) : AAAAAH !
    ( Sppt )
    Jake's cum Splurt in Albert's Mouth ( Albert's Mouth full of Jake's cum ) ,(Jake) sits in the lap of (Albert) ( in couch ) and he licking Jake's Teat ( (Jake) Holding (Albert) ) ,
    ( licking , licking , Nibble , licking )
    (Jake) : HN...HN.....UN...UH.....AH… .
    ( lick and Bite Jake's Teat )
    (Jake) : AHH !
    (Albert) lifting (Jake) a little above , to put him in his (ochinchin) .
    (Jake) : AHHHHHHH !
    (Albert) : Move you self (Jake) .
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    (Jake) : AAAAH.....AH....HAA...HAA.....U..WA...
    Jake's cum spurt on Albert's Face , Then (Jake) Drop on (Albert) and (Albert) grab Jake's Head ( Kissing By Tongue ) . They overturn and (Albert) Put his (ochinchin) inside (Jake) again .
    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    (Jake) : HA... HA... AH!...AH..AAH !.... AH!... AH!... AH!...
    (Jake) His eyes Being Tears from the pain and he Holding (Albert) .
    He stopped for temporarily and he Kissing (Jake) ( Kissing By Tongue ) . And……..

    ( THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST , THRUST )
    (Jake) : AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH…..ALBERT ! AHHH…….
    ( It was a real sexual relationship )
    Then They fell asleep in the couch ,
    in 5:00 AM (Jake) he Wake up before (Albert) , He Get up and he wearing his clothes .Then He look to the Ticket on the Table and He didn't Decides to go with him yet , So He take the Ticket with him and he left Albert's House . after that (Albert) Wake up from his Sleep and he didn't find (Jake) . In a few days on Saturday (Albert) went to the airport ( Ready to moving to the New York City ) , (Albert) sitting and waiting for the media Issue the plane will be Ready to fly to the New York City , and he waiting for (Jake) before he ascends to the plane ,after that the media Issue said the plane is now Ready , so all the passenger must ride to the plane . But (Albert) didn't see (Jake) , he is not here yet , He ride to the plane , and He Take his seat , He look to the Window , Then The Captain of Flight said the plane will be ready to fly in Five minutes , and is too late (Jake) is not Coming ,
    (Albert) : ( is look like he's not coming ) .
    (?????) : Excuse me Is this seat reserved ?
    (Albert) : ?
    (Albert) he just look to the person who's speak to him and he surprising ( is (Jake) ) .
    (Albert) : (Jake) ! I thought you not coming .
    (Jake) : Well....That because I don't want to miss that to go to the New York .
    (He don't want to admit , The true is , he want to be with (Albert) )
    (Albert) Laughing so much .
    (Albert) : Ha Ha Ha .
    (Jake) : Hey ! What are you Laughing for ?
    (Albert) : Ha Ha Ha …..No …is nothing .
    The plane start to Flight , and Then The plane on the way to the New York City .after They arrived to the New York City , (Albert) took (Jake) to the trip ( To The Statue of Liberty ) in night , Then They went up to The Statue of Liberty's Head .
    (Jake) : Wow ! I can see The New York from here , It's beautiful and the New York's lighting is pretty at night .
    (Albert) : I'm glad that you like it .
    (Jake) he look to (Albert) and he smile .
    (Jake) : (Albert) .
    He look to (Jake) .
    (Jake) : Thanks you .
    Then they Kissing and Holding .
    ( They going to have sex in The Statue of Liberty's Head )
    (Jake) : I love you (Albert) .
    (Albert) : I love you too (Jake) .

    ( The End )
    Updated 11-22-2012 at 08:28 AM by Thecloudyday89
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    ( Unconcept Love )

