Fynn
is an EoFF Hero and/or Heroine
Radical Dreamer

Yeah you hve a really interesting story and I definitely would be interested to read more

They are a good couple. And I actually think its great that you have a gay couple just portrayed as a couple. A lot of stories involving a couple like that make it the center focus and a big deal, so its nice to see a setting where its just normal. If that makes sense.

I have a few couple. Alex and Chaz are kind of my "stable" couple. They're together from before the story and they'll be together after. They don't have that traditional falling in love story, because it's already happened. Nathan was with Erica at the beginning, but he ends up with Julia in what is the more classic love tale. You saw the prompt where Julia has to marry someone else for political reasons. Jeffrey's story is a bit more complicated. He thinks his fiancee has died and just as he starts moving on and might be falling for Sara, his fiancee comes back, leaving him with quite a struggle with his feelings and leaving Sara pretty frustrated and angry. Sara also had a relationship with Nathan's brother pre-story, but she's moved on whereas he hasn't. Julia's sister has a lover, but it isn't really a focal point at all and is barely mentioned. More of a background thing. Now Dylan seems to be developing something with Nina, but I'm not sure how far that will go yet, because I hadn't anticipated they're being anything more than friends

I think its good enough to continue. You really did write very good characters and it was a very intriguing story. It made me want to read more!

I've never actually written a short. And I think I'm so in love wit my characters because I've spent 18 years developing them and the story and changing them, modifying them, adding or removing thing, so it's basically what I want it to be now. I am ending up giving Nina a bigger role than anticipated though. I like her more than I thought and she's ending up being a romantic interest.

Did you know that in my head back in like, 98, Alex used to be a girl named Crystal who has blonde hair, except for the tips which were black, and she wore like a sparkly blue dress? Oh 6 year old shion :P.

And thanks for the compliments . It's always encouraging to see progress, so I am glad I've been improving.

Sure, no problem! Thanks for following my drawings!

Yaaaay congrats!

I don't like the anime as much, but I really like the manga. It's basically about some people who turn in to stuff with cold water and turn back with hot water. Like Ranma turns in to a girl, his dad in to a Panda, etc. It's also a love story. Ranma's father basically promised him to 2 different women and he ended up engaged to another by an amusing series of events, so he has 3 finacees, and one of them is the classic neither of them can admit their feelings for one another. Another of his finacees turns in to a cat and he's afraid of cats, so that can be pretty funny, too.

I think there's a few sites that will let you read it for free if you're ever interested.

Have you ever read the Ranma 1/2 manga?

Thanks! I had the pictures in front of me which helped a lot, I don't think it would have turned out so great if I didn't. As for Lent, I'm going without many luxuries right now since I'm pretty much poor (seriously, we live below the poverty level) so I'm hoping the Lord will understand if I don't give up too much more.

I can see how the Ukraine thing could be concerning :/. Hopefully things don't escalate too much.

I do not actually celebrate Ash Wednesday (although I probably should :P) but by coincidence I have not eaten all day.

Also, posted up some new drawings. I tried a face picture like you suggested and the results were so-so.

I'm sure it will