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For a new game, that's quite impressive.

You sure do know your stuff about FF12.

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They want me to strip? This is so naughty naughty.

Tidus crawled out of my TV last night and strangle me.

Eeek, you found my racy fanfic with Beclem and Rikku :surprised

Thanks for the note guys and girls!

You are welcome.

oops... well I guess theres always the option of becoming a lesbian.:rolleyes2 Sure just tell me when your boy is old enough... feel like such a pedophile saying that.

Ok here goes my first fanfic.. Be gentle on it

The Premisse
I started thinking why Beclem - the Auroch's drill sargent from the Gunner's Gauntlet chalenge (on Chapter 2 FFX-2) was such a pain in the arse, and what could happen if one of the 3 Gullwings got together with him. Couldn't be Yuna, as she loves Tidus. Paine is too dark and has the same moodiness as Beclem. Bo-ring! Besides it seems she has a thing for Nooj and he for her.. That left Rikku, peppy and sassy. Bingo! Lots of sparks, as the two are each other's opposite. And a jealous Brother blubbering his problems at barkeep's would be funny!

I will post just some pieces of the first chapter here - corresponds to chapter 2 in the game -, as it is a bit spicy (think Danielle Steel romance). If you all like I might "clean it up" and post more... But it is getting big, 71 pages so far, as I'm having lots of fun imagining what is behind each [art of the game... Like what would Rikku, Yuna and Paine give Lulu in a baby shower, what did the girls thought as they creamed the Youth League warriors in chapter 5 (the YL tournament)... Note: The dialogs of the scenes that are in the game are not exactly the ones from the game, my laptop is on the fritz and my PS2 is far away from my PC so I had to resort to my (weak) memory. They should be pretty close to the original meaning

Chapter 2 of FFX-2, chapter 1 of "Rikku and Beclem"
The Youth League has just sent Drill Sargent Beclem to Besaid, to put the Besaid Aurochs into the proper shape to be YL warriors. On their current visit to Besaid, Yuna, Rikku and Paine meet the Aurochs panting and sweating while Beclem bellows at them and calls them slackers.

Rikku to the rescue
Fiercely loyal and protective, Rikku walks over to Beclem and asks why is he giving her friends such a hard time. Rude and condescending, Beclem says he doesn't expect her - a summoner's pet - to understand the ways of the warrior.
- "Hey! Who do you think has defeated Sin, Bubba ?" Rikku cries in outraged disgust.
- "The Aeons. They are gone now, and so should the summoners and their self important guardians be" scorns Beclem
- "Take it back you little weasel!" yells Rikku.
- "If you want to prove guardians and summoners are worthy of respect in this new age, you have to beat my challenge to the Aurochs" Beclem yells back
- "Bring it on, buster!" cries Rikku
- "Beat my top score at the Gunner's Gauntlet game and I will take it back" challenges Beclem
- "You are on!" say Yuna, Rikku and Paine together.

Like many fooled by Yuna's small frame and gentle demeanor, Beclem soon gets his words handed back to him on a platter: Yuna and the team beat his score handily with more than 1,000 points each to his 510 record. Not being one to admit defeat, and thinking they cheated somehow Beclem remains defiant:
- "You beat the score so I take back my words as agreed but I still see no use for summoners and their guardians in the new Spira", he says.
- "I will not stand here and have you disrespect my friends. I beat Sin with the help of my loyal friends and the memory of their battles and their courage will never fade" answers Yuna
- "Must your kind always prattle on about your precious memories ? That was then, this is now" Beclem quips.
- "Can I hurt him Yuna ?" asks Rikku, mad as hell
- "No, Rikku, please, enough of this silly fighting! He is just trying to get under your skin. Just ignore him " pleads Yuna.
- "Oh, poopie!" Rikku complains
- "C'mon, let us see how Lulu and Wakka are doing. Leave this idiot behind." says Paine
- "Cowards and slackers, just as I figured" murmurs Beclem
- "What ?!?!" yells Rikku, but then gets dragged away from him by Yuna and Paine.