    Part - 1 -


    This story begins With two lovers ( Jinnai and Yoshizawa ) They were together since they were kids , They live together long time ago after they finish the College , Yoshizawa always want to have Children , But He can't marry a woman Because he love Jinnai and he is a Gay ( Both Gay ) , So he occurred Idea That he don't have to get marry , he is going to Rent a woman , she take the vaccine to become pregnant by his Baby ( Yoshizawa's Sperm ) , Then They found the woman suitable , She take the vaccine and then she become pregnant , A fter 9 Month The Baby born ( Boy ) Yoshizawa's first child , Jinnai and Yoshizawa They They decide to call him Taki , A few Year Taki he become 6 year old and is about Time to go to School , Yoshizawa take his son to the school to registration of his son in a school , Taki going to school everyday , Yoshizawa Connects his son to the school every Morning and after the School Jinnai come to school and take Taki to the Home Everyday , The other Kids ask Taki ,
    Kids : is That Man is your Father ? ( Who is Connects him to the school )
    Taki : Yes .
    and Then after that They ask him agian .
    Kids : Who's That Man ? ( Take Taki to the Home )
    Taki : He is my Father .
    Kids : Your Father ???
    Taki : Yes , I have Two Fathers .
    Kids : ????????????????????????
    After That in the School In a drawing lesson , the Teacher ask the Children to draw and paint something about the Happy family .
    The Kids drawing and the Teacher Watching the Children's draw and Then she saw Taki 's picture .
    The Teacher : What this Taki ?
    Taki : is my dad kissing my another dad .
    The Teacher feel horrified , She take picture from him and Catch his Hand
    The Teacher : Taki Come with me Now .
    Taki : What ? What did I do?
    She take him to the Room's Director of the School , She talk to the Director and show her Taki 's picture . and Then The Director try to talk with Taki and ask him A few questions .
    Director : Taki Be Honestly , Did you really saw your father kissing your another father ?
    Taki : ummm......yes .
    Director : are they kissing by the Mouth ?
    Taki :.........yes .
    Director : is there another something they do than a kiss ?
    Taki remained silent .
    Director : is alright Taki , just tell me .
    Taki : ..........T........They doing something Strange in the Room in the Bed .
    Director : Did you saw them ?
    Taki : They Both Naked and Moving and my dad he is Issued Votes .
    Director knew it and she tell him to go back to the classroom , Then she talk with the Teacher .
    The Teacher : so is that mean they are Gay ?
    Director : I'm afraid that ...... yes they are .
    The Teacher : Then what we should do ? This may affect the future of the boy and his mind .
    Director : That is going to affect the Children in the School too .
    The Teacher : and should we talk to them ?
    Director : I'm going to call Mr.Yoshizawa .
    After that when she call him , he come to the School , he want to the Room's Director .
    Yoshizawa : What is it Director ? is Taki did something wrong ?
    Director : You better to look to this Taki 's picture .
    He look and .......
    Yoshizawa : uuuum....well ....Taki have Big Imagination .
    Director : Mr.Yoshizawa , I Know the truth , You should be worry about your son future , That all is going to affect to his mind Because of the Wrong thing you doing .
    After a long talk with the Director , he take Taki to the home and want to talk with Jinnai .
    Yoshizawa : Jinnai , we need to talk .
    Jinnai : What is it ?
    Yoshizawa : I was in the School and I talk with the Director , and ......... she know about us .
    Jinnai : So what if she know about us ?
    Yoshizawa : But is all about Taki Because that we living together long time ago and she said that Will affect the reputation of the school and Taki 's future .
    Jinnai : I Don't care what she say , that is not her Business .
    Yoshizawa : we should talk about our relationship .
    Jinnai : What do you mean by we should talk about our relationship ?
    Yoshizawa : well is about Taki and our relationship......
    Jinnai : are we talking about or our relationship ?
    Yoshizawa : is just ......
    Jinnai : You the one who want to have a son from the begins .
    and Then they star Fighting .
    Yoshizawa : Can you just Listen to me ?
    Jinnai : Listen to What ? you Want to Broke up our relationship Because of the Director what she said ?
    They still Fighting and Taki Hear them from his room .Then they stop Fighting and Taki Sleep in his bed , Jinnai Went to the Taki 's Room .
    Jinnai : Hey Taki , are you sleep ?
    Taki he look to him .
    Taki : did you Fight with my dad Because of me ?
    Jinnai : No , is not Because of you , we just have some problems , Men's problems .
    Taki : are you two stop Fighting ?
    Jinnai : Taki , you should not to be worry , We do this for your own good , Now go back to sleep .
    Taki : Okay , Goodnight Daddy .
    Jinnai : Goodnight son .
    He kiss him in Taki's Head and left the room .
    The Next Day , Taki didn't find Jinnai and he ask his father ( Yoshizawa ) .
    Taki : Dad , where is Daddy Jinnai ?
    Yoshizawa just told him the truth that They Broke up and Jinnai left the house and never come back and it is for doing what is good for Taki . Taki Crying , and he well never see his father Jinnai .


    (To Be Continued)
    Updated 01-06-2013 at 05:29 PM by Thecloudyday89
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