Fynn
is an EoFF Hero and/or Heroine
Radical Dreamer

Oh thanks, I appreciate that! All of it, really . I will send you a summary of my story so you can understand a bit more about my world and characters and can give some feedback. Feel free to share that with your wife as well!

I look forward to hearing your bios. And I think a POV from Chuck would be a great idea! It helps you see how they think and separates them as individuals outside of the couple.

Thanks

It is . he is a better writer than he thinks.

Are you working on a particular story now, or just a few different ones with the writing prompts? You said you'll probably use more of your latest prompt, are you planning on making a whole story with them?

If you are, or are writing a different story, you should PM me a summary and some character bios. We might be able to help each other brainstorm too

I told him that, but he doesn't want to!

Don't worry, I know how you feel :P. There's a blossoming romance between Dylan and Nina in my story that I never intended and I think they're adorable. I don't know yet if it will become something more.

Sharky is mostly my editor. I type stuff up and he corrects a lot of my grammar/spelling/typos and tells me where I should add stuff or if something feels out of place. This is one of only two scenes he's actually helped write, so I know he's very nervous about how it will be received. I think he's a really good writer. We've found that we compliment each other because I have a lot of creative ideas, and characters and such and he has a hard time coming up with all of that, but he's good at correcting and flushing out already created scenes.

I'm glad you wife helps you brainstorm . That's always fun. Although I do get embarrassed discussing my ideas sometimes :P

I read your feedback, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it .

I did really like your story. I didn't want to come off like I didn't. but I know you appreciate a good bit of constructive criticism focusing on what can be improved, as opposed to what is already good. Now that I know the situation between the two more, it makes more sense. I feel like a lot of the times in stories you have a whirlwind romance out of nowhere that doesn't always make sense. When you start something that intensely, there are almost always problems because you haven't taken the time to get to know the person on a deeper level. So I'm glad you'll be exploring that part, that makes it much more unique and interesting in my opinion.

As far as my scene, sharky and I wrote it together, so he was nervous about me posting it. He came up with the fighting terms and explained a few things and I took it and added the personality of the characters and the setting and such. He'll be happy to know it was so well received

Also, http://home.eyesonff.com/final-fanta...-me-part1.html

I'm reading it now.

Thank you! And that would be great . I always feel like talking to people about my story but I feel like a lamo. It's like unless I get published I just feel like I'm talking about my imaginary world xD

Well I'm glad you found such good things