How long have you been on Scrib, by the way?
It's still really good to get this critique, though. I hope I just learn to be less shocked about it in the future
Lolol "The character comes across as a bit chauvinistic and I came to despise him by the end and he really doesn't need to be like that" Like, thanks, but didn't you think that maybe that was the whole point? Sigh Its harsh getting your first critique. There's one that's really nice and positive, one is balanced, and one is extremely critical, so I guess I just have to get used to it
Oh and look Kaidan is a human Mhmm
Oh I get it It's because he's not human, isn't it? Specest
You just want the Mass Effect books for the provocative Garrus pictures
Posted my first story yay~ It't not the contest thing yet, but I don't think I'll have any problem building up enough karma for that one. I just wanted my new member spotlight to be of something I'm confident in.
Hmm... Okay, that's good to know. It's also the first in a trilogy, so I can always carry over content to later books
Word, yo.
Okay. Will something bad happen if I go beyond that
Peach + Bubbles = ♥♥♥
I'm selling these fine leather jackets
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Tidus Fantasy X
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Writing all these news bits has me excited again. I just hope it isn't another 8 years.