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    It is . he is a better writer than he thinks.

    Are you working on a particular story now, or just a few different ones with the writing prompts? You said you'll probably use more of your latest prompt, are you planning on making a whole story with them?

    If you are, or are writing a different story, you should PM me a summary and some character bios. We might be able to help each other brainstorm too
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    I told him that, but he doesn't want to!
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    Don't worry, I know how you feel :P. There's a blossoming romance between Dylan and Nina in my story that I never intended and I think they're adorable. I don't know yet if it will become something more.

    Sharky is mostly my editor. I type stuff up and he corrects a lot of my grammar/spelling/typos and tells me where I should add stuff or if something feels out of place. This is one of only two scenes he's actually helped write, so I know he's very nervous about how it will be received. I think he's a really good writer. We've found that we compliment each other because I have a lot of creative ideas, and characters and such and he has a hard time coming up with all of that, but he's good at correcting and flushing out already created scenes.

    I'm glad you wife helps you brainstorm . That's always fun. Although I do get embarrassed discussing my ideas sometimes :P
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    I read your feedback, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it .

    I did really like your story. I didn't want to come off like I didn't. but I know you appreciate a good bit of constructive criticism focusing on what can be improved, as opposed to what is already good. Now that I know the situation between the two more, it makes more sense. I feel like a lot of the times in stories you have a whirlwind romance out of nowhere that doesn't always make sense. When you start something that intensely, there are almost always problems because you haven't taken the time to get to know the person on a deeper level. So I'm glad you'll be exploring that part, that makes it much more unique and interesting in my opinion.

    As far as my scene, sharky and I wrote it together, so he was nervous about me posting it. He came up with the fighting terms and explained a few things and I took it and added the personality of the characters and the setting and such. He'll be happy to know it was so well received
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    I'm reading it now.
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    Thank you! And that would be great . I always feel like talking to people about my story but I feel like a lamo. It's like unless I get published I just feel like I'm talking about my imaginary world xD
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    Well I'm glad you found such good things
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    Eh, up and down I guess. Not too bad. I feel like people can't just let something positive be positive sometimes.

    How are you?
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Part of your world

by Fynn on 06-06-2017 at 04:37 PM
So there's this nagging issue I've had for quite some time now. It's a pretty abstract issue but one I think is pretty interesting and perhaps even important to share nonetheless. For many reasons, it has only become more pronounced recently.

As some of you may know, I want to be a writer. I try to do as much writing as I can. I even do writing for a living, though as an SEO copywriter, it's not exactly that I have an opportunity to spread my creative wings as part of what keeps giving

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On FFVII (part of my Fmarathon rant)

by Fynn on 11-23-2016 at 11:16 AM
Decided this is worthy of being a blog-post, since it turned out to be a much bigger rant than I expected and I'm not sure the marathon's audience is really there for that kind of stuff

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Welp, got all the way to the Shinra building. I was thinking of barging in for once, but it just feels so stupid. I just had to take the stairs again. What sane person would just charge in, guns blazing, when there's a clearly safer, less-disruptive option?

So far, I can say that

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Frustrations of the writerly sort

by Fynn on 07-01-2016 at 11:13 AM
So there's this thing I've been struggling for quite some time. I don't want to call it a "writer's block" because it kind of seems like an excuse for being lazy. And it usually doesn't last long. This is something that's been eating at me for a long time.

I just kinda feel that I can't write anymore.

I mean, I still write articles for the site sometimes and I write other texts at my work, but it seems like, creatively, I've dried up. I'll come up with ideas

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On story expectations

by Fynn on 03-30-2016 at 11:57 AM
So this is kind of a general discussion, but the general rant I have is based on three popular 3DS RPGs: Bravely Default, Fire Emblem: Awakening, and Shin Megami Tensei IV. Sorry if this is chaotic, as I'm just writing this as it comes into my mind. Also, spoilers from the three games abound.

All of those games were very well received, though for different reasons. SMT is kind of here to serve as a neutral ground, as the evaluation of its story is pretty divided, whereas the consensus

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Character Appreciation: Junpei Iori

by Fynn on 03-30-2016 at 10:37 AM
This is in no way an idea I stole from Pumpkin, no siree.

Junpei Iori is a character from the Persona franchise. He first appears in Persona 3 and all of its subsequent releases as a playable party member. He becomes a social link character as well in the female path of Persona 3 Portable, though he isn't date-able. He is also playable in

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