Freya
is an EoFF Hero and/or Heroine
 Master of the Fork
Cid's Knight

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In his thread. I leave the rest in our senior editors hands

I missed my chance as well. Work was draining because one of the head honchos of the company is coming in for the next few days so we had to work overtime to get everything up to par. I'll do better today.

Glad I could help. Love cyberpunk stuff like this.

Actually it could be pretty simple. The nanobots are more powerful than first thought. They can either temporary leave his body and disrupt surveillance with a limited magnetic field, or he simply sends out a few to do so but they run out of juice, not like people will see them because they're nanosize. The nanonbots can eat away and cauterize the wounds of victims to such a small degree that it's difficult to detect unless you know what you are looking for. Play with the tech is what I'm saying.

So are you trying to figure out how the murderer is killing people?

So do you have an ending in mind?

Don't you hate that? I think that's why I stopped doing that because I would start revising before I was even done. I usually read just the last few paragraphs to get back into the mood.

Thank you! What about your story, any specific goals?

I'm kind of winging it. My chapters are short but they tend to stick to a mood so it works out. I'm about 40k with the rewrite at the moment and still have a long way to go. I'm probably 1/5th of the way through the whole story and frankly that number is murky because only half of the story is pretty much set in stone while the second half isn't o neatly planned out so that number can balloon up.

No, you don't.

Oh, by the way, it was I who did the Quina's Cook-off contest a few years ago. Pumpkin and... Chionos I think, were the food judges. I hosted the contest though.

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