Freya
is an EoFF Hero and/or Heroine
 Master of the Fork
Cid's Knight

How long have you been on Scrib, by the way?

It's still really good to get this critique, though. I hope I just learn to be less shocked about it in the future

Lolol

"The character comes across as a bit chauvinistic and I came to despise him by the end and he really doesn't need to be like that"

Like, thanks, but didn't you think that maybe that was the whole point?


Sigh

Its harsh getting your first critique. There's one that's really nice and positive, one is balanced, and one is extremely critical, so I guess I just have to get used to it

Oh and look Kaidan is a human

Mhmm

Oh I get it

It's because he's not human, isn't it?

Specest

You just want the Mass Effect books for the provocative Garrus pictures

Posted my first story yay~

It't not the contest thing yet, but I don't think I'll have any problem building up enough karma for that one. I just wanted my new member spotlight to be of something I'm confident in.

Hmm... Okay, that's good to know. It's also the first in a trilogy, so I can always carry over content to later books

Word, yo.

Okay. Will something bad happen if I go beyond that