Critics! I need you!
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, 02-10-2011 at 11:35 AM (1998 Views)
For those of you who don't know, I am a writer. Usually I write stories for EoFF that mirror my ridiculous sense of humor, but I have a serious side. I recently thought up and wrote what I think to be an incredible story (It's even got a moral in it ).
That's where you, dear reader, come in. I need you to shatter my delusions of grandeur. I want you to read my story, now located in the Writer's Corner, and tell me everything wrong I did in it. I'll even link you here as I know most of you are lazy asses.
The Sea of Rage and the Hope
In all seriousness though, I know I have a lot of work to do before any of my writings are book-worthy but I feel like my usual viewers/readers are just patting my head anymore. I want some real critique so I don't have any misconceptions about my stories, I know my boy Wes will be on the ball with that. Basically I just want anyone who reads this to give me their honest opinion on it. Does the story stir any emotions in you? How well was it written? Did I repeat myself anywhere? Whatever you notice or feel when reading this, please, let me know. It would be greatly appreciated.