Fynn
is an EoFF Hero and/or Heroine
Radical Dreamer

Hey man! Sorry I haven't been able to comment much outside the thread, but thanks for the picture! It looks really good! (Although the always vain Frix would fuss at you for having her feathers out of place. :P ) I'm surprised a few people seem to like her, she's pretty bossy. Thanks again for all your hard work!

Anyway, Victor is a good character as well. My character will be curious as to why he tries so hard to focus on his human side. You and Daphnee should have an interesting dynamic too. Most of the time I find myself liking the interaction between characters more than the individual characters on their own, and Victor should be fun to watch.

Well, given that it is in her hair, I wasn't expecting to really make it out in a sea of pencil markings

I'm sure I'll see it when it has been colored. Thanks Patryk for this, you are so amazing!

You can, but I'm aware I never told you the colouration! I'm sorry, I've been quite busy the last two days and the internet has been playing up. Eep.

Did you look at the 'inspiration' picture now that the IMG tags were put in? That sort of hair color (dirty blonde), and that sort of average skin tone (not like, seriously untanned/pale, if you see what I mean). She has green eyes.

As for the color of her tunic, as drab and dreary as possible. It IS a maid-esque outfit. Also, Jinx said she would LOVE for her to have like a maid's bonnet style hat on her. If it isn't already too late, could you add that to her design? Maybe not a frilly maid bonnet, that would look too dainty in a rough Seaport. Maybe like a scarf bonnet style, if you kinda know what I mean? Cinderella style? Thanks Patryk, you're the best!

Sorry, I'm not really great at explanations

Eyebrows should be dark brown or black, I think.

He's from the desert, so his skin should also be dark in colour.

Clean-shaven, I think. Like the top of his head.

What colours do you mean?

I'm not very good at describing faces, really.

As I said, he's bald and in his late thirties.

His eyes are yellow.

He should look quite cheerful, with laughter lines around his mouth and eyes.

Beyond that, you can do whatever you like.

I figured, so I didn't bother editing it in. BUT it would be good to bring it up at some point! Doesn't have to be in your post if you don't want though!

Sure, no problem! Have her thank him for the knife in the bar because I forgot to mention that when they ran off together You don't have to but if you want to add something, that would be good!

New character tournament is up

Thanks, you're doing a great job