By nighttime Rikku is enjoying Wakka's antics as worried father to be and trying to calm him down when Beclem shows up, as annoying as always.
- "Too bad your master took you away today. I would have enjoyed teaching you how a warrior fights!" challenges him.
- "Grrr…. ", fumes Rikku
- "Aw, the summoners lapdog is growling, how cute! Time for Yuna to pull the leash." teased Beclem
- "You, me, behind the temple. Time to teach you some respect!" fumes Rikku
- "I'd like to see you try" challenges Beclem
- " NOW!" yells Rikku and starts heading towards the temple fuming.

Beclem followed her with a smug smile in his face, thinking to himself, "We shall see who teaches whom.."

Battle ?
Alone behind the temple Beclem and Rikku eye each other wearily by the moonlight. Rikku asks Beclem if he wants her to take of her Garment Grid to make this a more even fight.
- "Use whatever hocus-pocus you want, it won't change the outcome", he boasts.
- "You asked for it" says Rikku pulling her Dark Knight dressphere, one of her strongest magical suits. "If he wants a lesson he will have one" she grumbles
- "What ? " asks Beclem and does a double take. Rikku's clothes have magically changed from her skimpy shorts and shirt to a skin tight black leather suit. Oddly enough in spite of it covering her entire body, the suit makes Beclem's pulse race
- "If you are trying to get me distracted it doesn't work" Beclem said. Ha! The girl had a thing coming if she thought that he would be disarmed by that old trick. He was a skilled warrior not a lovelorn kid!
- "Shut up and fight" Rikku yells
- "As you wish" answers Beclem and throws a darkness grenade at Rikku.
- "Pffft! I said fight, not tickle me." Rikku teases as her dark proof dressphere easily nullifies the attack. She steps closer and thrusts her sword at his side.
- "You are the one who should stop tickling me" Beclem answers as he skillfully avoids the attack and throws an L-Bomb at her
- "Hah! You think this puny thing will even scratch my armor ?" laughs Rikku and strikes Beclem on the leg with the flat side of her sword, trying to avoid cutting him with it's sharp edges.

Beclem twists around and grabs her sword fearlessly. Managing not to get cut he pulls it down trying to get her off balance. Rikku thrusts herself in the same direction, using his impulse against him, dropping him to the ground and falling on top of him. Beclem feels Rikku's lithe athletic body pressing against him. All of a sudden his concentration falters and Beclem almost lets himself get pinned down, his body ignoring the battle and reacting to the presence of the beautiful woman. What a tricky little minx! Beclem tries to roll away from under her. Again Rikku rolls in the same direction, causing Beclem to end on top of her, grinning fiercely. Beclem looks at Rikku's golden hair, floating wildly about her face, shining in the moonlight. Out of impulse he pulls Rikku closer and kisses her roughly. Now who is distracting who ? Beclem thought to himself smugly

To Beclem's surprise his plan works too well: Rikku seems to melt under his kisses forgets the battle and kisses him back hungrily. Before he can get a hold of himself Beclem starts caressing her back, her neck, her hair… Only to get even more passionate caresses from Rikku. In a surge of lust and need they forget themselves and ... < parental control block >

They stand silently looking at the moon, listening to each other's breathing. After a long interval Rikku is unable to keep her silence any longer.
- "Woah! What happened here just now ?" she muses out loud
- "Hmm.. I suppose it is my fault. I tried to distract you as you did to me with your leather suit… " said Beclem
- "Huh ? Oh, that is just my magical armor. Didn't I ask you if you wanted me to take it off to make it a fair fight ? You said I should use it!" said Rikku
- "Yeah, but you didn't mention how good you would look in it.." Beclem said smiling
- "Ahhh, So you thought I was trying to use my womanly charms, did you ? That wasn't it. THIS is it!" Rikku said pulling him closer ...

Beclem tried to pull back but he was only able to muster a protest.
- "Damn it! Why did you have to be so beautiful ?" Beclem sighed
- "Huh ?"
- "We were supposed to hate each other's guts" he says
- "Fat chance after tonight" Rikku answered and kisses his neck ..
- "Two can play this game you know ?" Beclem says as he starts kissing her hungrily

...

The morning after
Awakened by the sun, Rikku finds herself alone behind the temple...

Lunch at Lulu's was delicious, much better than the usual barkeep's fare they had at the spaceship. Yuna and the girls told Wakka and Lulu their plan to sneak up on Leblanc's chateau as soon as they pilfered some syndicate uniforms. The nerve of that thief to swipe a sphere from the Celsius!!! Motherhood suited Lulu well: Smiling and jovial Lulu was a far cry from the short fused sermon granting guardian she had been in Yuna's pilgrimage...

