Madame Adequate
is an EoFF Monstrosity
absolutely haram
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Did you hear! A vile card game that clearly exists SOLELY so the colonists can mock the Monarchy! http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/arti...ough-dead.html

I have very few complaints, but one is most definitely that I am left wanting more. I think you did an excellent job of crafting a universe that felt populated and complex; civilisations are included that don't necessarily "feature" which is potentially a criticism in ordinary fiction but ultimately serves to make your work feel more realistic. I mean, we live day-to-day with, I dunno, Azerbaijan existing but not necessarily interacting with it. So the fact that the Republic exists, and that it is referenced, but not interacted with, leaves scope for, y'know, sequels. But having non-primary players also makes it a little more, ugh, how am I trying to say this? Basically it's not a case of "oh it was obviously x because they're the only other y left." That the League of Four was involved in the war with the Vanorre is extremely interesting and wasn't obvious just because they hadn't been focused on yet.

Anyway I'm just rambling so I will say thank you for an enjoyable and also incredibly unusual but still thoroughly intriguing piece of fiction. I am glad it has not come to pass just yet though; that Ukraine-Russia business is getting me edgy still.

I dunno if my review ever stuck on Amazon but regardless I never had a chance to make this comment: The several pages of references at the end created this bittersweet effect of reminding me all the events I'd read about throughout. Obviously footnotes were part of the stylistic approach but I feel like they had an unintended but extremely appreciated effect. When I saw polling results I could remember the President who won that election and so on. It truly was a unique and enjoyable experience.

Thanky ~

That's oki. Things are okay here too. I feel like going out but it's ridiculously hot, though :/

What's up on your side of the ocean?

Hello, Farage!