Yuna closed her eyes and just listened to the excited voices around her. Besaid would always be her home. This is where she settled in after her father died fighting Sin when she was merely 7, this was the place he had chosen for her to grow up. Ever since Kimahri brought her to Besaid all those years ago she had had Lulu and Wakka beside her. Despite being born in Bevelle, and currently being traveling all around Spira on the Celsius, this is where her home was. In Besaid the dull ache that was Tidus absence didn't bother her as much. Unlike the rest of Spira, which they crossed together, here she had many other happy memories that didn't include him. Still, the sight of a blitzball ball always made her heart race, regardless of where she was, and Wakka had his, and the Tournament Trophy he and Tidus conquered hanging on the wall behind her. Tidus and Wakka were so proud of that trophy!
...
Alone with her tears Yuna stood, looking at the sun reflected in the blue waters of the calm bay behind Besaid's temple. There was no faith hymn anymore. It made the absence of her beloved Aeons and her friends Kimahri, Auron and Tidus even more obvious. Tidus absence was like an open chest wound by now, the pain spreading and making her body feel numb and cold. She was shivering under the high noon sun. Once more she thought of Kimahri and the memories of her father, her mother, Chappu, Luzu and all her other friends lost to Sin came rushing back...

Rikku was goofing off with Wakka showing him Yuna's / Lenne's dance moves while Paine and Lulu discussed the latest information the Gullwings had gathered on Vegnagun and the Tidus look alike .Yuna hoped Paine was not getting Lulu worried, she liked this new confident and serene Lulu so much more than her old gloomy and angry, bitingly ironic Lulu! And that's when it hit her - the reason for Beclem's cold anger - he must have lost someone near and dear to Sin, just as Lulu had lost Chappu, a month after their engagement. Well, she had done her best and lost someone dear to Sin too, so why wouldn't he stop picking on her! Yuna thought and with a deep sigh entered the hut.
- "What are you girls talking about ?" Yuna asked Lulu
- "Paine has been telling me about the latest sphere you found, the one you guys gave to the Youth League." answered Lulu
- "Oh that. That weapon has been lost for more than a thousand years" Yuna said, hoping to downplay Vegnagun to Lulu.
- "Yeah, I know. Still, it is a bit troubling… " answered Lulu
- "Nothing to worry about Mom. The Gullwings are on the job!" Rikku pitched in
- "That's what I'm afraid of.." answered Lulu with a smile.
- "Hey! Watch it buster, don't go all Beclem on us!" answered Rikku, felling flushed at her own mention of Beclem.
- "That grouch has been bothering you girls too ?" asked Wakka
- "No, no, no.. Quite the opposite" Lulu answered
- "Beclem is being nice to someone ? Now that's a surprise!" Wakka said
- "Well, not quite all of us" Yuna added and at that Rikku busted out of the tent in a hurry before the teasing started.
...
Rikku wasn't sure she wanted to see Beclem one more time before getting back to the ship. He was a rude, arrogant, offensive pain in the neck. But ohhh so hot! His lean muscular body so agile and strong.. He had an amazing endurance too. Amazing but not invincible.. yesterday she had managed to make him beg for mercy Rikku though slyly ... She reached the beach, her heart pounding. Beclem was bellowing at the Aurochs, calling them as unfit and slow as shoopufs but went silent as soon as he saw her.
- "15 minutes pause before the next drill" he told the Aurochs and headed towards Rikku with a stern face, which softened as he got closer.
- "I guess this is goodbye then" he said looking at her with a mix of pain and raw need that made her knees weak
- "Is it ? Is this what you want ? To say goodbye to what happened yesterday ?" Rikku asked very softly, her face full of pain at their parting
- "No." Beclem finally said after a long pause and looked at her, his eyes burning
...

I'm gonna be your very own usernoter person who post in here a lot becuase your to cool of a peron.... btw your kid in the pic.... is so freakin adorable. I fall inlove with him every time.... you know what..... I'm gonna marry your kid some day! age don't have a love aiight.:rolleyes2 Have a nice day!